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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

this Awosm Great writtinggg 👏👏👏👏 fab 👏👏

but baut emotional thi yaar😭😭
update soon 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
loved both the versions bt i want Rey n Kriya to be one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
loved both the versions bt i want Rey n Kriya to be one..loved both the versions bt i want Rey n Kriya to be one.. pls...update the last part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
all parts r just superb
loved it 👍🏼
update soon nd plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Wers d update dear????


Plz plz plz do update soon... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
heya...
i read all parts in one go..
n i loved it..
its awsum..
i loved both the version..
do update soon..
n pm me plzz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Woah read the whole SS now

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

b/w dresses u shared in all updates weren't visible

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Imp: First of all I'm really sorry for the delay...I've written this long time ago but wasn't able to post it...Thank soo much for all the likes & comments...I don't know how many of you remember my ss: moving on...I've decided to continue it in one or two shot...I try to post it soon...This part is dedicated to all KR fans...
Last Part

Kriyaansh Version:-

Few days later...

Today was Kriya's wedding...It was held in an ancient church...At 8'clock everyone arrived ...Kriya's dad walked down the aisle with Kriya...The priest read out their vows & before they could repeat it, they heard a voice...

"RK"
Everyone turned & saw a girl standing...RK Looked at her in shock.

"Madhu"
"RK, I want to talk to you."
RK looked at Kriya & she nodded...RK came to Madhu...

"What do you want?" asked RK
"RK, I'm sorry plzzz forgive me. I know what I did was wrong no it was a crime. I don't know what happened to me. After I left you I wasn't happy. I thought if I take my revenge I'll be relief but in process I didn't realise that I have fell in love with you. Plzzz forgive me plzzz." Said Madhu
"It's too late" whispered RK

Kriya came towards RK & said. "I want to talk to you alone."
"OK"

Kriya & RK came outside the church.
"Do you love her?" asked Kriya
"No" replied RK
"Are you sure?"
"I don't know" said RK
"Close your eyes"

RK closes his eyes.
"Whose face do you see?"
"Madhu"

RK opens his eyes & look at Kriya.
"But Kriya"
"I know you are worried about me but don't be. I'll be fine. I know how it feels to lose someone you love & I don't want you to feel that again." Said Kriya

Kriya & RK came inside the church & RK hugged Madhu.
"I love you Madhu"
"I love you too RK"
"Ahem ahem"
"I'm sorry Kriya"
"It's ok. But I'm warning you, if you broke RK's heart I'll break your bones & if you hurt him you will wish you were never born."
"I won't"

Madhu & Kriya hug each other.

Rey come towards Kriya & said. "I know I have hurt you a lot. I'm an idiot, stupid. I know I don't deserve you. You sacrificed everything for your friends & I didn't even try to find you. But I only loved you. I swear I didn't love t---. I was only attracted towards her because she behaved like you. I know I don't deserve your forgiveness but plzzz forgive me. I really love you."

Kriya slaps him.
"You are mine. How dare you think about another girl. You belong to me. If you ever think about any other girl, I'll kill you."

Kriya hugged Rey.
"I love you Rey"
"I love you too"

RK come towards Rey & said. "If you hurt her I'll break your bone in so many pieces that no doctor will be able to treat you."
"I won't"
RK & Rey hug each other.

"Kriya, I'm really sorry. I know I don't deserve your forgiveness but plzzz forgive me. I'm the worst best friend ever" said Swayam.
"Don't you dare say a word against my best friend."

Swayam looked at Kriya with tears. Kriya hugged him tightly.
"I missed you so much Swayam"
"I missed you too"

Others also apologise & Kriya forgive them.

Fews months later...
Kriyaansh, Rk-madhu got married & later other couples also got married & all lived happily ever after...
--------------------------------THE END---------------------------------

Scroll down for RK & Kriya version...
Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Last part

RK & Kriya Version:-

Few days later...

RK & Kriya's wedding...
After few hours Kriya got ready & her dad came to her room.

Kriya's Dress


Kriya's POV

I heard piano playing downstairs. I began hyperventilating.
"Easy, Kriya," dad said. He turned to Kiya & Panchi nervously. "She looks a little sick. Do you think she's going to make it?"
"She'd better."

Kiya stood right in front of me & gripped my wrists in her hard hands.
"Focus, Kriya. RK is waiting for you down there."

I took a deep breath, willing myself into composure.

"It's our turn," Kiya & Panchi said. "Count to five and follow us."

"Don't let me fall, Dad," I whispered. Dad pulled my hand through his arm and then grasped it tightly.

One step at a time, I told myself as we began to descend to the slow tempo of the march. I didn't lift my eyes until my feet were safely on the flat ground.

As soon as my feet were past the treacherous stairs, I was looked at RK for him. All I really saw was his's face, it filled my vision and overwhelmed my mind. And then, as he met my awed gaze, he broke into a breathtaking smile of exultation.

Suddenly, it was only the pressure of dad's hand on mine that kept me from sprinting headlong down the aisle.

The march was too slow as I struggled to pace my steps to its rhythm. Mercifully, the aisle was very short. And then, at last, at last, I was there. RK held out his hand. Dad took my hand and, in a symbol as old as the world, placed it in RK's.

Our vows were the simple, traditional words that had been spoken a million times.

In that moment, as the minister said his part, my world, which had been upside down for so long now, seemed to settle into its proper position. I saw just how silly I'd been for fearing this. I looked into RK's eyes and
I knew nothing else mattered but that I could stay with him. I didn't realize I was crying until it was time to say the binding words.

"I do," I managed to choke out in a nearly unintelligible whisper, blinking my eyes clear so I could see his face.
"I do," he vowed.

Then we were declared as husband and wife. I tried to comprehend, through the film of tears blinding me, the surreal fact that this amazing person was mine. He bent his head toward mine, and I stretched up on the tips of my toes, throwing my arms--bouquet and all--around his neck.
He kissed me tenderly, adoringly; I forgot the crowd, the place, the time, the reason. He began the kiss, and he had to end it; I clung to him, ignoring the titters and the throat-clearing in the audience. Finally, his hands restrained my face and he pulled back--too soon--to look at me. On the surface his sudden smile was amused, almost a smirk.

The crowd erupted into applause, and he turned our bodies to face our friends and family. I couldn't look away from his face to see them.

I first hugged dad, then Kiya ,Panchi,RV & KD.

End of POV

After a while RK & Kriya were standing alone, when lousians came. RK excused himself to meet other guest.

"Kriya, I'm really sorry. I know I don't deserve your forgiveness but plzzz forgive me. I'm the worst best friend ever" said Swayam.
"Don't you dare say a word against my best friend."

Swayam looked at Kriya with tears. Kriya hugged him tightly.
"I missed you so much Swayam"
"I missed you too"

Others also apologise & Kriya forgive them.

"I'm sorry, I---"
But Kriya cut Rey & said. "It's ok. It wasn't your fault. Maybe we weren't meant to be. But we can be friends right. So, friends & forward her hand.

Rey looked at her & then at her hand, took it & said. "Friends"

Rey said while placing a stone at his heart. But he knew it was time to let her go. It was time to move on.

Lousians left, RK came back & hugged Kriya.
"I love you"
"I love you too"
-----------------------------------THE END------------------------------
Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow..awsum..
loved it..
both the parts were nyc..
thnxx fr PM..

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