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..MorningStar..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I am following This Story! 👍🏼

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Niranjana R

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: rockprincess123
Hey honey, Noor here :))
I am ever so sorry for not commenting on the last couple of updates but I was real busy with exams so first and foremost a BIGGG APOLOGY!!

And second of all, I just want to say how impressed I am with the way this story is flowing! I remember reading your character sketches!! This story really is something raw and unique, mostly because of the way that the relationship between "pari" (such a cute nickname!) and "chote" (CHOTE.. <3 ) is shown. 15 years of separation?!? Dear Lord..

I sense something is fishy over with Khushi's dad and either Arnav or his family.. am I right?? I didn't like his character, I got evil vibes from him.. (I mean that in the nicest way possible, loool :) ).

I love La's character. So outgoing and chirpy, just like Khushi except more aggressive and not as patient.

Lavanya has just unknowingly created a big, futuristic love triangle for herself, Arnav and Khushi!! What was she thinking, silly girl!!! Now she is going to end up falling in love with Arnav!!! Ergh, why damn it?!?!

Great job dear, really was a pleasure to read, looking forward to more :) xxx

A BIG "THANK YOU" DEAR...

AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU GUYS LIKING THE WAY MY STORY PROGRESSING...

ARE YOU THINKING IT GONA BE A TRIANGLE???? SO YOU HAVE MORE TO KNOW DR... WAIT AND WATCH

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Anumeha Khanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

that was really amazing..

loved the part..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

n do pm for the next part...

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Just read the prologue, the charecter skech and their relations and i'm confused Arnav is Khushi's mama's son, which means he is her cousin come brother at least in where i leave it mean that, i mean in Punjab.

So from my thought maybe in the story there is a wist maybe Aradhana and her bother were not real siblings.

Okay going to read more

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Chapter 1

what to say reading it it seems like Khushi said to him before leaving that he will forgot her and will be not able to recognize her when they will met next, Am i right??

Why i feel, like he is in love with her?? I mean he is saying that from past 15 years he is thinking just about her and only her that means he is kind of love with her, right??

Indeed a very very lovely update beautifuly written

Loved it 🤗

interesting story line 😉

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Chapter 2

when i started reading the chapter i already know that Kailesh(hope i wrote it right, my problem with names argg😡)

but i was thinking that he doesn't let her go to india because he fear that if she went away from him he will face losses in his business, but know after reading the chapter i feel like he doesn't love Arnav, and he doesn't want Arnav's shadow near Khushi, am i right??

coming to the update superb, i loved the way Khushi has planned to go to India.

Lavanaya and Aradhana's talk are funny they always fights 😆

I wonder why Lavanya asked those questions to Aradhana??

Why i feel that Khushi's mom what Khushi with Arnav, why I feel that Arnav confesse everything to his bua and maybe he has confessed this too, or maybe this is an Aradhana's wish??

Let's see

Thank God Kailesh dind't get suspected after hearing Lavany's sentence, she is really stupid sometimes 😆

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Chapter 3

so Lavanya is having a bet with Aradhana to test Arvan's love for Khushi, i think Arnav will pass it easily but i have few doubts on Lavanya falling for him, i think she will not as she loves her friend and want's her happiness

Let's see what will happened

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Great writing.. but somehow I dont want to read Arnav-la too much.. hope Khushi will be in India soon..

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: chandana.s
Aradhana want Khushi to marry Arnav,May be thats y Khushi's father dont want her to go to India?

Omg these two started fighting again...

So now she gonna introduce Lav as Khushi...

Well Cant wait to read more

Update soon

😊 thanku dear..

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ..MorningStar..
I am following This Story! 👍🏼

I love the Concept!

Sorry for being late.😳

I want PMs for this Story!

Thnx for the PMs You sent...

thank you.. am glad to know that you like it..😊

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