Arshi FF: CHALLENGES FOR LOVE - new Update ON PAGE 32 9/5/14 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Suchi.R

Great writing.. but somehow I dont want to read Arnav-la too much.. hope Khushi will be in India soon..


hehe first of all thank you dear.. i won't disapoint you with la- arnav more.. happy?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: HK90

Just read the prologue, the charecter skech and their relations and i'm confused Arnav is Khushi's mama's son, which means he is her cousin come brother at least in where i leave it mean that, i mean in Punjab.

So from my thought maybe in the story there is a wist maybe Aradhana and her bother were not real siblings.
Okay going to read more

Chapter 1

what to say reading it it seems like Khushi said to him before leaving that he will forgot her and will be not able to recognize her when they will met next, Am i right??
Why i feel, like he is in love with her?? I mean he is saying that from past 15 years he is thinking just about her and only her that means he is kind of love with her, right??
Indeed a very very lovely update beautifuly written
Loved it 🤗
interesting story line 😉

Chapter 2

when i started reading the chapter i already know that Kailesh(hope i wrote it right, my problem with names argg😡)
but i was thinking that he doesn't let her go to india because he fear that if she went away from him he will face losses in his business, but know after reading the chapter i feel like he doesn't love Arnav, and he doesn't want Arnav's shadow near Khushi, am i right??
coming to the update superb, i loved the way Khushi has planned to go to India.
Lavanaya and Aradhana's talk are funny they always fights 😆
I wonder why Lavanya asked those questions to Aradhana??
Why i feel that Khushi's mom what Khushi with Arnav, why I feel that Arnav confesse everything to his bua and maybe he has confessed this too, or maybe this is an Aradhana's wish??
Let's see
Thank God Kailesh dind't get suspected after hearing Lavany's sentence, she is really stupid sometimes 😆

Chapter 3

so Lavanya is having a bet with Aradhana to test Arvan's love for Khushi, i think Arnav will pass it easily but i have few doubts on Lavanya falling for him, i think she will not as she loves her friend and want's her happiness
Let's see what will happened


😊 i am so so so Thankfull to your comment and compliment... i felt so glad to read up on that.. 🤗
your detailed comment make me a good review upon my work..😊
i read your confusion in realation of arnav and khushi as they will be brother and sister.. but it happen right..??? as i am a malayali i really don't know how it in north but in south we can marry son and daughter of bro-sis.. when the girl child born then itself they say as she is for his son..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
THANK YOU FOR BEING MY SUPPORT TO ALL MY DEARS...😃


CHAPTER 4



In London


Khushi made her plan to escape to India. Yes, at last she will going to India. Her homeland, were she wish to be. So for that, She made a secret plan with her mother that she will follow her on next day, while lying to her dad that she and her partner in crime, Varun has a got software project at Switzerland.

Varun is her best friend, who is a secret admirer of our Khushi. He will do anything for her, so he is the one who supporting her to this small run away.. He don't know much about why her dad not allowing her to visit her homeland. He had always seen Khushi wish to visit India from her childhood. They were childhood friends since then he was a true friend one of the best in her friends list.

Varun-"hey khush.. so all ready to fly ??"

Khushi-"ya.. all set to fly.."(smiling dreamingly)

Khushi is a cheerful soul who has full life. She has so made friend and admirers around her, but she always waited for only one person in her life. When she was separated from Arnav, she was too small a 5-6 years old girl who didn't know much about anything. She was really sad to leave her nani, 'ma ki chotte'(at childhood Khushi call him as 'ma ki chotte'), 'nani ki lakshmi'(goat of nani), Hariprakash and whatever over there.

Varun-"I wish I too join you there khush .."

Khushi-"you can come na.. after finish you project over Switzerland, just fly over to us.. it will be fun.."

Varun-"I hope I could do that.."

Khushi-"Ofcourse you could Varun.."

Both smiled and planned to start their journey.

At India

Arnav was waiting impatiently, his eye was waiting for only one vision, his ears are thirst for her sweet voice the girl who occupies his mind 24X7.. Our Khushi.. Only her..

He watched passenger come out, and that made his heart beat fasten, then he saw his bua coming out with ever sweet smile.

Aradhana-"chotte.. "(while hugging Arnav)

Arnav-"bua.. how are you?"(searching Khushi behind his bua)

Aradhana-"I am fine.. are you searching someone??"(noticed arnav's action and try to tease him)

Arnav-"wo.. I .. no.. none.. bua did you came alone??"(try voiced out his disappointment)

Aradhana understood what Arnav implied though this, she just looked at him affectionately and cared his cheek with her hands.

Aradhana-"wo.. chotte.."

"OH MY GOD!"

Suddenly a voice came from her behind and both turned.


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Edited by meniranjana00 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Awesome! loved it.. :D Soo.. Arnav was waiting for Khushi.. how cute! :) Waiting for the neeext.. :D thanks for the PM.
Edited by -RabbaVe- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

I am so loving this story

really nice
different concept
so Arnav is already in love with Khushi
lets c if his love is true and he recognises her instantly
lol kinda reminded me a movie I once watched
please update soon
It was amazing
thanks for the PM
PM me when u update dear😊👏
Edited by poojaraizada - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
seems interesting but then according to character sketch, arnav n khushi r first cousins n thus can't b coupled... think about it... khushi's mom is arnav's bua
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
awesummm updatw
well writtn just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: meniranjana00


😊 i am so so so Thankfull to your comment and compliment... i felt so glad to read up on that.. 🤗
your detailed comment make me a good review upon my work..😊
i read your confusion in realation of arnav and khushi as they will be brother and sister.. but it happen right..??? as i am a malayali i really don't know how it in north but in south we can marry son and daughter of bro-sis.. when the girl child born then itself they say as she is for his son..


oh i didn't know that in south you can marry your cousins!!
i'm happy that you loved my comment 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
loved the update too much 🤗
but it was a little short 😳
so Khushi is going to india, i think she too loves Arnav or feel something for him.
Varun like Khushi, i hope in future he didn't became a villain in Arnav and Khushi's prem kahani
I think it was Lavanya she is going to introduce her self as Khushi right 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
"THANK YOU...😛 EVERYONE "


CHAPTER 5

"OH MY GOD!"

Suddenly a voice came from her behind and both turned. There stands a stunned Lavanya with a shocked expression but recover soon.

Lavanya-"you are Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada na?? AR fashion house owner?? Rite"

Arnav just give her a nodded and looked at his bua for further enquires, but that was not unnoticed by Lavanya then she got who it is.

Lavanya-" O MY GOODNESS! (turning towards Aradhana) Is he your chotte??"

Aradhana-" yes.. he is my one and only chotte.. Who is big business tycoon Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada .. "

Lavanya was shocked first but then she remember something, their pervious challenge.. and smiled on it..

Arnav-"bua.. ye kuon hai??"

That simple question made Lavanya little startled, he didn't mistook her as Khushi and That single thought made her shaken.

Aradhana-"chotte.. yeh khush.. .."

But before she could say anything and make damage on their challenge, Lavanya came forward and interrupted.

Lavanya-"hey.. you don't know me.. (both Arnav and Aradhana looked at her confused) I am Khushi.. "

That words from her mouth give both a big shock, sensing their confusion mainly Aradhana's Lavanya made a bold move to remind her about their challenge. She made a way towards Aradhana and hugged her sideways. Aradhana was too shocked for react at anything but that hug made her hit the reality. So she just give her a deadly angry glare before her words out.

Aradhana-" lav.. you.."

Lavanya's eye widen at that words, she quickly interrupted..

Lavanya-"oho mummy.. "

And Aradhana began to loss her last piece of mind on that mummy word, its because ..

Flashback

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Khushi-"mom.. lav please.. I am begging before you guys.. please stop this silly fights.."

Aradhana-"pari.. (giving an angry glare at Lavanya) you better make a new GOOD friends rather than these.."

Khushi-"mom.. "

Lavanya-"call her MUMMY khush.. because her like that.."

Aradhana-"like what??"

Lavanya-"Egyptians meant MUMMY for.."

Khushi-"lav.."

Aradhana-"so you meant that I am a ghost.."

Khushi-"mom.."

Lavanya-" yeah .. Ofcourse you are always like a horror for me like a ghost.."

Aradhana-"WHAT??"

Khushi-" Lavanya .. it's too much.. say sorry to mom.. "

Lavanya-"no way.. now onwards I will only call her MUMMY'"

On that day onwards Aradhana just hate that word MUMMY, but Lavanya only call her like that with she like too irritated her.

Flashback ends

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Aradhana-"lav.."

Lavanya-"mumm.. mamma..(understanding her irritation) didn't you tell anything about me to Arnav?? I mean you chotte??"

With these words she signaled Aradhana to act accordingly, that made her more irritation and looked away. All this while Arnav remained there as silent listener watching the whole scene carefully.

Lavanya-"so what should I call you?? Arnav or ASR as the world.. or momma ki tharah chotte?? "


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Precap:😃😆

What should be Arnav's reply???

Edited by meniranjana00 - 12 years ago

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