Arshi SS ~~ 'New Beginning' Part - 6 Updtd [Pg81]

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Nostalgic_count

@Nostalgic_count

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Sorry for late comment
both chapters were awesome.
meeting , greeting , attraction , wow... and especially first kiss mindblowing.
update soon.
one query did shyam had any connection here in dis story.or lust over her.or any dirty idea regarding her...

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Peda

@Peda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Hi

Just caught up with chapter 2 and the much needed character sketch.

Thanks so much for the email notifyer

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Loved your characters skectches and qualifications, and do not worry about "Mine", all the best for your exams

Edited by arnkhunostalgic - 12 years ago

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casker

@casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

loved the characters except the creepy shyam

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farha

@farha5556

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

there was no arshi but loved it,continue soon.this was also important.continue soon.

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mehak

@mehak06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Nice character sketch..!! Would have loved if u provided pictures of the characters.. as it would be more lively..but still i loved d cs..

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Arnav is pretty much same.. I loved how you've potrayed khushi.., rahul is a nice addition..
And shyam! Evilness suits him much! :D..

Waiting for their 1st official meet again!:)