Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete* - Page 28

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed

nice updt

Nafisa dear... I am spell-bound... This two-shot was such a roller-coaster ride... There was so much brewing between Arnav and Khushi and so wonderfully put across by you...

I have always said that you are a natural when it comes to portraying emotions... You can put down the deepest desires, the gnawing pain and the hundereds of thousands emotions that a heart feels in mere words and make sure that every reader feels that heart beat in them for the entire period while they read your work...

Originally posted by: moon8387

Nafisa dear... I am spell-bound... This two-shot was such a roller-coaster ride... There was so much brewing between Arnav and Khushi and so wonderfully put across by you...

I have always said that you are a natural when it comes to portraying emotions... You can put down the deepest desires, the gnawing pain and the hundereds of thousands emotions that a heart feels in mere words and make sure that every reader feels that heart beat in them for the entire period while they read your work...

I know one thing for sure... Someday in future, I will be standing in a queue with your book in my hands to get it autographed by you... I am waiting desperately for that day to come...

Amazing!!!! I'm still wondering why didnt i read it before! Truly beautiful! Nafisa you are a damn genius! The way you play with words is just magical! I once again applaud your literary knowledge! I bet, if i write every new word i learn while reading your work, i would end up filling an entire notebook in no time!
I simply loved this TS! Khush's insecurities were portrayed brilliantly and my heart went out to her! And Arnav! My My! I was blushing throughout the story! This man clearly has the ability to make any girl go weak in the knees! At the end of it, i was just smiling! Such is the beauty of pure love!
"Jis mohabat mein deewangi naa ho...woh mohabat hi nahi. And this time, Khushi heard not the echo, but the sentiment underneath it." This had to be my favourite line! Finally! She heard what she really wanted to hear!
Wonderful!
Loved the TS Nafisa! Brilliant job!

read the first part.

u know how to make the readers hearts, atleast mine to go 'dhak dhak'.

all the arnav kushi scenes came rushing to me, arnav with his smirk and that rougish look on his face, and kushi, a bit unaware of what's happening completely but does know it in subconscious, but denying it to herself and not completely in control, maybe completely out of control seeing arnav in this avatar and don't know how to react.

these scenes were the heart of the show, these were the scenes that made us who already loved the show fall in love again, with the couple and the entire family who wanted them together no matter what, in such a way that there is no point of return.

ur OSes give me that scenes back with all that intensity intact. thank you for giving us that moment. and don't doubt ur talent. after reading few of your OSes, all I have to say is u r superly talented.

that was to die for. the love, craziness, the heart aching temptation... love is complete only when you add craziness to it, and that's the whole point. beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...

eager to read more of your works.

Hayye 😳
^ Yes I actually said that.😊
THAT.WAS.BRILLIANT. 👏⭐️
Each of the dialogues especially Arnav's was written with such clarity and precision. 😳
The end just gave my heart a pinch (in a good way)😃
Loved it! 👏😳

That was so beautifully written...the frst part made me all mushy mushy...and the second part a cute end to it...u hav such a beautiful way with words 😊 ...luved reading this TS !!!

I have no words to express how much I loved this TS..It was poetic and brilliantly written!!👏👏👏