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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Was a late in catching up with the updates!! But great chapters!!Arnav is trying to juggle way too much, and trying to hard not to expose the women in either life to it!! It's going to be interesting when khushi and Alisha find out about each other!!

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

I am late sorry. But I am surprised it has got so less likes! Is everybody late this time??
I really liked this chapter.

The part bet Arnav and ricci was hilarious and emotional at the end.

Being in small town, how does Arnav think that Khushi wont know abt Alisha? With gossiping ladies around it wont be long. What draws Arnav to Khushi? certainly she doesnot seem to be one among many others for him, I suppose.

Where is NK baboon? When he is present he irritates me and when he is not, I miss him.. 😆

My Aman , poor Aman. Pl be sympathetic to him. Cant imagine him with Ricci with all her weight! please..

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

This is becoming one of those stories that you can sit back, relax and read, and have the time of your life! It's not just funny instances and tongue-in-cheek lines, the characters have depth to them, the sequences are almost life-like and it's utterly delicious.

Like a creme puff. ;)

The little girl is really devoted to her Daddy, inspite of all her tantrums and complaints. Arnav isn't the happy-go-lucky, fun-loving guy image that he puts forward. He is nice to Ricci, even though he tells Aman to piss her off. Man, that guy's as complex as he seems simple. Khushi is like a balloon, and Arnav a blunt-ended pin. Hmm. This is just getting more and more interesting.

Miracles and disasters. Blue bra. 😆 How do you do it? Hilarious. 😆

Edited by maverickmartin - 12 years ago

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

I am back from India..and my my this story has moved forward a lot..will read all the updates over the weekend and comment...

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

hey , i read all the 7 chapters and seriously loved it...
really very well written...
i like ur slightly aloof arnav , the stiff khushi , the detective nk , sober aman , and everything else...
and sometimes some of ur lines really cracked me up...
and also i loved the relationship between arnav and alisha..
looking forward for the rest of the story...and am sending u a buddy request :)

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Huny

@huny.thebest

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

hey masam...

just finished reading all the parts n loved every update...

do add me to ur buddy list... i would love to get a pm from u for this ss...

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Read all in a go!!

i apologize alottt for reading this one sooo latee!!

but i had exams and crazy schedule!!

LOVED the story to bits!!

super cutee relation of father and daughter!!

absolutely love this arnav!!

and woww obv adorable different khushi!!

cutee updatesss!! and cant wait to read moree!!

change is always good..

and whats the deal with NK..hahahah...dufferrr person!!

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

I love the little NK bits you add in small doses, thank god! Small doses are the only thing we can handle with him going all Criminal Mind. Him and his 'She has boxes' 🤣

Second, what is up with the antiques? and Khushi's past is still foggy. What made her accept the position in Johannesburg? Why is Payal here also?

I really like this SS! It has depth, humor, drama, mystery! The characters are fantastic and the writing is so easy to read. It just flows so smoothly. No bumps or sharp edges to distract from the continuity.

Please PM 😃 I don't want to miss commenting for any more updates.