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awww Ricci is not bad at all...poor girl...its funny to see how Arnav who gave aman the 'Fat' idea now consoling her xD wow! I didn't imagine Arnav is hiding such pain inside him...so all this playboy persona is to cover up his loneliness then...but i love the playboy and also the concerned daddy Arnav too...And to think that Khushi was missing him makes my heart jump in joy :) she is attracted to him! hope Arnav will tell Khushi about Al and his past...cz i believe Khushi can be Arnav's 2nd chance at a perfect and beautiful life again...Update soon! Stalking this like a hawk :D

Arnav did not just...leave Alisha in the car sleeping Nd walk over to the cafe...bad,bad Arnav...!

Just read it all and you are a great writer! Hope you continue soon!![I][/I]

Okay no joke but you have officially broken my trust, Masam. Now I am feeling sad and heavy. Not calm at all. I need a paper bag to breathe in (lol okay bad joke but I think that's what K said in IO when she wasn't feeling calm and A hands her a paper bag-not making fun of the scene it just popped in my whacky head) *Waahh*. Mein aayi thi to laugh and now I need a hug from Ricci too. Gosh I think it's the crazy weepy hormones that are making me feel all weirdly blah but I felt for Arnav a lot in this chapter. I also feel that when Khushi (or if she does) finds out about Arnav's "life", she (I would hope) wouldn't feel "sympathic" towards him (like I am right now), but take it from a realistic approach. By a realistic approach I mean what happens in reality, how to go about life NOT feeling bad about each other (no one should be in a relationship just because they feel bad for each other). I also feel they can complete each other. Poor Arnav torn between his daughter and K. That part had me confused a bit though. The distance between K's workplace and Alisha's school (amazing...symbolism (I think? or whatever the word is) that you created. But what (how much/far) did Arnav want? Also, that was so heart-tugging when Alisha asked if he didn't enjoy the past few days with her. Why do I get this feeling the kid feels she is a "burden" on Arnav? Am I over analyzing this?
Sometimes when my mom and I discuss celebrities or people we know's lives as if we own them and have all the solutions to the world, my mom will pause and say "bade aaye hum psychologists ban ne". Before typing my views out I always think "M's going to think/shake her head laughing at how we are shaping things out"; and Mama's lines come to mind bahaha.
LOL that Aman talked to Ricci about her weight. He took the "mard ban" line seriously now:P Love Aman and Ricci, both! Back to Arnav, his thoughts really were touching. Don't mean to be cheesy but ahhh.

I have a serious question for you. You know those sites you come across sometimes where you have to verify if you are a human; you're not able to click yes to those right? Aap ho kya, M? Give me one flaw you have, one. You can even write suspense so well. I don't care if you think this story isn't that, but for me the whole Alisha being daughter, Arnav's wife dying of cancer (the way you wrote it I honestly thought she left him bc she was tired of him or something of the sort). But now I am confused about the running away lines!!
You write that so well, thinking one thing, turns out to be something ENTIRELY different. I asked you the human verifying thing because I am having doubts about you now. Shuru se hi doubt tha. Don't be greedy and give me some of your thinking ways, please. This is one story of yours that keeps changing lanes every line. I think I need to start eating almonds to keep my brain working for this.

Again, I loved the chapter; even though you're sending me back to reality feeling all "Ricci".
Thank you for the PM!

Phoood.

Awesome update! Awww Alisha is so cute! So he has thought about linking with khushi. I thought he might have totally ended with her for his daughters sake. Nice to see he is constantly thinking about his daughter. It was clear that khushi was very angry with him. Loved their convo as usual. Arnav is very witty!

Aman is totally hilarious. I can't believ he actually asked ricci to lose weight and Arnav was playing along! The amount of curses he sent his friends way ws unbelievable. But their conversation suddenly took a turn and turned serious when his wife was mentioned. So sad that he lost her to cancer and Alisha didn't even know her. Arnav really is a true survivor. He didn't let this devastating incident stop him from living.

At last we got to see a soft side of Arnav when he asked khushi out so that they can just talk. It seems like he's also been hiding his true self. They both need someone to talk to. They are both lonely in and are dealing with it in their own way. Khushi decided not to Interact with others whilst Arnav went the complete opposite direction!

Please do continue.
I have sent a buddy request. Please pm when you next update. Thanks!

Lovely Update!!
Alisha is so cute! I adore her!
I feel bad for Ricci though and for Arnav ...sometime things just change your life to such an extend that you can't help yourself! But till wherever Arnav has come...Its great to see him make decisions for himself and also his daughter!

I know there are better things coming up for all three of them!
Can't wait to read further!

P.S Can I get a pm please!?

Thank you for the PM, Masam!!!

Coming to the update, I adore Arnav...he may be a Casanova , but, he has a golden heart...I loved the effervescent moments between A&K inside the Patissere...and, my heart went out to him when he hoped for a miracle that Alisha and Khushi never crossed paths, as it would hurt the former..and, then he is in quandary whether to follow K or head back to his daughter...gave me a sense of foreboding...and, I fervently hope , it never happens..but, then, life is full of surprises and, I would love to see how you concoct the story, further..
Ricci-Arnav moments were endearing too..though, I had a hearty laugh, when he was regurgitating all that Ricci called Aman...given, he was the sole conspirator of the plan.. saddened to know, that La succumbed to terminal illness..Echo Ricci's thoughts about Arnav being a survivor..

And, Khushi agreed to talk to him...awaiting the impending talks...

lovely update masam!!!

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just discovered ur story...