I finally have the whole story figured out now (ding ding ding!); and what I have figured out is that I will never be able to figure this story out. Figure out the story, a pocketful of predictions which are baloney, ashes, ashes, we all fall down! And the wicked witch of the West...err I mean Masam, who is the best (cough) won't give our brains a rest.
First and foremost, wife. Wife?! Does that mean she is still the wife of LostSoul Raizada? Like you didn't say ex-wife or anything. Sorry but deceased wasn't even mentioned. Are they still legally tied? On top of that Khushi and Arnav have already done *waves hands around-kind of feeling down that you left it so minimal-like they had 2 hours right? 2 hours deserves a few more lines :P* Lagta hai 50 Shades of Grey aapko force read karana hi padega. Bahaha jk.
I think I can easily say I love Arnav-Alisha scenes much more than A-K scenes. :O. But Arnav-Khushi is fun to read, whereas Arnav-alisha are touching to read. *haye* Btw, throughout the entire 6th chapter I was wishing that kaash this scene could be enacted out in real life.
You know those ads on TV sometimes about I think it's artheritis pain? Or something like that. They show a human skeleton that's all stiff and in pain, but as soon as they take the pain relief med, one by one all the bones/muscles/something becomes "un-stiff". While I read the stiff Khushi lines in your story I was thinking of that ad; in this case it was like wherever Arnav touches her (I don't mean just physically), but mentally too, she is becoming less stiff. Haaa okay anyways.
Throughout the whole Akash-Paayal-Khushi scene I was replying to each line in my head in my own way; and when Paayal asked for Akaash's number I was hoping someone would say 911 lol :P. Thodi mujhe bhi security dedo yaar.
Do you know someone who is an architect?
In the last chapter I couldn't stop laughing at NK's "roger that". Oh and I also loved the witty dialogues in the bar scene! I have more to say which I will edit in later my boss calls!
Thank you for the PM!
Since I am craving this right now thought I would tempt you
I did NOT mean to take up that much SPACE with that picture but I tried to crop it and it still came out this big. Chalo koina, moohn mein paani aayga.
Now that I think of it maybe I should have read these 2 chapters after IO -.-
Edited by Shrutee7 - 12 years ago
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