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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

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So finally Khushi ended up wearing the little black dress for the date ... 😉

"Good, then let's get and done over with this hour as soon as possible." She glanced at

him and ignored the huskiness oozing out from every pore of his. "I wouldn't mind if

we finished this forced meeting 45 minutes before an hour." 😆

Gosh ... How forced was the date ...

Khushi needs to unwind a bit ... she is too stiff all the time ...

I suppose the effect of the parents marital status does effect both the girls in someway

or the other ...

😆 Arnav's idea of giving her a lesson on loosening up in a locked car was classic ...

I really wonder if he would have succeeded in his task if Aakash had not interrupted ... 😉

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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rimu

@rimzu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

dattt was too good update...ahh...akash's entry...

nd nk u r a jerk for sure...

payal...lovely sis..

poor arnav...ek toh khushi gave him jus 1 hr..usme bhi dis nk had to intrude..

update soon

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cheval

@cheval

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

awww masam that was amazing :D

i love payal she is sooo fuuny fun loving person coool

nk is always irritating i just hope he get a gud punch with the two gurls sooon ;)

as for the date ehehhehe it was coool 😆😆😆 kushi pooor her she luks like she has a lot of responsabilities on her i hope arnav help her i mean make her life simply i mean enjoy herself be herself be happy

i love the start how she spoke oh n now akash coool

cant wait for more

masam do u mind if i ask u if i can read ur other work too the one u send the link together with this link plz???

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

awesome update

payal is an adorable sis

thanks for pm

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

thoroughly enjoyed the update, Arnav is right, she is too stiff...

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Payal is the kind of girl dat knows how to shake sorrow out of life.. , knows how to overlook the pain and see the bright side of world, dat life offers!s

while khushi is the one who's burdened, responsible and mature.., she has taken up a lot on herself, all adding up to her misery! She might be young but is truly the elder one in all sense.. She needs to loosen up, as Arnav said.., she is too stiff for her own good and too suffocated for her own survival!:)

NK, get a life dude.., stop watching over a house dat has two single grlls living inside.., ppl might take him wrong and he cud end up behind the bars!:D

Arnav is gurdain angel for khushi??.. Or just like her, trampled by responsibilites trying to seek solace.. But his out cheerfulness, flirty self, unbashed commnts make him a fun and out going person!

Ooh, soo aakash is now in!;) lets see how he ends up wid payal!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Very dysfunctional family Kushi has...! mom and dad having a divorce competition...😊 Payal being the annoying clutter bug...poor Kushi...and she is getting over a heartbreak...oh poor baby...!

NK get a life and grow up...stop playing chor police...!

finally they talk...in the merc...and Aakash makes entry...but gives Arnav no bhaav...!

Nice chappie about Arhi...!