SS: The Land of Glint, SEE PG 74** (3/8))

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luvkkgasr

@luvkkgasr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

woww...

the track is actually a roller-caoster ride here... 😆😆😆

surprises nd more surprises in evry chapter...

Arnav has a 7 yr old daughter...

Aman contesting for elections...

NK... behaving like a thug who is damn impatient to get his hands on d "box"...

Khushi ... ummm she is Khushi GUPTAaa... An A with Attitude ( not dat m complaining)..

and Payal... well d coolest person till now... 😉

Seems like big puzzles scattered here nd der...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Waiting for more madness ... 😉

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neha_mayur

@neha_mayur

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Arnav finally has his way in! 😉

Loved the whole conversation! Enjoyed it throughly!
And also Payal! Too supportive!!

And Alisha is sooo cute! I just love her!!

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mssj

@mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Cool story. She finally said yes to him.

I like Payals character. Seems very straight forward and no-nonsense type if person.

Awesome update )

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

oh god seriously...seriously was it u who wrote the chapter...i cant stop ROFLing...Arnav and payal are crazy...bas :D :D and khushi poor poor khushi the town is getting creepier for her :D loved the update...

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Nice story.. From the beggining itself its engrossing and enthralling..!
A new place wich is bachward from the native metropolitian city.., khushi finds herself stuck in btw the heat, the stalkers and herself!

I like arnav's charecter though..! Flirty, intellligent, genius - as he calls himself.,
and alisha is his daughter..! Really? Wondering abt dat..still! Who's her mother?

Aman, poor guy stuck wid someone not so likely and a very bashful cousin..:D

payal sounds cool and way more fun then khushi..
NK is seriously dichhead! Has he been watching Bones or cid or crime patrol or somethng!:p

waiting for the nxt part.., their backgrounds to unfurl..

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

hilarious update...🤣

arrnav OMG here super cool n crazy...i've always read tough, ruthless, sometimes cool arnav...but this arnav super crazy n cool...😆

aman n arnav good friends...between their convo alisha was like tennis ball...😆

khushi adamant...payal cool...

so arnav n khushi gonna out...

hw arnav knows about khushi's family?????

update soon...

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rimu

@rimzu

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

amazing update...bt seriously..hw cm arnav knows dis much abt her..

alisha is too cute...wer's al's mum???

nd finally arshi together...

update soon

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Shaaz.gul

@Shaaz.gul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

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Awww masam that was really great u made khushi somber and payal chulbuli so khushi is disturbed from broken family and his boyfriend
Awwweee she wore the gown and red lipstick and their convo
I m curious 2 know how arnav got so correct ideas about khushi
Great update masam

Edited by Shaaz.gul - 12 years ago