Pyaar Dosti Hai!!! #KR OS # posted

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Well first of all THANKS A LOT GUYS!! Really I expected a birthday wishes thread but didn't expect this much...I feel very much special right now!!!I can't thank enough!!

well I can't meet you people in direct and thank all you personally so just hug yourself as tight as you can *till you suffocate* and then take a deep breath.. I wanna badly meet you all!!!

but sigh..this is the only disadvantage of making pen friends!!


But still I can give you a treat.. and seriously being the typical myself I wanna dedicate this OS to every single friend of mine!!! Love you guys!!!


nah nah LUV YOU GUYS LOADS!!!


well be patient!! I will be posting it shortly...I hope my hands work fast today!!!😆

hope you guys love this...You people have done this much for my happiness I am trying a drop in ocean to make you happy!! Hope I achieve that !!

-DEETHA!!😳


please DO NOT RES I need two more posts!!!

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KR version!!!







He pressed the pillow more crushing his face between the bed and pillow!!!!! He groaned as his mobile rang more louder!!! It seemed as if the caller was shouting more high ...he searched for his cell and kept it beside his ear but soon took it away hen she shouted


"Kutte!! Ullu ke patte uth!!! " She shouted at top of her voice totally pissed of from calling him from last 30 minutes...


"Kya hai bey?? itni raat ko call kyun kiya??"He barked back into the mobile...


"raat... gadhe 10 baje ko so rahe ho kumbakaran ki aulad...uth abhi nalayak..."she fumed more...


"kya baat hai ha??"he asked annoyed..


"kal kya hai yaad hai??" she asked coldly...


he sprang upon his bed...


" teri birthday?? nahi nahi wo toh last month hi hua... aunty uncle ki anniversary?? nah wo toh teen mahine ke baad... mere mummy papa ki... nahi toh uskeliye directly 5 months hai...humari group mei bhi kisiki birthday nahi hai... mera?? aswayammera hota toh tu mujhe kyun poochti.. kya hai bey kal??" he asked her as she groaned...


"Ria!!" she breathed slowly unbelievebly


"OH SHIT!!!!! kal uska birthday haina..mai bhool gaya yaar!! how could I ???"he panicked more...


"mujhe pata tha... acha hua maine check karne ka socha...ab jaldi jaake tayyariyan kar"she scolded him


"itni raat ko kaise??" he pouted


"abey oye tu Singhania khaandan ki beta hai... apna power use kar koi kaam pe aajayega and now get to work..kk acha se karna..bye "she said and was about to hang up he shouted


"oye oye rukhna baat karna mujhe nahi pata kya karna hai...help me out na!!"he pleaded


"mujhe kya??"she shot back


"besharam sharam kar... apni bestfriend ki lovelife stake pe hai aur tujhe apni padi hai...abhi meri help kar warna I will kick your a** "he fumed


"whatever...bata kya karna hai... kaha arrange karega surprise party...or should I say date??" she asked


" abey sun na..mujhe nahi pata kaha aur kaise dete hai...its just one week that we got in relationship...mujhe in sab ki experience nahi hai tum hi bolna"he asked her


"toh kya mai 100 logon ke saath date pe gayi???"she asked raising eyebrow...


"abey nahi... teri dream date kaisi hogi oh toh pata haina ..wo bata"he asked


" wo mera dream date hai!!! "she pouted


"theek hai "he became sad ..


" acha mujhe na ek beautiful si ghar ke terrace pe... filled with light orange ballons matching the colour of the setting sun... aur every corner decorated with yellow and orange tulips *meri fav hai :P * ... "she was cut


"rukh rukh mai tumhari farm house theek rahega aur line mei reh mai ek ek kaam khatam kar leta hun abhi tulips ki order kar leta hun..."he spoke out hurriedly!!


"oye wo mere fav flowers uska kya hai??"she asked


"pata nahi " he said slowly


"chi .. sharam kar.. aur roses bolde uski fav colour ki use tulips pasand nahi aaya toh"she said worried


"teri pasand kisiko pasand na aaye ye kabhi nahi ho sakta!!! waise abhi urgent kaam hai mai tumse thodi der me baat karta hun "he said ending the call..


"idiot !!"she shouted irritated and threw the cell on the bed...


******



"aunty wo bandar kaha hai!!" he asked touching smriti's feet.


"aur kaha room mei "she said and went to the couch and continued her work waiting her husband to be back home from the bussiness party!!


He smiled and went in her room but stood shocked. Her back was facing him she was standing on the bed holding her towel ends with both hands spreading her hands and dancing lyk mad...


" oye!!"he burst out laughing when she froze and turned around crossing her hands and covering herself


"tu yaha kya kar raha hai?? "she shouted


"beta raat ko chillana band karo dono!!! already sar dard kar raha hai mera "smriti shouted


"hahaha ..ye kya kar rahi thi??? mere khawbon mei jo aaye "he mimicked her and fell on the bed laughing hard...


she walked front kicked him on shoulder once and walked back..


"idiot knock karke aana nahi aata?? "she barked..


" teri room mei knock karke?? paagal hai kya aise ab se show band kar aur inta natak na kar...bachpan mei bohut baar nanga dekh chuka hun aur interest nahi hai "he said making a face and turned to other side to pick up the bag whick fell beside bed when he fell laughing. She kicked him hard as he fell on the floor really and " STUPID"she shouted and grabbed her dress and went into washroom . when she came out she saw him talking to the flowerist and ordering tulips...


she grabbed a clutch rolled her hair up and held them there with the clutch and stood beside the bed


" rey meri baat sun roses le aur uski fav colour ki!!"she said trying to convince him!!


He simply pulled her beside him kept his hand around her neck saying a "NO"and showed her the book of the arangments he had done..she sighed and helped him!!!


"tab mai uski gift kiye hue dress mei neeche daudke jaungi uski horn sunke..aur wo waha meri fav colour ki suit mei "she was saying dreamily but he shouted


"wait wait... mai ...mai...mai pink suit mei...nahi!!! "he shrieked.


She laughed hard holding her stomach,


"toh mai ria ko cancel karke swayam ko date pe bhejun??"she laughed more as he pulled her into his arms fuming and pulled her legs with left hand and crushing her into a ball...


"aahh chod mujhe"she cried and he showed her off...


"mai yaha pareshaan hun aur tu PJ maar rahi hai??"he said annoyed...


she struck her tongue out and said


"toh usko uski fav colour ki dress gift kar aur meri fav colour ki suit pehan..."she adviced as he sighed and made calls ordering everything.


"then wo mujhe slightly mere haath pe kiss karke car se bahar leke jaake apni arms mei terrace tak leke jaayega aur thodi apni private moments honge mai nahi batati aur uske baad wo mujhe table ke paas leke jaaye aur tab tak terrace pe orange lights shine karna shuru kardenge and then we sit for dinner aur saari dishes meri favourite .."he interupted


"tum ladkiyan inti selfish kyun ho...tab se dekh raha hun sab kuch tum logon ki pasand ki hogi kya??"he said pouting lyk a child when he got a kick on side of his bum and he glared at her rubbing..


"birthday teri ya uski??"she snapped


"uski"he said annoyed


"so usi ki pasand ke honge ab kaam kar..."she said yawning...they heard the knob open and turned back to see her dad coming...


"hey buddy!!" rey said cheerfully...


"so kya chal raha hai??"gautam asked ruffling his hair and kissed her forehead as she hugged him ...


"mujhse laat kha rah hai "she said kicking him again...


"you!!!"he pulled her by leg and both started pulling their hairs when gautam just shook his head and bid a good bye caressing their hairs as they both paused for a sec and started their fight soon he left...


after sometime they completed the preparations and immediately called Ria as kriya bugged him that girls like that.


He called and kept it on speaker phone as she insisted... after few rings she lifted the call


"many many happy returns of the day baby!!"he said lovingly and kriya was about to say when she spoke


" rey maine bola na raat ko call mat kiya karo.. ek toh papa abhi aate hai aur mai apni neendh mei thi... ab mujhe ek ghante tak neendh nahi aayegi aur kal black circles aajayenge "she said annoyed


kriya became sad as she heard someone scolding her bestie...rey saw this but first spoke to ria


"sorry baby bas tumhe wish karne keliye call kiya... now go back to sleep aur haan don't worry jaldi neendh aayega "he said and was about to hang when she said


"sorry rey.. koi mujhe neendh se uthaye wo mujhe pasand nahi isiliye... and thanks a lot baby!! love you!!"she said as he said it 's okay and hung up!!


It took time for him to cheer up kriya but he kept on blabbering things as she laughed and suddenly she went quite..he looked at her she was sleeping hugging him by waist and her head on his chest...he carefully gathered her made her lie down perfectly but failed to come out her strong grip so he made place himself and slept. He almost slept when he heard the door open and felt someone covered the blanket, gautam caressed their foreheads pecked both and left switching off the light and locking the door behind him!!!


Kriyaansh parents had already decided when both reached their teens that they will be happy even if they end up as a couple or as besties forever because they knew what ever the end may be both will be happy and they only needed their happiness and stopped putting any kind of barries between them...people may say anything if they get to know that they both sleep together in each others arms lyk childhood even at this age of 23 but they cared less about it.. all they wanted was theirs childrens happiness their comfort and they gave that.


****


4 months passed


****


these four months bought a lot of change in their lives... and finally came the valentines day!!!


The gang along with Ria walked into the pub!!!


All were dancing madly to D J !!! kriya was not able to concentrate... every now and then she would feel distracted would stop and see rey who was dancing with Ria ... Kriya never...never ever danced without Rey in parties... she felt lonely!! She shook her head consoling her that she whould have got used to this already ... and started dancing and this time everything was different ...she was on roll... as the song took pace her moves sharpened and the people beside her could feel the heat flowing from her due to the hard dancing... slowly everyone's attention shifted to her as they moved away back as she danced hard and gave her more space to move...it was like a dream to see her dance her heart out...the DJ increased the speed and beat as he saw her energy making her move and dance more hard. Rey became tensed and was about to go when Ria tugged his arm.


"Rey let her dance , she is dancing her heart out... let her enjoy !!"she tugged his arm more tight and watched kria dancing placing her head on his shoulder.


after it felt like ages Kriya finally stopped dancing and stood panting hard when swayam rushed and hugged her tight and lifted her in arms and twirled around as all clapped for her performance. Rey felt jealous., hurt, left out, he felt a prick in his heart...isn't he the one who does that always when she dances well for the first attempt on a song in their reharsal hall, Isn't he the one twirling her when wins the solo rounds??? wasn't he the only one who twirled her ever in her life?? when did he go that far that swayam who never stepped and let anyone step forward to twirl her was twirling her shouting high!!! He wanted to catch swayam's collar and shout at him asking why he did that and why he (this he meant rey) didn't move first to twirl her .


He was bought back to earth as ria clutched his arm again and said excitedly


"she was awesome na??"you were mindblowing Kria"she said as Kriyam came to them , kriya grinned as sharon literally jumped on kriya making them sway back and swayam holding both in his arms...


"tu aise kabse naachne lagi maine toh tujhe kabhi aise naachte hue nahi dekha??" Rey frowned and asked they walked to the counter to get some drinks.


" mujhe bhi nahi pata.. tu nahi tha na shayad isiliye"she said chuckling making all giggle...he trapped her from back crushing her and saying "acha.. fir se bol "


but he was shocked at the suddenly flinch of kriya...she pushed him back and said


"Rey teri gf yahi hai " kriya said eyeing ria who was not liking this a bit


"arey use koi problem nahi u are my bestie kriya and she knows " rey said beating kriya on her head for thinking nonsense


"mujhe problem hai rey... kitna bhi bestie ho tum ek ladke ho aur wo ek ladki.. so know your limits "ria shot at rey.. all frowned as sharon was stopped by swayam as she stepped front to shout and show that she should agree to this.


"rey aur uski relation trouble mei hoga agar tune kuch bola toh "swayam whispered and she left from there excusing herself for washroom dragging kriya along with her.. rey was annoyed but he don't wanna create a scene here...



after a few minutes krisha joined and almost the tention in the air cleared as kriya started being her self the chirpy one!!


soon DJ announced a slow dance and all unconsiously left to floor as always kriya will be paired up with rey and rey and ria were already there as they were lost in some lovey dovey talks... some random person asked her hand saying he is single and he just want her company for a dance to keep himself out of boredom. she accepted but she felt lonely!!! soon the guy whom kriya s dancing was taken by a girl ...Kriya was soo happy that finally someone became a couple and then looked around... she left very lonely... all alone...she suddenly wanna cry badly... her heart became heavy and she slowly slipped out the club and went to her house .

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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* after 4 hours *


at 11 pm



"ab koun hai rey!! "ria asked him as they were out on their date


"1 min baby agar abhi nahi uthaya toh call karti rahegi!! lemme tell her "he said making a sorry face as she nodded understanding.


"REY REY REY!! kaha hai tu jaldi ghar aana!!!"Kriya shouted jumping


"baatcutter mai abhi nahi aa sakta ... baad mei??"he was cut


"nahi nahi... abhi ... tumhe aana padega "she whinned


"kriya maine bola na nahi!!! mai nahi aasakta kal sabse pehle tujhse milunga okay "he was about to cut as he saw the annoyed look on ria


"NAHI!! tu aaraha hai bas..warna baat nahi karungi tujhse" she shouted dramatically , he saw ria who threw her hands up and gritted her teeth and glared at him


he closed the speaker


"ria"he was cut


"what?? rey its our date... I want you to end the call right now!!"she demanded irritated


"rey rey rey rey ... tu aana please...please "she shouted again .. both the girls were making him crush between them and he took kriya for granted and shouted


"kriya bola na abhi nahi... mai kal milunga and thats final ..don't call me again now "he said instead snapped and ended the call . Kriya stood rooted never ever he shut on her ..and today was important for her...for them...


****


after a week


****


"Rey tu london mei padna chahta tha na higher studies ?? "swayam asked rey...


"arey wo aur kriya donon bhi toh wahi chahte hai " sharon said slapping swayam on his arm.


Rey looked around again but no sign of kriya.


"guys kriya kaha hai??"he asked ..


"wo RDX ne bulaya ab bata bhi "swayam asked..


"Rey kahi nahi jayenge wo mere saath hi yahi padenge hum sabke saath haina??"ria clicnged onto him and with no option rey nodded...


"ufff... seriously aaj toh aur bhi thak gayi "kriya sighed and tugged swayam's other arm


"lori gaona swayam mujhe sone ka mann kar raha hai "she said and slid her head into his lap


"coffee piyogi?? acha lagega!!"rey asked concerned


"thanks pileti agar tum hamesha ki tarah bina pooche leke aate toh... but now no thanks "kriya said coldly


" wow!!! ek toh rey tumhari care kar raha hai and you order him?? wo tumhare servant hai kya .."ria was cut


rey was about to speak when kriya snapped


"Sorry Ria apne bf ko boldena mera sar na khaye..and don't give me lectures..."kriya said as usual coldly and closed her eyes as swayam sighed and caressed her hair . Rey was getting deeply hurt...from last one week she kinda went far from him...she could sense the distance... she would be normal with him in actual... just like she will be with some random guy of their college and hurted more...


****


1 month later


****


"Guys guys guys!!! "kriya running into the reharsal hall and shouted and hugged sharon tight


"kya hua??"all asked as rey stopped his practise with ria and looked at her...


"guess what!! mujhe london mei admission mil gayi... LONDON MEI!!!!! "she shouted excited


It came as a blow to rey!! he felt his world crash...his eyes fumed and he directly walked to her and pulled her by arm making her face him


"tumne akele apply kardiya??" he asked shocked and hurt to core..


"haa"kriya said looking away


"look at me dammit!! hum donon saath mei jaane wale the na.. "he shouted..


" tumne decide karliya tha na ria ke saath yahi padne keliye??"she pushed him back getting out of his grip and snapped at him


" par...par tune mujhe bataya tak nahi?? aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua ki tune mujhe bataye bina dress bhi nahi khareeda aur aaj tumhari life ki itni badi decision akele...?? "he asked shocked...


"seriously rey!!?? tumhe lagta hai ki maine tumse bina pooche hi decide karne ki socha?? think twice and blame anyone !! samjhe"she glared at him


"tumne kab poocha??"rey fumed more


"maine usi din tujhe bulaya taaki hum apply karde par tumne call cut bhi kardiya... aur tumne bola tha na next day aaoge ?? aaye the?? ya fir uske baad bhi kabhi tumne poocha ki maine tumhe kuch important cheez batane wali thi.. ?? bolo... !! "


she stood there looking at him as rey stood silent having no answer and she left the RH fuming more


every one left and rey asked ria to leave as he wanted to be alone.


and thats the last day he spoke to her...even though he tried she totally avoided him ignored him and even left to london without informing ...everyone even everyone of his family went to give her a sendoff but she asked them to not tell to rey ...


****


after 10 months ...


****


" hello kriya??"swayam said


"swayam?? kya hua?? bola na iss time pe call kiya mat kar I am sleepy yaar... "kriya pouted


"kriya its important"swayam said tensed


she sat up sensing him tensed


"kya hua??"she asked tensed


"wo..rey.." she spoke in between


"rey?? kya hua use??" she asked tensed...


"wo kahi dikh nahi raha"swayam said in a go..


"dikh nahi raha matlab?? rey koi bacha nahi hai... tell me exactly swayam"she shouted


"okay relasx...its such that ..Rey ghar chod ke chalagaya"swayam said closing his eyes...he knew this would break her because he and sharon are the only one who knew the actual reason for her leaving... she realised her love for rey and couldn't see him with someone else and and this was the first time he is calling her as she strictly said she don't wanna talk to anyone...when she wants she used to call she used to talk ... and cut before they could speak about anything...


and also knew she never read the messages he sent and deleted them immediately...


" what the hell swayam tum rey ko aise kaise jaane de sakta hai... kaise frnd ho tum "she barked on swayam


" kriya calm down .. wo mera friend hai and haa mai tujhe itna hi bolne keliye call kiya ki mai rey ko dhoondh ne jaa raha hun so mai calls nahi uthaunga tera.. bye "he said before he could hear her break down,,he knew he can't take that pain of her breaking down again...


Kriya kept crying for the rest of night!!! the next two days passed lifeless for her...every minute she used to be in contact with sharon who went along with swayam...


***


she walked still sad , to the door... and opened and was rooted to her place...he stood there in a bad condition... swaeting badly.. looking very very tired his hair messed up dress dirty ...


"Rey!!"she breathed out shocked and pulled him to the couch...


"tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? ye kaisi haal banake rakhi tune... pata hai sab kitna pareshan hai? mai inform kar deti unko rukh.." she made him sit and walked when he held her wrist stopping her..she looked back confused as he stood and looked at her helplessly!!he then pulled her into hug in a swift motion.. she her emotions rising... but she knew he needed his bestie now and she will be his bestie...nothing other than that... she hugged him back comforting him asking what happened...


"I am alone baatcutter " he started crying... his weak voice was enough to make her choke


"k..kya?? ria??? usne tumhe chod diya?"she asked with difficulty her heart breaking into pieces thinking how much hurt he would be then...


"nahi..."he sniffed..she frowned and pulled back...


"maine chod diya use"he said looking at her...


"WHAT?? par kyun??"she asked shocked to core..


"tum"he said looking at her helplessly as tears rolled down continuously..


she was confused to core..


"tum... kyun aagayi?? pata haina tumhare aas paas na hone se dumghut tha hai mera ... tujhe ek din na dekhne se paagal hojata hun toh kyun chod ke aayi aur mujhe ek baar bataya bhi nahi... aakhri baar dekhne bhi nahi diya... kya mai itna paraya hogaya tha?? he left her and walked to the couch and sat on it crying and trying to decrease the pain he felt when the bitter truth stabbed his heart that she left and asked that she don't want him to know about it because its not that worthy for him to know...He is the only one who can understand how much it pained when his heart bleeded continuously!!!


Kriya was taken back... she realised in the process of avoiding him she had crossed her limits and hurted him very badly.. she walked to him ..as soon as he sensed her around him he hugged her by waist and cried hard..


"mai strong nahi hun... itna strong toh bilkul nahi hun ki tujhe kho dun...I can't ... he looked up crying like a baby...she couldn't look into his eyes... she can see his pain through it and it was unbearable...and before she could move she felt him standing him and hugging her tight crushing his lips over hers and kissing her with all the pain...she stood numb...shocked to core...after when she almost blanked out he pulled back...


" tabhi seedha bata deti...toh mai bhi shayad samajh leta... aaj tak sab kuch share kiya humne toh kyun chupaya ?? and tum toh mujhe mujhse jyaada jaanti hona...toh tune ye kyun nahi samjha ki I love you a lot!!!?? why??"he asked as tears rolled slightly ... and she stiffened listening the three words...


she was about to say something again when he slowly pulled her to him and kissed her this time verysoftly that she felt unconsiousand once she got the situation she found herself kissing him with all want as if she would die if she won't kiss him now...she gave up finally cluthed his hair and crushed his mouth more into hers...rey pulled back when bock were out of breath and caressed her face with his wiping all their tears and hugged her completly covering her in his arms...


***


"Rey NO!!" she shouted


"abey meri baat sun na ...""but all in vain she already called swayam


"are you mad wo log paagal ho rahe hai waha"kriya barked as the call kept ringing..


"arey unhe pata chalega toh yaha aajayenge aur mujhe leke chale jayenge"he pouted


"shut up nalayak!!"she shouted and signalled him to be quite as swayam lifted...


"hello swayam..."


"Kriya sorry yaar abhi tak..."he stopped


"kya hua.."she asked


"one minute"he excused and she heard sobs..


"swayam sharon ro rahi hai??"kriya asked tensed... rey who was eating the chips came forward to know what happened to his sweet friend


"haa... *sigh* char din hogaye aur rey nahi mila na isiliye gabra rahi hai..bolo na ise sba theek hojayega"he said helplessly..



"swyam wo actually rey..."she stopped as rey went a bit far and sat eyes closed eating the chips cutely expecting swayam to shout


"rey kya??"sharon snatched the phone...


"wo kahi nahi mil raha kriya mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai "sharon said in her shaky voice. kriya glared at rey who pouted cutely...


"guys wo...rey mere saath hai "she said in a go


"WHAT??? abhi phone do saale ko "swayam shouted


"wo...wo bohut thak ke aaya tha abhi soya tha...please baad mei?? "she somehow convincd them.. but as soon as they agreed rey coughed and asked "pani" and kriya glared at him


he closed his mouth with hands...


"REY!! IDIOT... KUTTE KI BACHE... ABHI BAAT KAR"sharon shouted at her top voice,,.


"mai so gaya"rey shouted and ran to kriya's room and locked himself up...


when kriya said them what he had done all had no option but to laugh... thats when they bugged her as she shyly said that they were in a relationship !!


"wohooo!!!! chalo aane do saale ko dekhlunga aur haa... dekhlena tere yaha aate hi tum logon ki shaadi karadenge "swayam teased


"swayam!!"kriya whinned blushing...



****


"sorry!!"he pulled her more close and nuzzled into her hair taking in her fragnance... she was crying her heart out at the times how she felt lonely even having him beside her...


"baatcutter.. itne din mujhe tumse ye khushboo kyun nahi aayi??"he asked huggine her more making her curves flatten into his chest and bit her nape making her moan...


"pyaar ki khushboo " she giggled


" kuch bhi ho.. u smell delicious.. mann kar raha hai abhi tumhe khajaun..."he said in his husky voice...


"mujhe kha jaoge??"she said cutely


He groaned... "stop it warna I will my cool aur uske baad jo haga uska zimmedar mai nahi hun"


"koun tumhe zinmmedar tehrayega??"she winked at him and thats the last thig she could remember as he made love to her senselessly!!


****



Well I wrote something hope you will like it!!



sorry I couldnt post the whole thing in one post as it said oversized so I have to drop one version I am really sorry!!

-deetha
Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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Res
HBD deetha...
Your frnds luv you...
Unres
amazing os deetha
like always beautifully written
your writting skills are really commendable

pehle toh i loved the way u showed their friendship...

The way they talk with each other, have fun masti...

Then that jealousy part was awesomeee...me super likey

The end was superb...rey going to london and meeting her
their confession everything
it was superb

this story made me remember jtyjn somewhat 😆

i love such return gifts
thank u
and happy birthday again
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Res !


We Love u very very much Deetha :)
I know.. We both havnt interacted dat much but still u def hold a special place in my heart:)
Wish u A very very Happy Birthday.. May god bless u ! 😊
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tu jaake scraps check kariyo sabse pehle..

i sent the list of names..
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mera ek sawal hai..
what was the day which was imp to both of them???

loved it..

mereko laga fir 2 parts mein post karegi//


nhi kiya...

amazingly writte..

puri journey... :D

sawal ka jawab de diyo please...
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

mera ek sawal hai..

what was the day which was imp to both of them???


oops likhna bhool gayi!!! It was the day she knew that they can apply for the institution,...


loved it.. thanks re!!

mereko laga fir 2 parts mein post karegi//😆


nhi kiya...

amazingly writte..

puri journey... :D

sawal ka jawab de diyo please...



aww thanks and glad you liked it re !!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mereko laga hi tha ...
pata hai... :D

glad it matched...

mereko us phase se bada pasand hai OS... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Once again Happy Birthday Deetha!

I have not read it sorry! Actually i was waiting for the SS version but guess you decided to skip it!


-Marium

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