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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

another mindblowing update!!😊

y khushi is so keen abt the punisher????
does she want 2 take revenge???

aenav has a very sharp mind...it seems like he might not be insane...but after reading the previous update it's pretty clear that he is pretty much insane...i'm so confused😕

i think dr.jha has a skeleton in the closet...

wondering what will happen next...

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atulg

@atulg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Wondering why Khushi is discussing her findings about Akash with Arnav. I am sure she has dug up info about Arnav as well...what are these 2 trying to achieve? And why does Arnav want to help Khushi? Will you be writing a chapter on Khushi's take on Arnav...so far it is mentioned that Arnav scares the hell out of Khushi and she got him investigated as well...what did she find out?
What was the small packet that Arnav slipped to Khushi?
Waiting to see what Khushi discovers during her days in hell hole...
You know this story so far has only been getting more and more convoluted...waiting for all the knots to be untied...

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

So Khushi and Arnav planned that Khushi should hurt Arnav so that she
can get into one of the solitary rooms.I wonder if Dr.Jha can guess that
it is all planned as he seems extremely observant.Since Arnav has
been in the place longer than Khushi he knows him quite well...

RBji you have named this story very rightly :)

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

This story is driving me insane.. I keep thinking about who really is insane & who is not.

What is the setting between Akash & Shyam?

One thing I admire is the bonding between Arnav & khushi..

Wonder what Khushi is going to do during her solitary stay!! She is more interested to know about Akash's mystery than her own case :)

I just love this Khushi & her ways!!

Can't wait to read the next update!

Thanks for the pm.

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Anamika Kumari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

You know what it's very hard for a writer to maintain the suspense till the ends...and give hints in bits!!!!

Arnav and Khushi are playing together!!!

I can see that they see through each other very well!!!!

Why khushi is trying too know about Akash..and punisher???

She had been attacked...so she must have seen the punisher...😕...or not!!!

I know they both made a facade for khushi to go into the solitary room!!!

But there's something more to it!!!

Shyam is doc...but here something is fishy...I don't know...but I am curious about Anjali too!!!

Maybe she is involved...or may be she is the punisher...now when I think of the previous parts...Anjali seems to be a good suspect!!!!

Malvika has been trapped...I guess...or she did some grave mistake!!!

But I am loving it more day by day...can't wait for the next part...This one really was very refreshing and amusing!!!...thanks a lot...I owe you for this😉!!!!

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

this story is getting more and more interesting and confusing me even more in the process!

now y is she khushi sharing all this with arnav! trying to gain his confidence and make him trust her? its so complicated!

so im going to rest my brain and patiently wait for the the next update. lol

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Niks

@NiksAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Wow...read it all in one go...wonderful fiction...m lovin it...highly anxious abt the next update...!!!

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Wow khushi is like a female Sherlock
Her n Arnav r a deadly combo
Wondering if Arnavs there for another purpose like khushi . She's there to stop from being sent to prison n I'm thinking to find guy who really lipped her sis?!?
That could be why she's so interested in Akaash n his trips to solitary
God she was so scary when she was banging Arnavs head on the table n he just smiled afterwards ...he might not be insane bit he is crazy 😆
What was in the package ?
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n update soon

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

wow...what a plan ...these insane people are totally geniuses...wicked story...keep it up...

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Ruthi777

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

I am always afraid to read your stories, they get me so involved that I get hooked on to it. When I see a new story I tend not to read it for a couple of weeks before giving in. The first one I read was Gravity and I was so mesmerized by the way you had worked on the characters and the story line, so twisted with so much upheaval in their lives. Then after a long long break I read We the people I am still trying to get my head around the story. Recently I read your Love inc. It was one of your light hearted stories but still your charcters had so much depth. And then I went ahead and read Escape velocity. I have no words for that story, I never expected what you did to that story, I was mind blown.

And now you know why I am afraid, u make me think about what you write !!! This one is another one of your brilliant pieces. This story reminds me parts of Girl, interrupted and One flew over the cuckoo's nest. I know it is no where along any of those story lines but I am still blown away. And I am so glad that none of arnav or khushi have anything to do with the characters of the show ;)

I love how twisted and brilliant u have made arnav and khushi in this.

I am so glad that you write these stories. You should someday publish them as books or short stories :)

Now waiting for your next update and I love that you have short but very mind boggling updates.