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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

the story is a total mystery and keeps on getting better...loving it

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Wow,,, the shit just got more real !!!

Khushi obviously has hidden agenda to be there among a group of certified insane with narcissistic tendencies.

Shyam has actually caught on to that fact is more alarming!

Arnav is more dangerous than Akash also since he is playing it all psychologically.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

shorter but frequent updates are ur forte. as a writer uve managed to keep up the pace of the story brilliantly. i wuld love to read more frequently

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atulg

@atulg

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Brilliant update as always. So Khushi thinks Dr. Jha bought her "insanity" act...where as in reality is it nothing like that. Just like how Dr. Malavika finds it difficult to filter the lies from truth when speaking to Arnav...I am not able to figure out what is relevant to the main story and what are the defelctions that you are throwing at us 😊 About the lenght of the update - In none of your stories, after reading an update I have got bothered by the length of the update, but I definitely miss reading a new chapter when you fail to update a certain day (which thankfully is quite rare). So I really like the current format.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

great update RB

so khushi is sane

its getting more and more interesting

i prefer daily updates RB but will leave it to you to decide

thx for the pms

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

I'm FINE with the update length since you update almost daily. As for whether Arnav and Khushi will get together or not... 😕 That should be the least of everyone's concerns here. I wouldn't worry about it and just concentrate on the story.

Coming back to which, so Khushi is NOT 'clinically insane'? I'd thought as much (although I reiterate, madness and sanity are matters of popular perception)

I get the vague feeling that there is a deeper game underfoot here. And Arnav and Akash are both freaking scary. Bas.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

The length of the update is absolutely fine to me...very interesting...story...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

interesting update..continue soon..😊

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zyanah

@zyanah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#399

super brilliant...I dont actually care about romance though.

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#400

this was two very interesting updates and in a way it brought light to many people's character!

for chapter 6: even im scared of arnav! he seems to be having a hidden agenda! n poor payal! i have a feeling that someone did that tp her but who! that is the question! with so many people lurking around its difficul to say who!

for chapter 7: oh khushi is faking all this! is she the one who is responsible for handling the case and finding that killer! n how did arnav knows about her scar! something is really not linking up! n anjali and Dr Jha seem to nice! lol

very eagerly waiting for the next update