ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Nice FF!!

You are an extremely talented writer. You always come up with a very unique story, interesting characterizations & a gripping format.

I felt so bad for Akash.. He must have worked very hard to achieve what he had (profession & family wise) & lost all of it. Wonder who was the real killer?? Life is so unpredictable!! We plan so much for our better future & sometimes it all goes away without any warnings :(

Eagerly waiting to read more on Arhi's past & their case progress with Malvika & Shyam.

Thanks for the pm.

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sairam03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Sorry for late comment and thanks for the pm. Wonder full as always reading your story. Story by each chapter is revealing each person ...my rom com brain is polishing reading your intellectual updates. Thank you once again.

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

This tale gives me the chills (in a good way) every time I read it.

So Arnav exhibited definite sociopathic traits before this but now keeps to himself.

And Akash's tale was horrifying. I understand now (I think) where the vigilante-delusions come from. His mind is trying to protect itself from delving too far into the past where unfathomable hurt and guilt lie.

I can't even imagine what it must be for his colleagues, who are still (in a a manner of speaking) sane. To witness that meltdown for themselves and come to the realization of exactly how fragile the human mind really is.

The line between sanity and insanity is any case, a matter of popular perception.

Oh no oh no! Cliffhanger!

(still don't like Malvika, the manipulative woman)

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amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Your work is very interesting...what must happened in the facility...waiting to know...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

wow poor akash...fantastic update...continue soon...

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YaSha0512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Wow the depth to this story is amazing
So poor Akaash was a Dr like shyam but he snapped when his family was murdered but instead of exactin revenge he tortured n killed the wrong man leaving him do aly for his mistake...wow he really nursed him to health just so he could torture him boy that's evil
Looks like Arnav n khushi r quite similar both r smart n know how to manipulate others into a situation they want will they clash or partner up
Can't wait but will just have to wait n see
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Fantastic and brilliant update

Malvika is trying to worm into Dr. Jha's professional life and hopefully find out information which she can hopefully use to her advantage.

Poor Shyam told her about Akash how he worked with him and he was a doctor and now looking at his state it makes him cry, that was so sad.

Poor Akash, his wife and daughter was murdered and then he tortured and killed the wrong guy thinking he was responsible for killing his family and now the guilt is probably eating him up and no wonder he is so angry and temperamental.

Please continue soon, eager to read and find out what's happened at the facility.

Thanks for the PM xx

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Sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

nice update...akash's story was horrific..very sad...

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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

As you peel the layers back, more gruesome tales are revealed. Felt so bad for Akash, a brilliant mind in a tragic circumstance. Shyam seems to be nice enough. Malvika though does not appear to have very good intentions. Sound like she is fishing for information and to try toget on Shyam's good side to let her 'treat' Kushi? Arnav seems to be getting more calulating in a quiet way. In my opinion, that is when things get worse. At least Kushi communicates a little. Sorry could not comment this morning as I was running behind.

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Dr. Malvika is such an oppurtunist.

I felt that Anjali not being present in the dinner made a lot of difference to her well-calculated Plans.

Dr. Jha seems to be a nice person.

Akash and his story is heart-breaking.

Thanks for the PM.