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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn! This is hard. I don't know how you write all this. But what's happening to them is hard. Maybe wrong too. Time will tell.

Aakash, as many others pointed out is interesting. Well, no surprises there! ;) So he was a successful doctor before the tragedy. Is this killer the same as Khushi's killer? IS there some connection? I dunno, I'm just.. having these vibes that they might be connected. Again, time (read, updates! :P) will tell. But none of them is easy to figure out. Arnav, Khushi, Aakash, Malvika, Shyam.. Shyam is the only one who seems like a plain fellow. All the others, well. Time will tell. :D

Oh, and Anjali's tumble? Is that inspired by your own fall? :D


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: appy_12

Damn! This is hard. I don't know how you write all this. But what's happening to them is hard. Maybe wrong too. Time will tell.


Aakash, as many others pointed out is interesting. Well, no surprises there! ;) So he was a successful doctor before the tragedy. Is this killer the same as Khushi's killer? IS there some connection? I dunno, I'm just.. having these vibes that they might be connected. Again, time (read, updates! :P) will tell. But none of them is easy to figure out. Arnav, Khushi, Aakash, Malvika, Shyam.. Shyam is the only one who seems like a plain fellow. All the others, well. Time will tell. :D

Oh, and Anjali's tumble? Is that inspired by your own fall? :D


@Bold - OMG OMG OMG I didn't even think of that!
They said that Khushi's attacker was actually a vigilante who runs around attacking people who have escaped the law ... as Khushi did.
It didn't even occur to me that maybe Akash's wife and child could have escaped the system of justice in some way! I went forward with the assumption that why would the wife and child of a respectable doctor do something that would require them to escape the law.
But now that you said it, I am beginning to wonder why not?
All these questions, and just no answers.
Only time will tell.
Although I do have a theory ... its far fetched and really wild, but ... its there.
Beginning to ramble, its the caffeine, I assure you.
-Vee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Every chapter brings along so many revelations! I wonder what got to Akash finally- the guilt or the inability to catch the real killer. You're doing a very good job with this one

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it !! The mystery is intensifying.
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Posted: 12 years ago

I am really sorry I'm spamming you like this, but this is something I just couldn't resist doing ...

Picture credit - Google :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
this fiction drives me to the edge of my seat.
Brilliant!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: V323


@Bold - OMG OMG OMG I didn't even think of that!
They said that Khushi's attacker was actually a vigilante who runs around attacking people who have escaped the law ... as Khushi did.
It didn't even occur to me that maybe Akash's wife and child could have escaped the system of justice in some way! I went forward with the assumption that why would the wife and child of a respectable doctor do something that would require them to escape the law.
But now that you said it, I am beginning to wonder why not?
All these questions, and just no answers.
Only time will tell.
Although I do have a theory ... its far fetched and really wild, but ... its there.
Beginning to ramble, its the caffeine, I assure you.
-Vee


Exactly! But I didn't think Aakash's family would be someone who escaped the law. I thought, Aakash, being a respectable doctor, might have helped some other guy to escape the law. Or maybe his wife did. Because this killer doesn't seem like the revenge seeking type. We can go on if we continue to speculate this way. Many many theories.

@Bold: Haha! You and I are very similar, then! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: appy_12


Exactly! But I didn't think Aakash's family would be someone who escaped the law. I thought, Aakash, being a respectable doctor, might have helped some other guy to escape the law. Or maybe his wife did. Because this killer doesn't seem like the revenge seeking type. We can go on if we continue to speculate this way. Many many theories.

@Bold: Haha! You and I are very similar, then! :D

I was actually thinking into something like somebody ELSE donning the persona of Khushi's attacker(Lets call him X), just for one night.
Just think how convenient it could be? Obviously, because this guy runs around being judge, jury and executioner himself, media and news would naturally circulate his stories to be immortalized in public memory. Maybe Akash's wife did have some enemy, a clever one at that. He has been waiting for an opportunity and BANG, one presents itself to him. Maybe Akash's wife gets into a very minor scrupple, something like jumping the red light. She manages to escape the entire court proceeding by asking her husband to pull a few strings. People do that at times, and its not even something polite company would say "haawww" over
Akash's wife's enemy, let us call him A, gets the wind of this. Slowly, he formulates a plan. It would be so simple, just wear the costume of X for one night, and kill the wife and for a good measure, the child.
Of course this plan has so many holes, the biggest one being what would the wife of a respectable doctor be doing with a clever enemy out for her blood.
But then if we worked out the fine details, it kind of fits in, nahi?
Urgh, I think the caffeine is really getting to me. Let me go hit the shower
Love,
Vee
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Posted: 12 years ago
One thing that has kept me up. I remember Akash saying that he was a vigilante, atleast he believed so. Even in this not so sane state of his, he says that. He killed the person who he thought killed his wife.

The killer is a vigilante. So, what are you really trying to say, here?

And my heart goes out to Shyam, really. More than the loss of a dear friend, it's also the vast disintegration of such brilliance. And having to watch that waste away... This is one story where Shyam's beginning to grow on me(:

Anyway would have flipped after what Akash went through...now what happened at the facility?
And I don't trust Malvika. At all.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Vee: I won't comment anything on the story or the comments though I want to type it all out but will not. However I will definitely tell you that...bring those theories out. It's only five chapters now and there is only a layer of story which has been told. :=) Thanks for the nice image too :=)

The name RockBarbie: It's a username of a character from a Taiwanese TV show. It's called Bumpoff Lover. I highly recommend this serial to anyone who likes mind games, layered story and a nice thriller.

@appy: I will not expand on your theory either but I will give you a hint - anthologies :-)


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