Arhi FF: The Matchmaker, Thread 1 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey are you posting your comments on the feedback?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Afya, it was amazing...loved it.


I know why the videos were important they carried they story forward, especially the the one at the end.( will come to that again)

So basically Arnav is confused about her reaction, he cannot figure her out and her intentions, he has never seen people with out an alterior motive and so cannot accept that she is just a nice, honest and good person, one who is not motivated by money or status! He is just being a product of the circumstances he has had to see growing up or to grow up!
He is surprised and taken back by the way she spoke to him and why she had no interest in his deal which to him was such a lucrative offer...so he does what he is best at and doubts her reasons and her more...wondering if she has her eyes set on something bigger instead of taking her at face value ! Perfectly brought out the difference in the two people!

He is worried that Khushi will divulge the details of his proposition but little does he know that she will fight her battles on her own...and not include others...Anjali feels Khushi was probably scared of Arnav s reaction so has asked her ...loved how she comes in and seeing him asleep comments! She is funny too! Her spirit and attitude I love!

Loved the video here...atleast there was a moment of tenderness for her that she got ...even if it was an act...to convince mami, reiterated her belief that he is indeed crazy ( here , unlike the Khushi on the show has never met him before and has no history with him amd therefore no clue about his other sides, whereas the Khushi on the show has before seen the other side so here her confusion and surprise at his behaviour would be ten fold more )
That done, loved the NK and Khushi exchange, very natural and light ...

Loved that he does not change overnight and agrees to go with her, but unknowingly has sent her with Shyam ...are we too expect a MU here in the future...I hope by the time she and Arnav have a better understanding and that is avoided!

I like how he is thinking about her without wanting too, and loved the video insert here, it took the story forward, she has left ( does he know she is going to be away for a week?) he wonders if he is making a mistake, I am guessing having seen her tears he feels restless like he is doing something wrong ! I loved,that dilemma and anguish, he does not want to be wrong or think about her and he has no control on his feelings...

So now when she is away...will he value her more? Will he suddenly have work in Lucknow?

Friday seems so far away...but I know I will...superb ., loved it !

Thanks Vandana for such an awesome feedback yet again.😳

The whole idea of this FF came from the videos...I wanted to write something incorporating them in the story line. So, You can understand my frustration when I couldn't upload a video when I had written an update incorporating those scenes.

You are right! Even that shirt scenes make her wonder how crazy he was!

And as far as Shyam is concerned, can't divulge too many details but be assured that the end would be fair.😊

I know friday is far away...but...it can't be helped.

Thanks Vandana again for such a beautiful comment. Your comment sums up my update perfectly.😳 And it also enables me to understand if I have succeeded in conveying what I wanted. Looks like I have!😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I thought shyam was a good guy here. But he showed his true colours.

Arnav needs a reality check.
You can't spoil the life of an innocent girl like this.
Hope he learns a lesson soon.
Thanks a lot for the PM.
Will read your other stories too now.

Shyam as a villain is superb. So, I thought why not use him!😊
But don't worry evil will not win in this story😊

You are right, Arnav doesn't realise what he is doing!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: venkata

Just woke up and saw your beautiful ff. first of all thanks. Again awesome update. Loved it. Kushi do not worry in future for sure arnav is going to regret it. Do not know but got a feeling that arnav has started missing kushi.😉

You are welcome dear.😊
And am glad you liked the update.
I guess he feels bad and is doubting if he did wrong by her.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhysenn

Oh no...Shyam is a creep in this story too??


I really hope Arnav changes for the good...Khushi is not to be blamed for this marriage as well...

All I can say is, "Trust me". I don't want to divulge details yet.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Blondiexzy

great update OMY syham and his dirty mind again I hope this doesn't cause a misunderstanding for them but I am glad Khushi is will be staying away for him for a while.

Thanks dear.😊
But I am amazed how one paragraph about Shyam in the update...and everyone is ready to kill him😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

sorry like button not working

I will then console myself that there are less likes becoz of that😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashw99

Nice update.
Hats off to Khushi's spirit.
But i am really scared of Shyam hope he don't mess with her as it is she is stuck in that non existing marriage and wierd Arnavji.
Will wait for new update thanks for pm.

Thanks😊
You will know more as the story progresses.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rimzu

y m i feeling ders big mu cming..

as in creepwa has gt to b near khushi...jus hope he doesnt do nething bad..
khushi shd hav told arnav reason y she marrd him..
update soon

Keep guessing!😉
Will update on friday.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

OMG! This Arnav! He's such a...!

I hope when he falls, he falls so hard, that it will be impossible for him to get up again! I can't wait for the day when he realizes he is in love with her!! And can't live without her! I hope!!
Thanks for the PM. Waiting to read more... hope he misses he r like hell, when she is gone to her mom's.

OMG! Vittoria, take some deep breaths...Looks like you will murder Arnav if you find him😆

He will fall in love, al right. All in good time!😛

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