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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShanayaShimmers

Oye hoyee kya romantic shayari!!! Lovd it! Continuee soon!




Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...

awesome
the way arjun cares for them...
sasha cool.
atlast he told her...
precap is interesting...
continue soon


Thanks guys!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Divz :

Lmao! Waiting for tera SO waala avatar! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: life93

hi mridu🤗... sam angry with ayesha or with himself?...both got hurt... arjun concerned for aisha n sam😃...sam loves aisha😉😉😉...n now he accepted ...🥳... update soon mridu🤗


Hello! 🤗
Haha...sab pata chalega, bas update ka w8 karo!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkerbell

loving themmm continue soon


Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Awesome Part!!


Loved it!!!


Thanks a lot!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MriduB

@Divz :


Lmao! Waiting for tera SO waala avatar! ;)


lol le... check ur scrap😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21


lol le... check ur scrap😉


Hahaha...scrap toh kab ka dekh liya...tujhe kitna kuch bata bhi diya hai meine!😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MriduB


Hahaha...scrap toh kab ka dekh liya...tujhe kitna kuch bata bhi diya hai meine!😉😆


hahaah do din ka quota full😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello, two parts today! 😛


Part - 6

Next day,
ETF Office,
Conference room,

"Aayesha...tumhari baat huyi kya Rathore Sir se? Kal raat se phone try kar raha hunn...lag hi nahi raha..." Shree said.

"Nahi woh...hum log office mein kuch baat kar rahe thay, uske baad woh chale gaye..." Aayesha replied.

"Kaisi baat...zara humein bhi toh pata chale..." Sakshi said, as she winked at Aayesha.

"Agar Arjun Sir aa gaye na...toh aaj ke baad humara kabhi pata nahi lagne waala..." Chotu said.

Suddenly, Arjun entered the room.

"Rathore kahaan hai?" he asked.

"Arjun Sir, Rathore Sir toh aaj aaye hi nahi..." Aayesha replied.

"Aise kaise nahi aaya? Usse pata tha ki aaj DIG Sir ke saath ik urgent meeting thi...Uska phone bhi try kar raha hunn phir bhi phone nahi lag raha..." Arjun said.

"Sir mein bhi kal raat se unka phone try kar raha hunn...par phone nahi lag raha..." Shree told him.

"Shree...uske phone ki last location nikalo..." Arjun ordered him.

"Yes Sir..." Shree replied.

Few minutes later,
Arjun's cabin,

"Arjun Sir..." Shree said, as he waited for Arjun's approval to enter into his cabin.

"Haan Shree, kuch pata chala?" he asked.

"Sir woh...Rathore Sir ke phone ki last location ETF Premises hi hai..." he replied.

"Kya? Koi uske ghar gaya?" he asked again.

"Nahi Sir..." Shree replied.

"Acha, Chotu ko kaho ki Rathore ke ghar jaake check kare..." he ordered Shree.

Shree entered the conference room and told Chotu to do so.

As soon as Chotu got up to leave, Aayesha spoke up,

"Mein bhi chalun?"

"Haan, ismein puchne ki kya baat hai..." Chotu replied.

She slightly smiled at him and the duo left.

3 hours later,

"Chotu, Aayesha, pata chala kahaan hai woh?" Arjun asked them.

Both of them nodded in -ve.

"Aise kaise achanak gaayab ho sakta hai woh?" Arjun said to no one in particular.

"Magic hoga Arjun..." replied Sakshi.

Arjun just turned and shot her a glare.

Meanwhile,

"Bhaijaan, yeh toh kuch nahi bol raha..."

"Bolega...bahut jald bolega..."

"Par kaise bhaijaan...mera matlab, kal se bura haal kar diya hai iska...par yeh hai ki kuch nahi bol raha..."

"Rajput jo thehra...mar jayega lekin dushmano ka saath kabhi nahi dega..."

"Ab kya bhaijaan..."

"Sadne do usse yahin...baad mein aa kar dekhte hain..."

He laid inside the chamber badly beaten. But still was lucky enough to hear the convo of the two people talking outside the chamber.

He tried to move, but in vain. He felt so helpless. He felt as if all his courage, energy, strength etc. had disappeared somewhere.

Back to ETF Office,

"Agar Rathore Sir itni der se gaayab hai...kahin iska matlab yeh toh nahi ki unka kidnap ho gaya?" Chotu spoke up, as everyone present inside the Conference room looked at him like 'what the...'

"Woh koi doodh pita bacha nahin ki uska kidnap ho jayega Chotu..." Arjun blasted.

"Chotu galat nahi keh raha..." Aayesha spoke up.

"Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki ho sakta hai shayad Sir kisi musibat mein ho..." she added.

"Hmm...nahi toh koi bhi Senior Level ka officer aise achanak gaayab nahi ho jaata..." Sakshi too spoke up.

Arjun thought up for a while,

"Tum sab log kal jaldi aa jaana...then we will proceed further..."

Meanwhile,

"Yeh le...khaana kha..."

"Nahin...mein nahi khaunga..." he replied.

"Bhai wah...dekha Ajmal...bola tha ki Rajput hai...dushmano ke haath ka khaana bhi nahi khayega...aisa karo...isse wohi khilao jo kal raat se yeh kha raha hai..." he ordered his men and left.

~Sorry for mistakes. Likes n cmnts plz~~

Scroll down for Part-7!😳
Edited by MriduB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here's pt-7! Quite short but...😛


Part - 7

He winced. He cried.

But they didn't leave him. They kept on beating him, until he nearly went unconsciuos.

"Bas Karo...agar bhaijaan ko pata chala ki humne isse itna pita hai...toh woh humein nahi chodenge..." Ajmal said to the men of his gang and left.

The next morning,
ETF Office,

"Sir..." she said.

"Haan Liza..." he said.

"Sir ye koi cd hai...aapke liye aayi..." she told him and left.

"Play karo isse Shree..." Arjun ordered Shree.

Shree did the same.

No face! Just a black blanket and a dangerous voiceover.

"Pehchana..."

As soon as Arjun heard this, he nearly guessed who it was.

"Mein bhi kisse puch raha hunn...The Great ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte...hahahahahahaha..."

Arjun wanted to punch the guy hard. He controlled himself and went on listening.

"Lagta hai koi apne dost ke gaayab...ohooo...maafi chahta hunn...koi apne purane dost ki gumshudgi ko lekar chinta mein nahi hai...nahi ho toh mein aa gaya hunn na...chinta badhane...hahahaha..."

"Mein baat ko zyaada ghumane nahi waala...iss liye seedhe seedhe keh raha hunn...agar tumhein apna Chief zinda waapis chahiye...toh Rafiq ko humare hawale karde..."

"Aur agar humein Rafiq na mila...toh tumhein tumhara yeh Chief kabhi zinda waapis nahi milega..."

And then the video went blank.

"Nahi...hum log Rafiq ko uske hawale nahi kar sakte..." Arjun spoke up.

Suddenly, DIG Coelho entered the conference room.

"I guess aap logon ko bhi cd mili hogi..." he said.

The team nodded in +ve.

"Sir lekin hum aisi hi Rafiq ko uske paas nahi bhej sakte...bahut hi mushkil se woh haath aaya tha...nahi...hum aisa nahi kar sakte..." Arjun said.

"Par humein Rathore ko bhi bachana hai..." DIG replied.

Neither they could send Rafiq to him, nor they could put Sameer's life in danger.

"Rawte, tumhein department se jo bhi madad chahiye, woh tumhein milegi...par mujhe Rathore sahi salamat waapis chahiye..." said the DIG and left.

Arjun was busy thinking, when,

"Sir, yeh ik cd hai aapke liye..."

Shree took the cd and played it.

"Uff ho...badi mushkil se toh Rafiq ko pakda tha ACP Saab aapne...lekin ab...jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo...zyaada waqt na humare paas hai na tumhare ACP Rathore ke paas..."

"Sikandarrr!" yelled Arjun and stormed out of the conference room.

~~Sorry for the mistakes. Likes n cmnts plz~~

Hmm...chote updates hai na? I know, next time ik bada waala update dene ka try karungi! 😃

Par vaise dekha jaaye toh 2 updates diye hain...yaar thanks toh kaho uske liye!😳
Edited by MriduB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😃*edited*
yayy me first...!!1
are wah two two updates ek sath kya baat hai JB...!!😉
the updates were super duper top class...!!!
ohh no sameer kidnapped?😲 hope they find him soon...!!!
arghh hating the way those people are behaving with sameer...!!!
loved everyone's concern for their chief...!!
awww aisha is so tensed for him...!!!
omg is sab ke piche sik hai... wo nai bachega ab...!!😡
continue soon...!!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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