SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

My goodness that was so painful to read! It reminded me of Diwali night when Khushi locked herself in her room and cried.

Please make things better for her soon.

I just love this story!

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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Just loved this update.
I wanna say something here. When a person is not articulate in speaking or not good with words misunderstandings or argument or whatever it is, they are bound to happen and its my personal experience. I just loved it for making it look real not at all cliched.
Poor khushi she is going through same and waiting to know what she does next and hope he learns how to talk without hurting others especially khushi in due course 😊

Thanks for the PM

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: swati-89
Iam so in love with ur Devi Maiya...

Such a rollar coaster emotional update.

But one line stood out in this whole mess for me, that even after she misunderstood Arnav's round abt way of his unique style of explanation...(which noone in their right minds could have added up to make 2 and 2 make 4 and understand why what she thinks matters to him!!!!!)... even after she is so hurt and is crying her heart out, yet in its midst, she understood this one fact that Arnav did care for her.

Loved the update.

Continue soon...

Swati

This was what i wrote even before i saw that u Pmed me...

Loved the update.

Swati

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deepa

@deeswarna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

that was simply beautiful!

it was not a confession from arnav but still it was better than nothing! atleast now khushi can understand him better!

but i have a feeling that khushi ll try her best to avoid him now that she knows that he somehow cares against his will:(

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564436

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

your not my type really arnav are you serious

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kotha

@kotha15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

very sad update..i realy feel bad for khushi...i hope arnav wl undrstnd her feeling...n pls update soon..u update 1in month..pls increase ur updating number..