SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Ohhh arnav ( smh) he has made a mistake in saying what he did... But in a way did favor to khushi, now she has had some heartbreak she will think with her head and be fierce about what she wants!!!

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Ahh! Such stupid asr always saying the wrong words. I hope they patch up soon!

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

I had been reading this story for last few days..

I really loved it, it was like refreshing my IPK memory, but in a far better way.. in a way i always dreamed the show to be.

With last two chapters, specially the last one, you just won my heart! It couldn't be any better.

All the steps khushi took since the time Lavanya told her about her relationship with arnav, were admirable, ...her leaving office earlier, returning the gift and then her conversation with arnav at the temple. Was it really khushi?? strong, determined and dignified!

It is true that ASR was confused, .. but then trying to date Lavanya just to deal with his own dilemma was not acceptable. And it doesn't end there.. when he was desperate, he had to spell it out before Khushi, that she was not his type. Everyone knows that, he knows it, khushi knows it .. still they moved forward as they were, specially he was responding to his desires...

Even that could be acceptable, if he surrenders to his desires forgetting all differences of the material world. But no, he would then remind her about their differences of status!

Anyways, what I loved most is khushi's reaction after that. I am both amazed and proud.. "don't do that again" Her determined and decisive voice overwhelmed me with pride!

Loved it!

Edited by golpokobita - 12 years ago

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

So finally Arnav did f**ked things up... I loved where Khushi told him that since he knew that she wasn't his type he shouldn't have taken things fwd like kiss her and all that and he should have stayed in his limits... poor Khushi Arnav made her see so many dreams in such a short period of time... perfect description of emotions and behavior from Khushi's side felt so so so bad for her cant tell u... I haven't been so much eager for the next update like I am right now so UPDATE SOON

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libbyferns

@libbyferns

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Beautiful update, a bit heartbreaking though. When will Arnav ever stop saying wrong things, huh?

Loved Khushis' reponse to his' you are not my type'.

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Oh!! Poor khushi she is heartbroken...

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Nupur

@nupsiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

wow..that was an amazing update..i love ur writing.. Ur every word was justice to their feelings.. So this is my 600 th post and this dedicated to thiss ff coz i love this story :)

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

😭🥺
💔😊
i think u understand what i want to tell with all the emotions
love it

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Awesome update very emotional and well written
can't wait for next part continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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Mischief-Managed

@sarahehsan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

You already know how much I appreciate your comment. 😊 And how much you made me blush! 😆

I threw water on your ideas, didn't I? I cant write complicated stuff. This is a simple story .. standing on a simple foundation. And it will end that way too. Not too much twist & turn .. just how these to finally give in to love. 😊

The lines I underlined .. I nodded my head mentally when reading those. You really read well, lady! And you really got my perpectives right. 😊

I cannot do enough justice to your comment .. so in plain words .. Thank you. 😊

Would love to see you here again! You dont comment much, I understand! 😉

I do know! 😎 Thank you for the appreciation and response, sweetheart! :) I've to tell you that I 'love' the stories that are the likes of your story! Simply Amazing! 😊

I did? Oh, that's great, innit? Though, sometimes I keep wondering if I read way too much! Thanks again for the clarification, honey! 😛

You're Welcome! *smiles genuinely*

I would love, too! You're so understanding, darling! Luv ya! 🤗

Edited by sarahehsan - 12 years ago