SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Thnxx for the pm
Lovely update..;)

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Swetha Reddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

good one... update soon plz.. 😊

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

nice update..

written beautifully😊

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

awesome part... loved it!!!

i'm sure devi mayya is planning something for arnav and khushi in the fashion show!!! 😉

please do pm me for future updates...

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Mere itte bade cmmnt me aapko sirf zara sa hi dikha..:(

Haw!!

Means my cmmmnts r turnin meaningless..:(

Dhatt tarike/11

Okii..

So dis chptr..

He said he went on dates..wid La..coz of Khushi..?

Haddd h..le hi jaana tha date pet oh mjhe le jaata..:(

1 b chalta..:(

Okkiii..;D

Sooo hewas confused wid his own words...n meaning..n dt made me confuse...

He said..she's nt his typ..

Mtlb?

Ws it in +ve sense or –ve>?

Mtlb k he cnt marry her..n she believes in marriages..dis as in +ve?

He cnt marry her coz she's nt of his level/stndrd?

I mean i feel..Arnav wont say dt abt standard or his fav level wrds or so?

By d end..it was lyk..he only meant i marriage part..dk wt n hww Khsuhi tuk it as..n dts wt confusin me.

Sooo much cnfsd!!!!!!!!!!!!

D drive back 2 home was silent..:(

She dint talk 2 him..n he felt bad n hurt..

She accepted d Jhola..

Meri warnin seriously le li Khushi ne...about parcelling it 2 me..:DD

D last lyn 4m her 2 him..warnin..dnt do dt again n limit..:)

Wow

Grt yu said dt Khushi,,he wud surely no his limit nxt tym..;)

She cried her heart out!!

She asked Aman abt nt cumin 2 wrk..n he dint agree..n she has 2 go..

Runnin away z neva a solution grl.!!

Face it..

loved d chaptr..:)thnx.:)

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Ranjitha

@ranjuranjitha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

very nice update...!!!
just hope arnav clears off all the misunderstandings... 😭

cant see both arnav and khushi in pain!!!

and arnav sometimes is such a dumb ass!!!! 😡

oh devi mayya please make arnav see some sense and teach him how to speak and use his heart...!!!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

nice update...

finally arnav acknowledged his feeling not completely though...poor khushi got totally confused..and u wrote that part very well...the most discombobulated confession ever...what i believe is that ASR was the most confused character in the show...he didn't even know whats going on in his own mind and heart...To the outer world surely he is the mighty ASR but in reality he was a baffled soul...and this confusion according to me is the most difficult to delineate...but again u did a fantastic job

loved the way arnav was desperately trying to make khushi understand his plight and obstinate khushi was ready to understand it...

"Don't you get it?? You are not my type!!"

my heart broke a little reading this dialogue of arnav...i loved this part very much...this was something very new n refreshing...

"You don't have to explain anymore, Arnav ji."

her reaction left me amazed...i was expecting something else entirely n you gave us something totally different...m actually amazed because of ur skill of surprising ur readers... n believe me i loved the surprise very much...again when she said she will be keeping the gift to ensure him that everything is okay between them u pleasantly surprised me...remember how each episode of show used to leave us ineffable...that what exactly u did this time...

khushi is correct here...but i never expected her to give advice to ASR...not complaining though..this showed how much strong she is...she definitely emerged as the stronger one

Arnav Singh Raizada cared

what an optimistic girl...but sooner or later arnav will understand that she the only missing piece of his life...i just hope he realizes that soon...

Really looking forward of their next meeting...m so excited...not only devi maiyya but i would also like to thank aman...god bless him...😃

continue soon n thanx for the pm😊

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

Beautiful !!! confused Arnav and understanding Khushi.. loved them.. poor Devi Maiyya is also helpless before ARSHI... loved the chapter...

thanks for pm 😊

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dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#549

yaar baaki chhodo..tumhari devi maiyya itni cool hai na..kabhi kabhi man karta hai, jaake badi si jhappi le loon unki!!! seedha yashraj ki movies ki daadi hoti hai na jaise, cool daadi, wahan se characterization hua lagta hai!!! YO devi maiyya, you rock!!!😆

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#550

awesome update...

sometime what anger does to person cant be imagined and here again what arnav said in anger caused destruction in their life...

poor khushi.. she have her heart broke many times a day

khushi is also like arnav or maybe more perfect then him to not show her emotions.. arnav sometimes falters but khushi did show her pain and broken heart... nor she was cold.. she was behaving as nothing happened... such a good soul she is..

plz devi mayya do something...

continue soon

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