ArHi FF: Finding Solace-#6 *Completed* - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
payash are too fast ha good😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONGRATS on the new thread. .A lot hapengs in an update. .
Being a mother(that too literaly step) her fears is aceptabl n its natural tat she ll hell worried cing her daugtr fall fo boss's charm. .4m her POV she s doin exactly wt a mom at tat situatn has to do. . Though nt cmpltly she listened to khushi nd i wud sugest her to calm down nd tnk ovr again. .
Buaji wow. .
Khushi s miserable soul here. .😭
Payal wow realy i love her. . She s nt d dumbo here . .
Aakash sexy ass ? ? Seriously 🤣
Congratulatns n happy married life payash. . 😊
Arya . . Too cute kid. .
Arnav atleast nw tak a step payash bein true siblings tuk a step here tryg to suport u both. .
So arnav gonna play here. .waiting thanx fo d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have fell so much in love with this ff...❤️❤️ it was one of my fav. update..

i was reading it silently but Arya's one line brought me into tears...😭 and thanks to payal and akash..they helped me to stop it...😃 love you both...❤️ and i love arya the most...❤️❤️

it was wonderfuL...

do update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
For me, this chapter was all about the relationships.

The one between a mother and daughter, where the love remains intact even when trust has been irretrievably broken.
There's nothing worse than a mother's silence, is there?

The one between a couple who is unsure, yet certain at the same time...
Akash and Payal have taken a huge step, and it should be interesting to see Garima's reaction to this.

The one between a father and his daughter, as he realizes that the little girl now knows the true meaning of selfless love.
This part was written beautifully, Saiyyu.


And finally, our star-crossed lovers.

Does it matter that they weren't together?
No, it does not.
Because I could feel Khushi's devotion to a love that is still unexpressed.
I could understand Arnav's anger at his helplessness.

But most of all, this chapter left me with ever-increasing respect for the sensitivity and maturity of the person writing this.
Love you for writing this. Bas.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy Birthday,to U & d update!🥳

Akash & payal eloped??😆 ...oh,wow!watz garima gonna say to dis?
khushi's too goody-goody! arnav-khushi will have grandchildren if u dnt act fast!

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Posted: 12 years ago
No Garima. YOU have betrayed the faith your daughter and your sister had in YOU. How long have you known Khushi? It didn't occur to you for a moment that she must have had a very strong reason for doing what she is? That you actually believe Tripathi's words is a shame. I'm disappointed Garima Gupta. That is all.

You know who I'm EFFIN' proud of? Akash and Payal. WELL DONE! I don't normally condone elopement but it was necessary in this case. Ok I lied. I TOTALLY condone it. I find it very exciting. I'd warned my mother long ago that I will elope one day. (and when she raised an objection saying that she wants to attend my wedding, I said that I would tell her where I'm getting married and she could turn up "accidentally" but elope I will)

And Arya is a SWEETHEART.

YOU BETTER FIX THINGS BEFORE THEY SCREW UP COMPLETELY ARNAVJI!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful Update!

I loved the part between Buaji,Garima and Khushi.You have written each thought so well.Especially khushi's conflict with Garima was very well conveyed.

I also loved the small exchange between Payash and their confession.So glad Akash overheard mami and Nani conversation about the proposal.

Arya is sweetheart.Her selflessness at such young age makes her Khushi's daughter in every way.
:D

Waiting for next update to see how the very shatir dimaag ASR uses ths opportunity for good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Garima's ire was expected... She had to be angry on her daughter for being wid her rich boss.. Cuz maybe it was what she feared..
Can't deny dat garima is wrong.. Cuz as a mother , she is heartbroken..
I loved the lines you used to describe khushi's reaction to evry statement her mother made..
And she realises! Dat Arnav loves her.. Wats wid guys ? Can't they decipher such simple thing in their emotions! It looks suddenly more of a girly thng to knw if the guy u love , loves u back or not!

And wat can i say about payash!..
Especially payal! Seriously do all girls get such ideas?.. Or its just the gupta sister?.. Marriage? And wo bhi chupa ke!

Aww.. I love bubbly.. She is the sweetest soul! She asked fo wat only a daughter can ask for her mother!
Sach mein.. Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
love this mother daughter duo much...

Garima's action is so apt...

Poor Khushi... she is in trials & tribulations now...

hope this will clear off after Payash fiasco...

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congrts for 25th chap in FS & u buddy...

i love little Arya in this chap much..

though she is too little to understand circumstances..

She took my heart for her demanding to her papa...

Aww... lovely Arya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AAAH ISKO BOLTE HAIN MAHA UPDATE !
Khushi in lucknow buaji and garima goin all dramatic ..ps i loveddd the way she realised she loves him those flashblack...his words to expresss his lovee..haaaye..i cud easily visualize it..and comin bk to Arnav..finally he realised he wantd to marry fr himmm :') His daaauvhtr is suchhh a darlinnng..lettin go of hr khushi di jst fr hr supossed happinesss <3 perfct mummy-betti <3 and payal.and akash jst gt married buahahahahha i cud imagine the repitation of #ipkknd here :p.and Arnavs smile...hes one heck of a shaitaaan :D

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