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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Beautfiul... I was lost in thr story while reading it... U have touched a sensitive topic n yet you did complete justice to it... Darjeeling,,,Tea n sceneries took me to another world... I came to know abotu story from IPKKNd forum thread ''Story of week'' by Lazyleaves... Hope to read more of ur stories...Very nice...

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sweet-fairy

@sweet-fairy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Nice story

thanks lazyleaves 4 recommending this story

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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

read it in one go..!!
awesome dear..!!!
loved it..!!!!

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Micha1005

@Micha1005

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

A wunderfull unconventional lovestory. Even i have a Big scar on my feet and it Took alot of Time to actually accept it myself and Not only love myself but also feel worthy of it. Bravo dear. Will Check out Ur other Stories tio

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Seems nice !!

Will read as soon as I get time !!

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Liya123

@Liya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Read it in one go.

Wow! It was amazing. It was soo refreshing...now I want a cup of tea from kushis stall. U are a very talented writer. I am definitely going to read more of ur stories. Hey sending u a buddy request...accept me :-).

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

first of all i should thank shruthi21 for posting her favorite writers and u were one among them...

i just tried this story...and dear you are awesome...the story so simple and yet so beautiful...i dont know how many more times i am going to read this...i just loved the way khushi expressed her love and the way she accepted arnav's deformity and there interactions were beautifully written...excellent job...

keep it up...👏👏👏

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MysteryMina

@MysteryMina

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

👏 well written...very nice

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

I stumbled upon your Index on the IPK Forum and picked up this beauty because I like the name 'Brewing up.'

The first sip of the tea you served to us was fruity because of Khushi's thought process but fruity with a citrus wedge due to Arnav's aloofness. As I finished with the sip I was left with an urge to drink more from the words you brewed up so lovingly. I understood the Arnav's hesitation and I understood Khushi's jealousy when she saw Lavanya and Arnav together. Lavanya, by the way, was a very endearing character. Just like Aman who had an inkling about Khushi's condition- Love sickness...

I warmed up to Khushi when she mindlessly told Arnav that his eyes were the colour of Oolong tea. It is refreshing to read about a character who knows who she likes and doesn't hesitate in expressing the same.

Your descriptions are vivid and beautiful. The scene with the rain and the kiss didn't just bring in the quintessential romantic angle but the freaking template!

I didn't just drink this tea for its myriad of flavors of budding romance, relationships and commitments it provided, but because of the beautiful experience it provided. Like the descriptions would leap out of the screen and start painting themselves in front of me. Like something in my mouth would be brought to life.

A simple tale of overcoming insecurities and embracing love. Simple but delightful all the more for it. Amazing work, Anupama. :-)