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Divya

@..Divya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Arnav was jealous :p
Loved the way he consoled her.. :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

This is for part one
Wow their daughter is so cute name
And mixture if both her parents too
So she does deals like daddy
But wants to be ready like mummy
Awww that was adorable
Wait what was that all about
Who was that man
Really arnie even after all this time you are feeling jealous seeing your wife with some unknown man
Man khushi was like why am I here
Koi nahin just smile and bare dear
Cheers for pm
Into next one

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

oh so he was anjali's husband
thanks for the pm
nice ending

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: rulama
That was a lovely ending for now. You have left things open to continue!
Enjoyed it very much!
Thank God! it was Prem. Arnav , his jealousy, his anger and his passion. Khushi has no respite!
Master at jumping to conclusion where Khushi is concerned!
When he is so possessive of Khushi wonder how it'll be when Tara has boyfriends or when she wants to marry!
Khushi will have her hands full if they Father-daughter don't agree on the same boy! Haha!!

Rashmi, I have ended it. But considering my history, I always seem to write sequels after a gap...That's why I have left it that way.

I am glad you enjoyed Part 2. I wanted to keep them imperfect as humans are. And Arnav is a passionate man. Khushi is lucky in many ways😉

You are right. God save Tara Gupta Singh Raizada. On second thoughts, Would she need saving? She is his daughter, after all😆

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: chavvi16
This is for part one
Wow their daughter is so cute name
And mixture if both her parents too
So she does deals like daddy
But wants to be ready like mummy
Awww that was adorable
Wait what was that all about
Who was that man
Really arnie even after all this time you are feeling jealous seeing your wife with some unknown man
Man khushi was like why am I here
Koi nahin just smile and bare dear
Cheers for pm
Into next one

Thanks for your detailed feedback,as always.

I am glad you liked it.😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

And here goes part two
He was jealous of his own brother in law
Gosh man that was cute
Awww he didn't like the way that man who is his jiju made khushi laugh
As he wasn't able to do the same
Man they have been apart for too long
But not anymore
The idea of another honeymoon sounds lovely
Awww finally he got some time with her
Yeh Arnie bhi naa what do we do with him
But glad things worked out between them
Cheers for pm

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Fantastic Afya, really really really loved it, amazing one. The detailing of arnav's jealous mind was perfect and I liked it very much.

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Oh sweet.

Loved it.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

oh god arnav and his jealousy and anger...!!!😆 Great update...!

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: KittenRose
Fantastic Afya, really really really loved it, amazing one. The detailing of arnav's jealous mind was perfect and I liked it very much.

Thanks Deepthi. Glad you loved it.😊

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