ArSHi SS : Hold me tight..! NOTE pg121 upt 22/6

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anju

@anjusr06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

tat was fabulous update...

continue soon

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

I wish show me bhi aisa hi hota

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shivanie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Hey that was a nice update ... simply like it cause Arnva heard everything... unlike a misunderstanding ... and He punch Shyam ...lolz .. can imagine his face ... the Pre-cap is awesome... so wanna know wahts gonna be her answer ... well i know its gonna be a "Yes" ... Thanks for PM ...

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arjuhi5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

wow superb loved it...
plzzz update asap...

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sindhu

@sarun21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

thats awesome update dear...

the precap is very nice and waiting for it...

u have written their emotions very well really loved it...

i will appreciate ur work...

pls continue soon and pls pm me...

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Tanu_96

@Tanu_96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

i am extremely sorry for commeting late...hope u haven't removed me from ur list😳

The update was fantastic..the way you portrayed their emotions was just fabulous...
This sick shyaam needs to be thrown away sooon..
Amazing update 👏

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Anamika

@Arshicrazee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Res for aami
Lol Saran..I ressed this for cmnting on 3rd chapter..But before i unressed you posted 4th chapter also..So im gonna drop a cmnt for both the chapters here..Technically..Im cmnting before you posted..4th chappie..lolll...me n my sixth sense.. :-P Im like Alice you know...Hehe..
Both chapters were amazing..Khushi's yearning to go and tell Arnav everything..To get reassured by him..To be comforted by him..Her confusion..Pain..So well written..And Arnav's understanding..They really dont need words to communicate..Eyes will do the job for them..Here also no different..But Arnav actually proposed Khushi..?? :-D That was fast..But why did she say no? Because she thinks it is for Anjali that Arnav is doing that?Or because she wants him to believe in marriage first?? Update sooon...
Love
Aami

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saranya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

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Yippeee🥳 Me first

That was one mind blowing update⭐️

I loved every single word of the story☺️, except for the part where Shyam threw his dirty looks at Khushi😡

You very well described how Arnav felt Khushi's pain. I'm so in love with Arnav. How I wish if the same thing happened in IPKKND as well. It was a really nice gesture by Arnav to take hold of Khushi's hand, when he realized that Khushi was feeling uncomfortable due to Shyam's dirty looks. I'm so glad that Khushi felt secure, when Arnav wrapped her small, fragile hand with his large, warm ones.

I thought that Arnav would take Khushi to the Mandir. But instead he took her to the garden. That didn't come to my mind. How sweet. I love you Arnav❤️ I'm glad that Khushi opened up to Arnav without holding back anymore. And Arnav without stopping her, allowing her to talk was a sensible thing done by him.

I know the embrace was not much, but it warmed my heart. I loved the way both found solace in each others warmth. And Arnav's proposal... Okay I seriously thought Khushi would say "yes". But she said "no"😭 Wonder what's holding her back. But please make her say "yes". Sorry, I wanna see how Shyam burns with jealousy when he sees Arnav & Khushi married☺️

I love Arnav & Khushi❤️

This update really brought a smile to my face😃 You cheered me up, before I close my eyes to go to sleep😆 Thanks a lot, Bubbly😳

Hey, you have forgotten the precap😲

Eagerly waiting for the next chappie

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

r.

un res.

Firstly,I doodled an o.s. and OMG, title of this chapter dint let me sleep yesterday night..

the very first thing am doing now after waking up is opening your o.s. yar.. (brushing my teeth can wait, this o.s. can't! )

OMG,their anxieties and restless nature.. WoW.. So well drafted yar.. And that part when Arnav came and held her hand and snakewa got "J" Uff.. I loved it dammit! 😃

Next,Payal' wedding done, Awww.. beautiful..

and he took her to his mom's garden.. OMG.. Descriptions were mind blowing! :-*

ASR let Khushi speak add not interrupt, now that's something.. I love this "no interruption" thing.. good!

And now after reading many dark stories, I find it weird to read Shyam as a "beast" LOL.

but wow.. he trusts her,he assured her.. he wants to marry her.. And - - WAIT.. KHUSHI DENIED.? WHAT THE-

Grrr. BAD cliff hanger, VERY BAD ONE.. I WANT more.. jaldi..

thanks 4 this amazing chapter.. love you.. :-*

keep pm-ing me plz.. :-P

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