ArSHi SS : Hold me tight..! NOTE pg121 upt 22/6 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
great updatethanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice poor souls . Waiting for the blast . Thks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it. I am glad that Arnav heard the whole conversation. Can't wait to see he proposal . Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
i solely wished these could ve happened in IPKKND...
but didnt...
but u made my wish come true...
loved this arnav who trusts khushi and stands for her when she needs him the most...:)
one best thing in the update was that "u skipped arnav-shyam convo",,..😊
next chap..
MARRY ME...😃😃😃
hope this marr ll not be hasty marr lyk in the serial..
update soon..;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another interesting chapter😊 I loved it😳

I really loved the way Khushi spat out at Shyam in anger. He totally deserved her wrath. I'm so glad that Arnav didn't do anything that would make regret later.

Seriously, Shyam is such a cheap man. How can he just plaster a fake smile, and act in front of his wife as if nothing happened?

I can't imagine what Arnav must be going through at the moment. He must be totally shattered from inside. You have cleverly put down Arnav thoughts and emotions in a touching manner. He must be feeling devastated. I'm glad that you made Khushi decide to tell everything to Arnav, without bothering about the consequences. It was a clever idea.

It was a wise decision of you to not to write the dialogues which took place between Arnav & Shyam. Because I hated that part on the show.

Last part, where Arnav and Khushi shared the eye lock was really emotional. I just loved it. They conveyed so many thing through their eyes, and both of them understood each other well. Nice work honey.

Ohh!!!!!!!!! Now come's the precap. Marry me?☺️ I can't wait anymore😆

Thanks for the pm😃

Update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update..
waiting for their meeting...
thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome story read all the three parts in one go...

nice concept...

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update..
he believes her...
waiting for next part..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ...super duper rocking update yar,,,,,loved it to bits and those lines of rabba ve...oh m lost in this update...
khushi n arnav's pain,arnav's anger...loved everything damn it everything🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesm update...
Lovd d way u describd bout their emotions...
Beautifully writtn...
Cntinue soon

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