Haila!!! Rey 'Itna' Rude and arrogant hai ...
Kese chilla raha tha Kria pe..
Kria ke samna Rey ke first impression ki dhajian urd gai 😆 ...
Taani ka 'Nightmare' 🤣 ...
Kria N Shivam going on a date , iss se taani ke dil mein kuch kuch hoing , great going...
Chalo uski badolat Kria Rey se mili toh sahi 😉 ...
Kria-Taani getting ready together , kabhi socha nai tha ke mai esa bhi kuch parhun gi...
I'm liking their friendship ...
SwaRon meeting..Bumping to be precise , in the same Mall...What a coincident 😉 ...
Ab jahan yeh dono hon wahan pe 'WW3' toh honi he hai , Public ki free mein intertainment ho gai 😆 ...
In dono ki choice toh 1% bhi nai milti...
Dono jitni bhi koshish akar lein , yeh ek doosre se lare bagair nai reg sakte...
I didn't know that we can hunt elephants in a Mall 😳 ... 🤣 ...
The part was really fabulous 😃 ...
Loved it ❤️ ...
Waiting to know about everyone's date...
One question Taani is going to Rose Petal resturant and so is Sharon but both of them r in Dehradun and Mubai , respectivly..How is this possible?? [ :s]...
Well continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊
omg
rey khadus...how mean kitni buri tareke se behave kiya...thats not fare!!!and taani ke dreams.. 🤣super hilarioud hote hain...please go with cheevamshita!! roxxxswayam and sharon toh na jagah dekte he na logbaas chalu ho jaate hain...😳thank you for the pmloved itthe update was superb...update soonand do pm me
Originally posted by: yogini64
oh god... rey.. itna khadoos 😲
kitna rude behave kiya kriya se .. indirectly hi 😡
aur ab to ladayi hi kar lega...
coz kriya bhi kab tak jhelegi isse 😆
taani aur uske superstupid dreams 🤪
achha h .. shivam ke hi sath ja .. 🤣
issi bahane.. kriyaansh to mile 😉
rofl... ye swaron kahin bhi shuru ho jate h 🤣
means .. jo dusre ko pasand ho.. ussi ki bajani h.. hadd h 😆
I wanted Kriyansh date scene. *pout*
Anyways the rest was good as well. I liked it. Tani dreamt of Kria n Shivam and she losing Shivam. Great nightmare girl 🤣
I like the way you people have depicted the grey characters as positive ones in this Story.
Well I hate this Rey. He is such a ***********
He has packed himself in a shelf. Just because his parents did unjust to him Du-uh is that even a reason to behave rudely to others. Who gave him the right?
I liked SwaRon fights. They are cute as always.
Doing a great job. Keep it up.
I might not always be able to comment. But I will try to as and when time permits. So please bare the small or delayed comments.
I want the next update as and when you all get free.
Superb update..
Loved the way Rey showed his attitude n Kriya controlling her temper...God that's good cox Kriya can never control her temper..N then taani n Kriya getting ready together...That's fun...getting ready wid frnds...ThenKriya's parents teasing her...:pN Swayam n Sharon shopping...It's true they both can never stop fighting...They both r impossible...Waiting 4 the next update...Plzzz update soon!!!:):)
Originally posted by: zona_malik
AWESOME
AMAZING
SUPERB
FAB
SPLENDID
WONDERFUL
AWESTRUCK
Firstly REY felt for KRIA at first Sight
Den SMILING WHOLEHEARTEDLY for pic..aww cute
KRIA controlloing her anger
Den KRIA-TAANI Awlaaah
TAANI interested in SHIVAM...always loved SHITA together
KRIA-TAANI DRESS DESCRIPTION WAS FAB...Can Imagine dem
REY trying to Impress KRIA
SWARON n dere silly fights
still dey were AMAZING
So so so LOVED IT
Can't wait to see what happens at the DATE
Wana see kria reponding Rey in her Tashan style too later on
UPDATE SOON :)
Originally posted by: Aditi_4ver
Sha!! 🤗
Konpal!! 🤗AMAZING UPDT DEARS!! 👍🏼PART A Through the crowd,Rey saw his date. Kriya Ghai .Lolz! I read it as "Rey saw his Kriya Ghai"eeeps! kissed him on his cheek. Rey too smiled. He wanted to smile *I'm lost!!* ❤️"Yuk! Someone get this cheap lipstick off my face quick!" Rey smirked I feel bad for Kriya... 😔"Actually I got a nightmare. It was that you and Shivam go on a date and you both get in a relationship. Then, you get very engrossed in your love life almost forgetting me. I didn't want to lose you!" said Taani hiding her half dream. Whatever she said to Kria was true, but she had one more thing in her dream. It was, she, Taani, losing Shivam Awwe! Sweet! Luved the way u protrayed KriNi frndship n Taani's possessiveness abt Shivam! 👍🏼"Um, I see. You are going on my date, right? So, I'll go on yours. Simple," Lolz! Exchange offer of dates! 😆PART B "Oh you know, hunting elephants !" Swayam said sarcastically and plastered a fake smile. 😆 🤣 Funniest line in this whole updt!! 😛
"So you thought I did it to entertain your highness, huh?" Swayam said smirking 😆Good answer! 👍🏼"This looks like a clown suit!" Swayam exclaimed 😆 Poor Sharon!Saying so, they both left in opposite directions. They went o the bill counter, just to find themselves together again. Kismat hi hai jo unko baar baar mila raha hai! *Thoda zyaada philosophical ho gaya na? 😆*Ye lo ji!Comment ho gaya!It was reely fun reading part b... 😃Can you guys pls increase the font size cuz it'l be easier to read... 😳Conti soon!*Was it long enough guys? 😉*
Originally posted by: Sohad3fan
Whaoa...
It was an awesome update...Loved Rey in his attitude...Haye Rey kis ko attitude deta acha nahi lagta..Loved d prepartion part n Kriya-Taani bond..You know actually m liking Shivam n Taani in dis ff...Plzzz keep dem like dis otherwise I will start hating dem...__Mumbai part was also superb...SwaRon can just can't stop fighting...Inn kaa kuch nahi ho sakta..Wese wo fit hain apne roles may...__Well in short LOVED THE UPDATE!
Originally posted by: vaishu88
loved d update.. rey s too rude.. d way he behaved was bad.. kria controlling her temper n trying to b normal was nice... taani n her dreams🤣.. loved it.. taani n kria getting ready was nice.. friends getting ready to gether wearing bow clips almost similiar.. taani feeling butterflies in her stomach thinking abt her date with shivam was nice.. kria's parents teasing her n d way she was nervous was nice.. swaron hmmm wat to say its true they cant stay away from fighting,, d way they fought for d dress selection was funny n cute.. totally loved it..
Originally posted by: kanchi01
Firstly srry 4 de late comment
Mindblowing update...
Luvd it...
De way rey shwd his attitude 2wards kriya nd she controlling her anger was mast...
Den kriya-taani part part was vry nice..
Dey were dressing together 4 de date...
Nd de way u described dier dresses was awesome..!!
I was actually imagining it...
De cat-dog fighing between swayam nd swaron was amazing i was laughing whole tym...
Nd at de end dey selected de dress which bth didnt lyk 4 each other...
Update soon...
Cant w8 wht happens on de date...
Thnx 4 de pm..