FF Let Me Love You - New thd link & tser on PG 139 - Page 87

Chapter 3

Oh look, it's s**tty and her s**tto mother. Payal's character is interesting for me though because she is completely the opposite of what we got. It's kind of hard to imagine Deepali playing such a character, but with your way of description not too bad.

When Khushi got hugged for the first time by Sayali and Alaka.. I might have teared up... *sigh You know.. Khushi kind of reminds me of someone. :P

The way you described Arhi's first meeting; I swear to god you need to stop. Why do you make me feel things. -_- Oh it was beautiful. I loved the line about the shutters in her eyes closing. Brilliantly put Jyo.

HE NOTICED HER SLAP MARK. AND THE KISS. OH SNAP CRACKLE POP.

Loved Khushi's line. 'Don't make promises that you can't keep, Arnav.' Damn right she is. Oh of course he said he would keep it. Let's see.

Chapter 4

Arnav is really understanding isn't he.. The way he held on to her when she woke up from her nightmare.. So wait, Khushi's dad killed Rahul? That son of a! What the hell is wrong with this Gupta family. Payal is a messed up, manipulative witch, Maya is another breeding problem for witches, and now Khushi's dad? No wonder the girl is so shattered.

Also I hope Akash won't be a love sick fool and not realize what Payal's intentions are. Would be hilarious if Payal fell in love with him in the process. Opposites do attract. What a mess for the lovers.

Chapter 5

This frickin line

' You don't have to ask how I realised that its your painting, I can feel your prescence in every brushstroke of that portrait, only a person with a heart as pure as yours could have breathed life Mama's eyes,the portrait looks so alive, as alive as Mama's soul which lives inside your heart'

My breath just got stuck inside my wind pipe. I am in love with that dialogue. You breathed life in to it, I swear to god.

So Raj and Maya poisoned Khushi's mother's coffee? The fact that a 7 year old had to witness it is unbearably sad... This kind of reminds me of Snow White, just with a twist.

Whoa did not see Rahul's twist coming. I mean I had a feeling he would be Khushi's brother, but didn't see the Anjali and Raj twist. Girl you got me on a string.

She was gang raped.. oh my god.. she was gang raped.. I am glad you're brining this in to the light. Even though this is a very difficult subject for many, it's reality. Sometimes reality needs to be addressed and I am glad you're doing so. I am holding for the next updates. Gonna be a ride.

Chapter 6

Reading the description of her bloody, and painful body clenches my heart. Your words really made me picture the scene well. It's a blessing and a curse on my part. I cannot blame Rahul for hacking those bas***ds in to pieces, but his ending was so tragic. Of course as usual the bas***ds roam freely if there is money involved. Pathetic.

Arnav's understanding and acceptance is overwhelming. I am having a hard time handling and I am not even in the damn story. Lol But it's beautiful how someone can have so much unconditional love. It's very rare to find in reality. Only those who are lucky. Sappy as this sounds, love is the only way Khushi will be healed and damn, from what she has been through, she will need a lot of it. Some how I won't be surprised that Arnav will give her all that.

Chapter 7

I adore forehead kisses, seriously. I love how Arnav keeps giving them. There is something more intimate and gentle about a forehead kiss. Beautiful. The kitchen scene made it seem like they are already married in a way. The cute banter with Khushi. Lol

Favorite line

Khushi : Seriously Arnav , you never had even one girlfriend, you are so damn weird !!

LOL JYO I SO HEARD YOUR VOICE IN THIS LINE. This is something you'd tell me. ahaahaha

Call me crazy, but I kind of like how Khushi is still not having too much expectations. Her character growing gradually is perfect to watch.

Oh god, you know I am not a sappy person, but the bedroom scene.. That was so gentle and beautiful.

I think this journey will be a lot easier, now that Arnav knows everything. The main important aspect that he knows loving her won't be easy. Understanding needs patience, and the boy got it. I approve. Lol