| VirMan FF:Burning Touch|NO PMS SENT #Chapter 5 - Page 14

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

sorry for late comment

superb update

virat n maanvi's childhood memories are beautifull

virat didn't suport her why what happened

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

Originally posted by: Aenna

Wooow an awwwsum...storyy
i truelyyy luved it!!!!
So they both hate each other luv after hate i think..
Virat is back hope they become frends again..
Plzzz update asap nd pm me...

Originally posted by: vamps1996

eeeksss i love ur story

i love it i love i loveee ittt ekksss

lol made me a bit hyper

both the chaps were amazinggg

virat is damm idiot cant he understand manvi urghhh

whtevaa let it be until the full thing comes in front of us

ive sent u budyy

plzzz do pm me when u update 😊

Originally posted by: kushal90

uh huh... amazing concept n amazingly written 😉

I badly want to read the nxt update their face-off 😆

Wanna see their reaction after seein each other.. 😆

Virat is sch a jerk... uhhh... bt if he makes evrythn proper btwn them i'll be tooo happy 😛

sooo plzzz update soon n pm me 😃

I will update as soon as I can.

Originally posted by: ArthyV

"Virat and I had such beautiful memories together, but that one incident ruined everything, our trust, our years of friendship. I developed such a deep hatred for him, because he gave me a wound that could never be healed, but nevertheless, all I could think of when he was leaving was don't go. Please don't leave me. But right now all I can think of is don't come back. I don't know how I am going to be able to face him..."

These lines were so well depicted. Virat ruined everything.

It is a great story. nice and fantastic😉

Waiting for the next update yaar.😆

Pls do it as soon as possible...😉

Originally posted by: ArthyV

Nice😉

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome yaar too good...

Pleasee continue soon...

I really loved it...
Cant wait for your next update...

Originally posted by: shabsem

just read both the updates...amazing concept...waiting 4 virman meeting..thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: Ankzmishra

woah! that was just mindblowing... 👏 👏 👏
loved it 😊
both the updates are written brilliantly 👏
waiting for the face-off that would surely be a treat to read 😃
next update is on June 5 thats too late 😲
cant ur exams be cancelled or postponed 😛
pm me frm next tym please would love to read the next part bt sooner 😃

Originally posted by: ShivRajput

Omg.. just read last two chapters togther.. fab concept.. poor Manvi.. Virat askd her to apologixe for someone's else mistake.. Cant wait for next part..!!!