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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: yaminnthida
Juz read both parts...awesome updates👏👏👏...really really nice...loved it ⭐️⭐️...two bestfrieds who loved each other in childhood...now hate each other...really interesting...😃...the flashback parts were superb👍🏼...n the virman romance n the dance...hayye😳...zip wala scene😉...virat is naughty😉...❤️ it...beautifully written⭐️⭐️⭐️...par us raat exactly howaa kya😲...virat shouldn't have said those to manvi...this is so😡...his ego...aarg...now waiting for their face off...really brilliant👍🏼...really excited to read next part...will be eagerly waiting...😊...if possible plz do pm me whenever u update...😊...
All the best for ur exams👍🏼

Really ? You like it? Thank you so much!!

The Zip wala scene is my favorite too. Mera Virat toh aisa hi hai.. 😳

You will find out everything in a few updates. Thank You so much for the long comment! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!! I will for sure PM you.

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

reallly loved both parts n the way the story is going too ur a real fab writer im goin crazy wondering wat exactly happened bt thats wats gettin every1 gripped i really cnt wait to see hw both of them r gonna react after cumin face to face with each other thanx a lot for the pm n do update as quick as u can😊

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Omg.. just read last two chapters togther.. fab concept.. poor Manvi.. Virat askd her to apologixe for someone's else mistake.. Cant wait for next part..!!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

woah! that was just mindblowing... 👏 👏 👏
loved it 😊
both the updates are written brilliantly 👏
waiting for the face-off that would surely be a treat to read 😃
next update is on June 5 thats too late 😲
cant ur exams be cancelled or postponed 😛
pm me frm next tym please would love to read the next part bt sooner 😃

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saemeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

just read both the updates...amazing concept...waiting 4 virman meeting..thanks 4 pm

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Awesome yaar too good...

Pleasee continue soon...

I really loved it...
Cant wait for your next update...

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Nice😉

Edited by ArthyV - 12 years ago

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

"Virat and I had such beautiful memories together, but that one incident ruined everything, our trust, our years of friendship. I developed such a deep hatred for him, because he gave me a wound that could never be healed, but nevertheless, all I could think of when he was leaving was don't go. Please don't leave me. But right now all I can think of is don't come back. I don't know how I am going to be able to face him..."

These lines were so well depicted. Virat ruined everything.

It is a great story. nice and fantastic😉

Waiting for the next update yaar.😆

Pls do it as soon as possible...😉