Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww loved iit
so arnav did come at the end?=]
congrats for new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations on the New Thread! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Un-Reserving

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I know I'm awefully late with the comments! Was down with fever!

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The updatewa was AWESOME as usual Smita!!! 👏 🤗

SEPARATION MAKES THE HEARTS GROW FONDER! ❤️

This is reminding me of your SS : Living Without You.. One of my Favourites!

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Arnav looked around, desperate for inspiration. His chest hurt as though someone had placed a boulder there. Drawing breath was an efoort, a very painful effort.
"Arnavji, are you listening to me?", Khushi asked, thinking that he had abandoned the phone, her chatter having driven him away.
"Khushi, what about us?", he finally asked.
"What about us?", Khushi frowned, perplexed.
"Are you… we… Khushi…. You will be in Lucknow and I will be in Delhi…", he struggled to express his anguish at her departure, having little experience in voicing his feelings.
Khushi smiled slightly, confused. "Arnavji, it is just for 2 weeks. Fourteen days. Then I will be back here in the godown."
Arnav's fingers tightened on the phone, almost crushing it.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. Really Beautifully expressed Smita.. The unconditional love and emotions. the possessiveness!~ Everything was sooo beautifully shown in these lines. 👏

Aahaan.. 1 week no call... and KKG missing her Arnav ji!

And the last scene.. Obviously if the stool wobbles and she slips.. SHE HAS TO LAND IN ARNAV'S ARMS! 😉

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.N.E.S.S.! ❤️

@Arnav - Finally Mr. ASR has come to Lucknow! 😉

@Smita - Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi - Thanks for the PM! Love you! 🤗

Continue soon!

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ,awww poor khushi missing him so much , I really can't wait to read next update although I know she is gonna fall to into his arms
But dying to know their reactions upon seeing each other after so many days. Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
door rehthe tho pyaar aur bi badtha hai
amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it. Beautiful and warm update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think Arnav has come to Lucknow and so he will save her from falling
and it also explains why his phone could be switched off
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the Payal & Arnav moment. They both gave each other respect & started there new relationship of brother & sister.

Loved the way you described Arnav's emotions on finding out the Khushi was going to Lucknow for 2 weeks!! Poor guy was a mess.

Please continue soon! Hope Arnav is there to catch her. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on another thread
ahhh I see payash are married finally
just arhi left
I know right he has changed so much over time
and am glad
bless he didn't want her to go
but she is coming back dude
awww she was missing him like hell
ain't that just cute
he came to see her right
course he did
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new thread
awesome update
khushi had to leave Delhi for two weeks..
poor arnav.. love the way he try to tell her his anguish
I think now he went to lucknow to meet khushi
continue soon

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