Blush of first love!! KR twoshot!updated last part

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

awesum update...👏

mast tha,...

loved hw u moulded d story...

nice ending..👍🏼

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Awsummm diii...

aheyeee finallyyy uh updated...

loveeeddd tthe 3years ki judaai n milannn <3

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

awesome and perfect ending...😊

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: asmaju
unresserved on pg 23

muaaahhh dekha maine

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

u shud have become sizzler long back dee... -_-

kinna slow spam karti hai

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

This is best ending i can think to dis os...
U are best deetha di...
This was just fantastic...

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

maine yeh OS pehle kyun nahi pada... if would have not seen the link on fb mereko kabhi nahi pata chalta iske baare mein...😔

since now i finally read it... my mind is in awe...
how can you come up every time with such beautiful concepts this was really beautiful and literary piece of art i can term as...

and your words and way describing actually made me trail down the lanes of royal romance... ahh i so love you deetha for writing such a serene concept...

be it kriya's innocene all the while in both the parts or rey's his highness attitude i just fell more and more for it...

and the last part was amazing..wow... she ran away because she made him hers everything i liked that fact...i thought at first rey forgot her or something since its been 6 months bt nope he came all way in search for her...

and that kiss on rock was beautiful...

he in a way got her accustomed with all the royal mannerism, and his family didnt objected kriya being a normal gal... that was graceful...

First night ka kya kahun ba main...in a word just perfect and mesmerizing ending to this work...

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

this is the best ending...😊

u beautified each and every thing with ur superb description...

must say dear u r an awsome writter..😃

it is like each and everything is playing infront of my eyes..

loved it to the core...🤗

😊keep writing..:)😊

Edited by sumimita - 12 years ago

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pinky

@pinkypanrocks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

kahani mei twist bohut achi hai...and of courrse superb ending...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Omg!!!! ... I did'nt expected ki iska ek part aur hoga...😲

But cinderella ko apne prince ke paas to jana hi tha na atlast...😉

Lol... bechari shaadi se bach ke bhaag rhi h... aur rey ab aaya hai...😳

Ohh... 6 months lag gaye maharaj ko patane me... chalo.. ready to hua...😆

Ek aur kissie... banti hai re... itne time baad bhi to mile hain...☺️

2 saal???... deethu... tu na bahot zaalim hai... 😡

Tujhe tadpaana achha lagta hai na??? ... masters ki degree karing kya 2 yrs me???🤣

Finally... wedding... atlast prince n princess.. together...😃

I totally loved it... so sweet n cute...🤗

Oh god... I hope tera net jaldi thik ho...

Coz tere pm dekhe toh sadiyan beet gyi hain...😛

Aur meko pata bhi nhi chalta ki kya kya update ho gya... tu gallery bhi nhi update karti apni...😭