Blush of first love!! KR twoshot!updated last part - Page 14

And aur dusre scrap pe likhna :
Deetha. .WE WANT UPDATE OF KR OS-BLUSH OF 1ST LOVE,woh bi jaldi.

Upper posts mein likh diya hai. . .
Abb chale di ko scrap kerne!

Ok copy ho gaya lets go bas ab 20 time paste kardu mai

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Ok copy ho gaya lets go bas ab 20 time paste kardu mai

ok. .lets go. .:-D

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

ok. .lets go. .:-D

Chal pahale tu

Maine post karna bhi chalu kar diya hai tu kaha rah gai

Madhu chal bhagate hai nahi tho aaj khai nahia

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Unres

Pehele sorry itna late unress kar rahi hun..Mai bhul gayi thi :P

And to this story I love the way how you have protrayed the love shared between prince and comman girl..
The way Kria ran away..Rey finding her and the way he took her to his court and then the two years..
Gosh that was a bliss..
Kitna sataya Rey ko Kriya se milne nahi diya...And the look on his face when he saw her hayee I can imagine it..
Fab one Dee

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unres

yaaay finally u updated...i so love this story was waiting eagerly for the update

okay firstly hatts off dear to take up such a story line of prince and a simple girl

loved the way you started...kria ka bhaag jaana then rey ka usse dhundhna...it was wonderfully written

wowww so prince all set to take his girl...

Even i was confused first aakhir ho kya raha hai yaha...rey kria ko mahal leke aaya...everyone seems all happy with her then rey ka usse doli me bithana and then neha ke sath bhej dena... I was like Ho kya raha hai???

then unka convo sunn ke pata chala wat actualy the matter was...uff deetha kaise chalta hai tera dimag itna...

And then the end...it couldn't get more beautiful! Haina <3


thanx for writing such amazing story deetha...love u for this


ps - sorry for unresing late... :(