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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Nice part
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Finally after crying her eyes out.., thinking of all possible good things she will do wid just a memory of MR. Bournvita eyes, and consoling her wid these, she meets him again! Only to know that he is single!

Seriously running away from the batallion and their spy eyes, they finally got to apend sometime together, wid just books and them!

So now they are gonna have a coffee date, since i believ a lot can happen over a cup of coffee,:D i'm waiting for the nxt chp..

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Finally they met, walked, talked now coffee...loving it...My heart went for Khushi when she she felt lonely...but now looking for her promise ...Thanks Hasini for helping RB...waiting for next...

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Reena

@kav_50

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

you are one of a kind,genius and I loved your writing style.your chapter names tends me soo much to watch all those movies.few i have seen earler remaining i will search for and will surely watch.waiting for more of your expert writings.

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

i was waiting for this update..!!!

i hate that manish...!!

so finally mr. bornvita eyes & ms. ponds skin met 😊

they went together out hand in hand <3

Waiting for their date 😊

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Lovely update...😊

loving it totally...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

such a warm update..

Its exactly the kind of chapter one would read with a mug of hot chocolate, under a nice blanket..on a beautiful winter night.

I loved it! Holding hands in bookstores, escaping interfering friends and family...too cute.

So, when is the next date going to be? ;)

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Yay...thy met 🥳

And escaped even frm prying eyes of the family and friends😆😆

Loved the update and thanks for the pm😊

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

superb part dear...

next meet ka chance bhi mil gya...

thnks for the PM...

continue soon...

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#390

R.
Edited.

This was such a wonderful update.. I just loved it.

The first few paragraphs that showed the intensity of Khushi's grief over all the failed relationships. The description was heart-breakingly poignant.

Payal and Lavanya, though very nosy, are helpful. I just hope that they have a better insight into her pain.

There was obviously humour in the facts that Khushi's nosy friends and Arnav's meddling family , came to the bookstore to "keep an eye" over them.🤣

I was so, so Happy when Arnav said to Khushi that the woman with him is his sister.

There is a feel-good factor to it , where they decided to go to that underground Library and ran hand in hand and then went for a coffee.

One major doubt here-
Arnav doesn't know the name of Khushi. He only addresses her as the "Lara Croft" Girl. Then how come he called Khushi by her name and then said that he felt like calling her name, in that underground bookshop?
Khushi obviously missed noticing it..

I just loved that line where you said that Arnav joined to Khushi's laughter after a heart-beat later.

Thanks for the PM.
😊

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago