Originally posted by: serendipitylove
Awesome Diya!!!!!!
I loved it...The way you blended the happenings on the show with your own story has brought a heady mix of intensity and emotion that the show didn't have after the kidnapping track...
This is exactly what I wanted...Khushi to leave him when the 6 months ended...
Arnav felt as though the bottom had just dropped out of his world. This was the one thing he had most feared would happen
Thats exactly what he deserves...He never told her the reason for the marriage, never heard her side of things and didn't even try to find out if her version of Shyam's truth is the real truth. He deserves to pine for the woman he loves and wallow in repentance and guilt over what he out her through and his heartlessness...
There's so much feeling and emotion in your writing, its like I can actually feel what arnav and khushi are feeling as they speak! I'm really really looking forward to the next part!
Just one tiny thing though...I wonder why she was looking for arnav😆😆
and I came to find you. What are you doing with NK?"
Thanks for the PM😊
Please please please please please please!!!!! Update Sooon!!!
Can't wait...
Why was she looking for Arnav?
Maybe to tell him she wanted to leave ...
Maybe to ask him some questions about her missing memory ...
We will never know *dramatic sigh* 😛
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