Pehli Bar Mohobbat ki hai- thread2 ARshi n Taarey) *ON HOLD* - Page 20

Originally posted by: shiksha_03

nice update pls continue soon

Loved it Loved it Loved it...First of All Arnav & khushi hahah...I knw that he will drove off...And Then Taarey I just loved NIl's POV and Taani's scene And Precap is more than intersting so waiting up...😊😊

awesome...taani in reys shirt..she must be drowned in that shirt..lol ... loved khushi 2dae!!!
waiting foh next chap...update soon ...plz pm me!!!*puppy face*😳...

Originally posted by: vijichandran

nice update...

feeling really bad for taarey...

update soon

Originally posted by: paruls

Taani just breaks my heart. 💔

Beyond Awesome lines : 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

"Taani: (smiling) not bad!!

She wears it quickly over her clothes. Again looks at herself and smiles.

Taani: dekha, sirf tum hi nahi. Tumhare kapde bhi muje suit karte hai!! (slowly her smile fades away) kaash main Shyam bhai ki behen na hoti, kash main uss din us aurat k pichey nahi gayi hoti, kash maine apko sab kuch bata diya hota!! Aaj ap mera saath hote Rey!! I miss you rey! "

Originally posted by: raddhi

it waqs emotional taarey

scene made me upset i

went in old memory i luv it

thanks for PM n do it again kkk

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

awesome ff didi!loved it ...so so much!!i am just loving dis ff!i read ol d parts n even d first thread.!!thanx a lot fo pm di:-) ...i just loved ol d parts..firstly i wud lyk to cumment on thread(sry di...yaha pe cumment kar ri hu abt first thread!but kya karu...actually i am a newbie..so cant post many cumments..n agar vaha pe bhi cumment na karne ko milega..it vil becum lyk "Na ghar ka na ghat ka"i meab na first thread aur nahi second thread ka..nw enuf of ma bak-bak)..in first thread i loved taarey meeting..on railway station!!waow!n taani being soo good at rey even wen he played pranks on her was lovely...vo rey se chupke chupke pyaar kar ri thi hai na???niways i loved rey manofying taani!mission avoid taani!!!woaaah!kya mission hai??!!hehehe...bohot mazza aaya...but really felt very bad wen taani was crying fo him!badmaash rey!! urghh!!bechari taani ko humesha cry karvata rehta hai!bt still taani loved him...n at last do dil mil hi.gaaye..n it was only cuzz of taani..n ol ur banners wer osum blossom...!!n abt arshi..i dunno wat to cumment..bt unki.chemistry bhi acchi hai..(sry cant cumment on dem cuzz..am nt arshi fan!plzz bura mat manna didi:-( ...)n in second thrread...ye kya hua???dey r seperated!??but y??uff!n in sab logo ke bich ke mu's kab khatam honge??i wanba see taarey bak once again...n poor taani she olways tries her best to make rey happy!!really loved dat part...n last but nt d least ...aapki taarif kaise na karu???U R A FANTASTIC WRITER!!!hats off!to ua thinking...story concept is damn good!!loved it to d core's depth..thanx a lot fo pm...n plzz keep on pmin me! update next part asap!!

Originally posted by: Pari-luvstaarey

Nice updte...vry sad 4 taani..she is missin rey vry much...next part plz

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Awsum yaar luved it plz update soon..n do PM me

Originally posted by: DIV_ARHI_TAAREY

awesome update dear...😃