Pehli Bar Mohobbat ki hai- thread2 ARshi n Taarey) *ON HOLD* - Page 17

Andy, my eyes had tears while reading 4th chapter. Felt bad seing them seperate. Taarey scene , i burst into tears where taani touched the mirror feeling rey.. Love is always accompanied by pain.. Ur words reflectd her pain n i couldnt hold reading. N andy that line where taani gets out of the rikshaw n sees the school (cant cpy paste andy, i am frm cell) those lines where outstanding . And arshi scene also made me emotional, (i miss ipk, leave else i wud get emotional).
Lovd this chapter andy , lovd it very much . Nw m gonna read 4th chapter

andy loved the last chapter..taarey were so cute. I lovd the scene where taani goes into the locker room n rey throws his shirt on her that scene was awww... And then when taani returns to her room and wears the shirt and sleeps. Dnt knw what to say i so so lovd that scene. Then asr and his attitude , i feel bad for khushi.
Andy my dear awesome update , lovd that chapter

nice update pls continue soon

nice update...

Taani just breaks my heart. 💔

it waqs emotional taarey

Amazing chapter
waiting for next part

awesome ff didi!loved it ...so so much!!i am just loving dis ff!i read ol d parts n even d first thread.!!thanx a lot fo pm di:-) ...i just loved ol d parts..firstly i wud lyk to cumment on thread(sry di...yaha pe cumment kar ri hu abt first thread!but kya karu...actually i am a newbie..so cant post many cumments..n agar vaha pe bhi cumment na karne ko milega..it vil becum lyk "Na ghar ka na ghat ka"i meab na first thread aur nahi second thread ka..nw enuf of ma bak-bak)..in first thread i loved taarey meeting..on railway station!!waow!n taani being soo good at rey even wen he played pranks on her was lovely...vo rey se chupke chupke pyaar kar ri thi hai na???niways i loved rey manofying taani!mission avoid taani!!!woaaah!kya mission hai??!!hehehe...bohot mazza aaya...but really felt very bad wen taani was crying fo him!badmaash rey!! urghh!!bechari taani ko humesha cry karvata rehta hai!bt still taani loved him...n at last do dil mil hi.gaaye..n it was only cuzz of taani..n ol ur banners wer osum blossom...!!n abt arshi..i dunno wat to cumment..bt unki.chemistry bhi acchi hai..(sry cant cumment on dem cuzz..am nt arshi fan!plzz bura mat manna didi:-( ...)n in second thrread...ye kya hua???dey r seperated!??but y??uff!n in sab logo ke bich ke mu's kab khatam honge??i wanba see taarey bak once again...n poor taani she olways tries her best to make rey happy!!really loved dat part...n last but nt d least ...aapki taarif kaise na karu???U R A FANTASTIC WRITER!!!hats off!to ua thinking...story concept is damn good!!loved it to d core's depth..thanx a lot fo pm...n plzz keep on pmin me! update next part asap!!

Nice updte...vry sad 4 taani..she is missin rey vry much...next part plz

Awsum yaar luved it plz update soon..n do PM me