ARHI FF~Hierarchy~ Th#2~ - Page 7

Originally posted by: rulama

Loved this update.

Quite an interesting one. Why thank you.😳

Glad to know about Arnav's childhood as well as how NK joined Khushi-Payal gang. Yep sadness and happiness.

So Arnav was separated from his dad. As Avni thought Arnav had to grow up faster than the rest of the kids of his age. Even after the abuse he had to bear during his dad's drinking binges he still feels the attachment. What a lovely child. Even now he thinks of his dad and is nostalgic of his first home. Yep Arnav has had a rough past, but also gained a warm family.

Liked Payal for acknowledging, Arnav's true intention. Arnav who has been on the receiving end now gained a friend and he feels the warmth of the friendship. Things do seem on the up and up for arnav.

Loved this NK and the reason for Khushi's protective instincts towards him. Hope Arnav too gets a reprieve from Khushi soon! wait and seee😉

Loved this chapter and hope to read the next one soon.

Originally posted by: Nichuss

wow...arnie was taken care of aksah mom...👏

its great...of Avni...othrwise wht would have happen to arnie...😕 exactly... another past FB will be shown about this.

the pool of thoughts and pain of arnie was waken by payal😊

i liked the way payal first teased arnie...😆 As a friend she can do that😉😆

phir compliment kiya...of hw arnie was trying to help khushi😛

talking n thanking..n sharing thoughts..made payal and

arnie friends 👏 Payal isn't that bad after all..😆

nk-payal-khushi friendship started too was hillarious...😆

one thing..wr ever nk there...happiness n laughter too Of course😆

be thr.. 😆

Originally posted by: sweetvanie

Hi Zara , like the chapter,... was really good ...thanks a lot 😳

Arnav and Payal are now friends, so maybe i think Arnav and khushi gonna work something out ...wait and see...😆

Arnav did have to grow up and be mature at 13, but it was cause of his dad and life wasn't always fair ,...Yep tough times

so well, please update soon ...

so wanna read the next chapter ...

and oh!!!! when are you gonna update The Thief's Angel OS's ...? Don't really know becuase a lot of revision going on for me. Will try next week.😊

plus eagerly waiting for Dark wolf's eye ... so wanna read it ... I have written up the first chapter for this ff but I shall wait for the right moment. Dont' woory I'll make an announcement when I start the ff. 😳

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..

Poor Arnav...scars inflicted in your childhood are hard enough to forget...and here Arnav had to go through so much throughout his childhood!Hard for him indeed

I'm glad Avni took the initiative of coming up to Arnav and getting him freed from his father, because no one deserves to live with a parent like that. Theres more to Avni and how she helps Arnav's dad in future.

So it was Payal who saw what really happened at the party.

I'm glad someone did notice it...otherwise Arnav would have been misunderstood by everyone out there. Payal isn't that bad ey?😉

Again...I want to know if Khushi herself realized what Arnav had been trying to tell her the whole time, for I get the feeling she did. :P wait and seee😆

Payal and Arnav are friends now, huh? This should be fun. :D

LOL...@the way they met NK.😆

Looking forward to the next chapter Zara 🤗 Muah! Thanks sis.

Originally posted by: Nehasupnfan

Alright!! I so read all of it one go! I gotta give you credit for writing new stories everytime! This is such a refreshing concept!! I gotta ask , are you very aware of what happens at a club/gym or the boxing world? Because this fic is very detailed! :) Aww thanks so much for the compliment sis. 😳 I do try my best.

Now about this AMan...I ain't sure what to make of him. Sometimes I hate him...then I think he isn't all that bad!! That's exactly the feeling I wanted to create. If it helps, I like Aman's charatcer😉

I love how Payal and Arnav seem to have come to a truce! And also..Payal as a boxer? That's an awesome spin to things! LOVE IT!! yay!!!

Out of curiosity I wanted to know...will Shyam play a role in this fic? He's been mentioned only once...so was wondering! Can't reveal too much...😉

Thank you for the PMs :) I'm looking forward to more!

Res

Awww I love this chapter.
*Sigh* they are getting close to each other but if Khushi find out that it was the best then she will get mad at him.
He sure is falling for her but I am sure she will think that he was doing all this for the bet.
He will feel guilty for himself.
Poor him.
I hope she find out about the bet soon and there won't be anything wrong.

Aww..they are truly falling for each other ...khushi admits to herself that she feels different around Arnav ..I just wish that that stupid bet would not have come in between.the best thing about today's update was that however smart khushi becomes, you have retained few things in her character one of them being her clumsiness and day dreaming, 😆 which is super sweet..and thanks for the update.

Nice one!!! Khushi is Khushi, a total Klutz who keeps daydreaming😆. And Arnav is Arnav, the one who catches her, carries her, gets worried for her and also get irritated with her... Hayye! I so wish I had someone like Arnav too, because I'm no far from Khushi in the Klutz-Daydreamer Department, and I get so hurt coz there's no one to hold me...🤣