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Hey this my first attempt this frist ever os I wrote in the forum kindly bare me a any comment whether positive or negative most welcome I have not done proof reading so for any mistake I m sorry

One day I was late night coming from my friend party well other was enjoying I was bored ,I looked around in the party many faces many pairs of eyes watching spying on me I feel strange disgusted at the same time satisfy proud of myself there are many ppl who was eyeing on me, few gangs of girls drooling over me other boys are feeling envy and couples splitting fire on me because there so called gf are not interested in them I FEEL PROUD OF MY SELF I M NON OTHER THAN THE ARNAV SIGNH RAIZADA rich arrogant brat spoil boy all negative words come under adjective that easily describe my personality .i give up with my one last takila shot I got up from up seat turn around to find my gang of boys who are tipsy state flirting wid gals

While exiting the door I suddenly feel strange something soft its smell good like a jasmine ,I look down I found a most beautiful girl in my arm hanging .wid my strong arm around her waist I support her from falling down ,how could I let her go hurt her'.hey where from that feeling came .when I look into her caramel eyes I saw innocence 'she pushed me ran into the crowd almost disappeared

ARANAV SINGH RAIZADA never turns to look for gal but this seems to be different bcoz I was desparte to look for her. One last glance and I went out '

I was middle of the street almost midnight walking in moonlight thinking about her,my car parked just few meter away from my distance suddenly someone hugged me from behind I turn around saw the same gal ' I look into her eyes I saw fear scared hurt pain I look around saw some goons surrounded us and then I heard sweet little scared voice HELP ME

SHOULD I CONTINUE

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pooja102 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aaweee no comment 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that sounds cute... do continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi,

Nice story yaar please continue😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh thanks for the response i will surely update next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja102

oh thanks for the response i will surely update next



very nice

pls read my first os arnav i love u khushi

pls comment on tht

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aweee you are so sweet :)
Nyc one dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nice... do continue!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayneee!!! Complete ASAP! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this seems quite nice...

you must continue😊

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