Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II THREAD 3 - Page 87

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... how cute n simple celebration was that... Very well written... How I wish in IPKKND we had similar birthday celebration for Arnav... The show birthday was completely spoiled with Khushi's OTT and by showing Arnav's unnecessary resistance for accepting wishes... Here you made up for it... Humara Khushi crazy tho hai... But here I felt she has better understanding of Arnav... She kept the idea simple n it worked... I had great time reading this chapter... You had shown the longing that Arnav has been having for a pure caring wish on his birthday so beautifully... It is not important to have parties and huge celebrations... what means more is the warm hugs n wishes that we get from people who mean the world to us...

"For the first time in the radiance of the candle lights he noticed how beautiful her smile is".. It was a very simple line here but it was so romantic... a writers thoughtfullness was shown there... with simple lines you create a great effect... That was really beautiful thought...

Had great fun reading it... Now waiting to read further... Hope Birthday lunch n dinner continues in the next chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sweet and nice... Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
So finally they are friends..
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute part! Loved it :) Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayee!! That was soo sweet :) Aww!! :D I found the little exchanges between Khushi and Karan soo adorable, It's like they're brother and sister and NOT uncle and niece. Their relation doesn't need further explanation. Just their way with eachother through the ALMOST surprise was enough to understand how close they are :)

Sumer is one great man yaar! I could give him a huge bear hug. Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi are such lucky people to have such an amazing father :)

Khushi's surprise was sooo cute! I chuckled when she yelled out Happy Birthday Arnavji! If I were Arnav I would give her a solid smooch on the cheek and thank her with two more! Aww she's such a doll, no wonder Arnav started liking her, FINALLY! ;D

I'm glad Khushi is the simple and uncomplicated one, It's always better for girls to be the ones to give in because men usually are thick headed and it's useless and pointless arguing with them. We all know who's the smarter one ;) The same is the case with Arnav and Khushi. Though Khushi is genuinely sweet, innocent and forgiving, she still DID manage to get in Arnav's good books :) Arnav Singh Raizada better start falling for her now! :D

I'm so happy for Arnav, he's finally found his family. Karan is such a sweetheart :) This was one splendid BUT late update and i'm kinda mad at you for that! :D

BUT IT WAS WORTH IT!! BRILLIANT! :D

PLEASE update fast and what about the one shot? When is it coming up??
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Posted: 12 years ago
So khushi's magic started to work on Arnav...a restless soul...beautiful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
w8ng for next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay olive branch accepted
can't wait to see there relationship grow 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!

Aww a birthday of some sort for Arnav... Such a huge moment for him...

Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved d whole update ... d dialogues r very well written especially this freaking cake is crumbling like Harappa and Mohenjo-Daro. ...lol...

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