Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II THREAD 3

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Sunara

@princessunara

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

i love it so so much!! it is beautiful and so wonderfully written!!

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

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Mithila

@Mithikush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Wow!Superb update

Its getting interesting day by day

Loved it

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arshi21

@arshi21

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

So Arnav's no longer irritated with her? Progress!

I loved the update :)

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Quite a detailed introspective update about ASR's bday.

I guess if Khushi initiated truce Arnav would have to initiate saying I love you & marriage first right later on that is ? Then I am Happy.

I dont want Khushi to be treated like a kid - when some one does that to me I tend to ignore that person & it has happened I can be practical when I have to ; til date that person is unable to accept that ignoring does hurt & a name for Khushi like Arnav has Sadu Singh Raizada ?

If Arnav is 30 what is Khushi's age I so want a lovely Bday for her that too arranged by Arnav & Bade Papa that would be cherry on the top haha.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Brilliant...
Loved Khushi's blabbering with Karan. She is so cute. Importance of nicknames!! (Well off the topic my friend was also surprised when she got to know that me or my siblings have no nicknames)
She was preparing enthusiastically for his bday surprise and bday boy joins in before its time 😆
Khushi understood his good side despite their differences. Arnav also appreciated her efforts genuinely without being fake. Liked Karan here too who specially came down to meet Arnav for his bday. Btw would love to know if you imagine someone as Karan. I have Arnav, Khushi, Buaji in my mind and even Bade Papa but nobody coming in my mind for Karan yet.😕
One of his last thought was Khushi's glowing smile in the low light of candles.
The subtle change from animosity to irritation to the step of friendship is depicted so beautifully. Loved it to T😊

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

The update was oozing full of 'Khushi' in literal terms! :))

There is something in your FFs though intense and emotional always tags along the happiness and content factor with it... i have observed this from the MKM1 days... its present in every update you know...

yes there were times when i have had my heart heavy during the read coz of the turn of events .. but it was quickly covered up with a sense of peace and content that is followed by happiness in one way or the other; which is owing to the culmination of elements that you choose to put in your way of writing.. and thats what draws me towards it...

my lips automatically pulls up seeing a PM from u indicating an update :))

coming back to the update ... i loved it .. no surprise there! :)

i just realized that during the read abt Karan... it always made me picturise Akshay Dogra(Akash's Char) in it... let me know if you too had his face in mind when wrote Karan...

Arnav loosening up ... is certainly good to see... at the sametime you really feel for this guy when he keeps going back to his past and recollecting on things and moments he has missed out on!

You know in full honesty ... i expected him to glower and turn down the whole thing... but seeing him get along... was really nice!

okie now whats next? :) i really dunno what to expect .. esp after your note saying it sure is not gonna go the MKM 1 way! otherwise i had already killed Bade Papa in my thoughts for the story ahead! he he he .. not that it is not a possibility even now however cliche it may look...

so yea i am not gonna rack my brains on it anymore... and let you do that job alone! :)

Thanks for sharing it Anony-mous!(i dislike addressing u so :( ) and thanks for the update too! :)

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Loved it
Arshi on the mend
cant wait for more

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

It was very sweet of khushi to be mature and extend a hand for friendship
How nicely she organized everything even though she had a fight with arnav
Hopefully there friendship grows more
Really a fantastic chapter
Loved it
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm dear