~|| Maane Na Mann Mera ||~ A TR OS

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prathna

@Taarey123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved it
Can't wait for next part
Thanks 4 the pm
U r a gr8 writer

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awesome felt a relief after reading this os

i was literally frustrated with d3 track n the bashers comments on posts it was insane to read all that

par aaj bahut accha laga yeh read karke lolzz all boys entering fire escape n killing rey's romantic mood!😆

plz write more

thanks 4 d pm!😊

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Tume toh bahut hugs deti hun yaar.Jab bi mood upset hota hai,rdng taarey stries r soothing bliss.It ws amazing...Hey,lvd d sng re...

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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome dear.
sach me show me itne mu ke bas nice to read your story.
swayam possessive se understanding ban gaya 😆 😆
perfect and happy ending of mu.

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jini

@Noddu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Luv dis sng !... 2 core..
Nyco updte :)
gt a rid frm 2tody tani free episode :(

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Indu

@redroses123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

mein atyant prasann hui😆... meri bachi😆..

shivi muahhh muahhh..😆...

superb OS .. kash... kash.. kash.. yahi hota... TaaRey 1st kiss...

loved it .. entire os .. song and then swayam😲😲.. twirling taani and making her move towards rey😲😲..😉...i loved it😉 n then fireexit wala☺️☺️ .. i read twice ... muahh..for writing this...😉

Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago

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Vvaannii

@Vvaannii

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome!!!
khaas yeh sach me hota...

i loveed the part

"Okay! Fine! We are coming! Don't try to kill me with that possessive bhai look of yours! Scares me to death!" Rey said making everybody laugh.

omg it was a ROFL moment, hilarious,i can actually imagine Rey saying that...

really awesome work!! 👏

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow dear very nice ... Like the song and Rey's style to manaofy Taani and loved that Swayam helped Rey for that... And aww the gang disturbed Taarey romance... But all is well ... Thank u :)

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samiha

@samiha_taarey

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

hayeee its beyond on amazing... first of all luvd the song ... then the way Rey manofy taani nd their first kiss...😳 it was a perfect combo of romance nd comedy...a big hug fr this os...

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..gone..

@..gone..

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awesome tha yaar...D3 has started to get boring with ol dese MUs..lekin diz OS of yours was a stressbuster .. Voila' you just switched on my mood! Nd d song .. I just love it .. Nd d climax waz gr8 .. I mean badmash Rey nd possessive Swayam hehe...in short .. It was amazin!