IPKKND SS: Dooryian Ch4pg23 CONCLUDE 25 AUG 2013

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

awesome different concept thanks for the pm

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Very nice... U have a unique way of creating a pathos in the characters... I love ur writing..

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

that one lovely part...

beautifully written...

loved it to the core

keep writing

do cont soon

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

simply superb chapter...amazing update...

only after few days of their marriage he left and he come back after 1yrs,in that one yrs they talked few times...it happens yaar...she doesn't know how to behave,she thinks, he changed...its confusion...first they have to talk...

they have to spend time together first...than only their differences will reduce...
arnav also he has to take her to holiday, first..they have to spend time first ,what work,work...its an excuse ,i guess,they r very young...kushis also have dreams,he has to take care of that first...

feel bad for kushi, thank god arnav realized first,instead of ignoring...can not wait to read how arnav to get kushi back...😉😉😉😉😉.

thank u...

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

yay finally they had the conversation

it makes sense of where they're both coming from

But for Khushi to try and be a good wife to Arnav and Arnav understanding Khushi and not being cold towards her just shows how much they love each other

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Lovely update

Waiting for the next update

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

At last she has told Arnav what she is feeling and her apprehension..Arnav reacted in an expected way but after thinking it through came to a right decision..to get to know hus wife again..to make her fall for him once again..

Awesome update beautifully written as always.

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Thanks for the PM.

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Awesome... Liked the concept

Waiting for next update

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Hmm.. khushi says she has fallen out of love from him.

But wants it fixed.

I'm sure that she loves him deeply. But the distance might have paled it.

But her behavior towards others, shows that she is affected. Like having low self esteem. I guess living with a family that taunts like mami or dadi. I guess she lost her brave spirit.

Glad that Arnav is not sulking but trying to work things out.