Kriyaansh Forever![part 2 onwards] - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

haye reshu koi aapne didu ko thnxx bolta hai kya...??

nxt time if u say na i will not talk to u..samjhi..



okay okay...cool didu...nai bolungi thanks!
muaahh...lub ya😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: glmorous_diva

amazing
kriyansh convo ws little bt awsm

kriyansh kabhi suderenge nahi ...mall mein bhi nahi chodenge ek dusre ko😆

kriya always misunderstood rey
god knows aage kya hoga
waiting 4 rey manofying kriya



tanx! kriyaansh k convo bas little bit awesome tha? hehe..nahi sudrenge kriyaansh!
aage kya hoga mujhe toh pata h ...lol..! just kidding...
tanx fr d lovely comment!😊
Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arsha_simran

swettyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mast wala update dear!!!!
loved it!!!!
amazing!!!!
kria sprinkling water nice...

nd den haayyyeee kria kitni sharmati hai!!!!!
nd rey!!!!
hahahahahhahahhaaa
wo humesha apni baatcutter ke land me kho jaata hai...
hehehehheheee
nice!!!!!!
nd den puppy face!!! hayyeee cute!!!! bilkul teri tarah!!!!
nd shopping,,... bechaara rey kitna tierd ho gaya...
nd den phir se shuru misunderstanding!!!!!
hehehehehehhehheheee
hahahahahhahahaaa
((( i noe mein bahut hans rahi hun par luv this)))
mast!!!!!
nd den rey fully confused ki uski baatcutter angry kyu hai!!!!😆
nd baatcutter is back!!!!
loved that!!!!!
and and and ab i m eagerly waiting ki rey apni baatcutter ko kaise manayega!!!!!
jaldi se update karna sweety!!!!!
i m waiting!!!!!!



hey my sweetypie!!! thanks a lot dear fr dis lovely comment!😃
haan bohut hasing tu bt acchi baat toh h yeh! after all laughter is the best medicine!!!😆
misunderstnding jald hi clear ho jaayenge yaar...no worries...nd yup, ill update soon...
tanx!
luv ya!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love_arsha

Awesome part...
Written so well...
Kriyaansh little convo was awesome...
Kriiya blushing and all...
Mall ko hi nHi choda...
Whan bhi romance...
Again MU...
Pls jldi se SB thee kr dena

Update soon next part



thanks a lot yaar! 😛 will update wen i get tym...
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Posted: 11 years ago
the entire chapter was awesome both spend time together and
last that girl made a mu... in all amazing conversation...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
hola guyz! sorry i'm rite now discontinuing all my works...will continue it after a while...i'm really sorry!
-Reshma
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Posted: 11 years ago
what happen to you why are u discontinue ur works
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi everyone!😊 well i had written this chapter ystrday,so thought of posting it now:)
and haan i'm not putting this FF on hold...bt its just that the updates will be given lately..
i'm extremely sorry for that in advance!😳
now read the update:)
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rey calls ...none other than our chocolate boy swayam...

re- hey dude

sw- hi rey...wassup?

re- yaar swayam i need ur help desperately

sw- kyu rey kya hua? everything fine?

re- kuch bhi fine nai hai...

and he explains everything which happened in the mall..

re- ab kria mujhse bohut naaraz hai dude.. tu bata mein kya karoon?

sw- hmmm...tu ek kaam kar usse chocolates do...she likes chocolates na!

re- ab toh yeh chocolate idea bhi kaam nai karne waala...coz she is so very angry

sw- toh okay tum yeh kar-

[he tells a superb idea to rey- you'll know it later]

re- wow! that's cool! thanks a lot swayam..i'll do the arrangements now.

and he sets off to accomplish his plan.

that whole day kriyaansh dint talk with each other...not even when having their dinner...
it was like not talking with their own hearts!
and slowly the day got over and the day ended with no chit chats ..nothing.

The new day arrived which was filled with surprises and fun...
kria got up yawning and to her surprise she saw rey nowhere.
she searched for him in the house bt there was no clue of him.she was tensed that was it
because of their fight rey had set up to do something.?

kria thought of calling him and when she took her mobile she found a new message from rey
which gave her a little bit relief. she opened it as quick as possible and the msg read:

"good morning kria...i'm sorry i had to go out for some work and i couldn't inform u...
get ready by 6pm...there's something waiting for u!"


kria dint know how to react...it took a moment for her to realize that she must be ready within 6pm...
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it was 5 in the evening...
kria took out a simple knee length pink frock...she accessorized it with
a pearl earing and a bracelet, made some curls...she applied her special lip gloss giving a final touch to her simple make-up..
she thought for a moment that why should she be ready for rey when she had fought with him!
she was interrupted by the beep of her mobile phone...there was another msg from rey which read:

"i hope u must be ready baatcutter...ab bas car pe baito aur phir aage kya hoga usse dekhti jaana..."

she climbed downstairs and ran towards the car...she quickly got in and the driver started driving to the place where rey had told him to drop kria...
kria was only thinking what would the surprise be...after a few mins they reached the destination..
there,rey was standing beside his mercedes waiting for his lovelady to arrive...

kria got down from the car and spotted rey with a bouquet of orchids...
she loved the essence of orchids especially the white ones...
she walked with grace towards him...

REY's POV:

uff yeh baatcutter bhi na...har baar she kills me with her killer looks!
how could one be beautiful,sweet,cute and hot all at once???
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he handed the flowers to her and,

re- kria u look stunning!

kr- thanks rey...waise hum yahan kya kar rahe hai?

rey dint eply

kr- rey???
rey?...

REYYY
* she told a bit louder this time which made rey to come out from his kria world*

re- haan itna chilla kyu rahe ho?

kr- mein chillaungi nai toh aur kya karti!! aap kahan kho gaye the?

re- tumhare khayaalon mein...

kr- rey shut up.. ab bata bhi do ki why are we here?

re-tum bas chup chap gaadi mein baito...u'll know everything very soon...
he made her sit in the car and he too sat and drove off to their 2nd destination...
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kr- rey hum kahan jaa rahe hai? i'm asking this from past 20mins aur aap kuch bhi nai bol rahe hai!!!!

re-yaar,kria sabr toh karo...u'll know everything soon!

kr- mujhse nai hoga rey...aap plz batayiye na! plzzz*puppy face*

rey was adoring her..he felt that she was just the cutest girl in the universe...now he had to tell something to her about the surprise or else she would be extremely sad...

re- okay fine bata tha hoon...
we are going to meet someone...someone special...i'm sure u will be very happy meeting that someone:)

kr- okay par koun hai woh someone?

re- yeh toh mein bata nai sakta...and surprise thodi bataaya jaata hai!

kr- reyyy plzzz*again making a puppy face*

re- no kria iss baar nai...u have to wait and kisi mahaan insaan ne kaha sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...*chuckles*

kr- rey aapko toh mein chodungi nai...i hate u rey!

re-but I LOVE U KRIA<3

Both share an eyelock on this...i mean LLHH!😆
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so that's it guyz...i cud write only this much...i'm sorry for the delay once again!
plz share ur reviews...plz NO ONE-TWO WORD COMMENTS.,.
and dont forget to hit the like button...
love,
Reshma❤️

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😛
unres

i just read all d parts now😳

i didn't know dat u write😲

but awesomeee parts👏

i totally lovedd ittt❤️

startingg frm kria's b'day plan ,samar's entry everything was awesomee👏

btw wil this samar come again😡🤢

but finally KR patch-up and now this surprise

loveedd this update very much😊

rey asking ideas from swayam to manofy kriya😉

but y did u stop der

continue soonish😊

and pm me😉

waiting for d nxt part😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res..
unress karne ko yaad dila dena plzz
unress..

sowiee sweety me bhool gyi but mene pehle hi kaha tha..

so me aapna sowiee wapis leying..🤣🤣

ohk ohk i knw faltu tha...

so coming to update..

reshu it was awsum update loved it,..

haye mujhe kbhi ye samhne ne hi nhi aata why rey esa kuch karta hai ki kriya gussa hojati hai..

so this time rey to help of swayam haye nice..😉

swayam gave an awum idea kya hai wo..??🤔

so rey did all arragement hmm..nice..

kriya aww rey again lost in her ye rey bhi na..

so ab kidar jaaying ye log..??

wo person koan hai..??

by god reshu update soon otherwise i will not leave u..😆😆

btw i too love orchids white one but after roses only..😃

los of love,
your abhi didu❤️
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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