ArHi OS -The Inside Of A Rose - Page 7

wow they actually did something about their growing attraction
man their chemistry was enough to sizzle others
now that was one hell of a kiss right

Cute OS! Although at first when Khushi was described wearing a white sari (I'm sick so that's a
valid excuse for brain not working properly) but I was like..uh oh kaun margaya? haahah. So yeah,
when she was described wearing the white sari and Arnav moving towards her like a predator, I was
reminded of the barn scene last year. Except Khushi was running away from him then, whereas this
Khushi was innocently brave. Your writing style is unique, V. I like how you wrote it in present tense. The narration gives a different feeling then. The inside of roses are all soft, and the kiss was described with us getting the feeling of the rose petals. That sounds confusing but I hope you get what I mean. An innocent, cute first kiss :)! Thank you for the PM (and once again the writing index)
Looking forward to reading more of your work!😳

A rose with okra (lady-finger stems😆) (arggh I'm not sure why the pictures don't post :( )

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Super-duper awesome shot, loved it 😊

awww.. this one is really cute...
i loved it..
and the title is sooo apt!! lovely.

A Great Great OS !!
His Feeling, His reactions , Her Feelings and Her Reactions !! Just Love it !!!
I just really like the Office Setting Light Romance ...
Thanks for the PM
Love reading such fab OSes...

dhak dhak dhak dhak that's how I felt at the end! This was quite titillating , bp inducing OS. I think apart from (15+) you should put additional warning too!

Short, simple and very touching OS! Love dit , Bas!!

Beautiful OS Vee !!!! It's a short one but it was full of punch :) It was awesome ...The way you described the Kiss was simply amazing !!!! The heart's still beating ... It's as if Arnav is kissing the reader and not Khushi 😉 ( Hey I can dream Right )

They were a hot couple for sure! I loved the office track! The cv's gave that track the right amount of time! It wasn't long nor was it super short!

A great OS

oh crap you finished this hot OS there?

Darn it wished you had continued