I am also there - Taani and gang FF (Updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice start, looking forward to it!!! Pls update soon, n pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome concept dear
plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear its amazing one plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz do cont soon asp plz do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys, presenting to you the first chapter

Chapter 1 - The Realisation

Taani finished her GS duties and left for her house. When she rang the bell, no one opened the door. Taani wondered if her brother had dozed off. She was about to ring the bell once more when her caretaker, Hari kaka opened the door. She became puzzled.😕

Taani: Kaka aap? Bhai kahan hai?😕

Kaka: Baba to baahar gaye hain. Unhone kaha ki aane mein deri ho jaayegi.😊

Taani (thinking): Zarur Sharon ke paas gaye honge aur kya... Main hun ya nahi unhe koi farak hi nahi padta.😔

She went to her room and freshened up. She sat on the bed recalling her argument with Swayam when kaka spoke to her

Kaka: Beta khaana garam kar diya hai,aakar khalo.😊

Taani: Nahi kaka. Mujhe bhuk nahi lag rahi hai. Aap jayiye aur so jayiye.😔

Kaka: Par beta...😕

Taani: Nahi kaka. Main bahut thak gayi hun, aur mujhe kal jaldi college jaana hai. Aur haan, bhai ko mat bataana ki maine khaana nahi khaaya, varna faltu mein tension lenge.😔

"Main bhala kyun tension lunga??"😳

Taani saw that Swayam had returned. He had a cool look on face, which showed that he was actually not bothered. Taani stood up; a little shocked at such a reply.😲

Swayam: Kaka aap khana andar rakh dijiye. Agar inhe nahi khana to zabardasti karna thik nahi hai.😳

Kaka nodded a yes and left the room. Swayam looked at her and shook his head slightly in negation. 😒He was about to leave too when Taani spoke to him

Taani: Bhai mujhe aapse baat karni hai.😳

Swayam (In a taunting tone): Haan boliye na. Aapki baat to maanni hi padegi.😒

Taani (puzzled and hurt): Aap aise kyon bol rahe hain?😔

Swayam: Aap to GS hain. Aapki baat nahi manenge to hum problem mein phans jayenge.😒

Taani: Bhai, I am sorry ki maine aapse itna bura behave kiya. Mera koi intention nahi tha aapko hurt karne ka.😭😭

Swayam: Par tumne mujhe hurt kiya. Mujhe hi nahi, balki tumne Sharon bhi hurt kiya. Vo hum sab se zyaada experienced hai. Aur tum use replace karne ki baat bhi kaise kar sakti ho?😲😲

Taani: Par bhai aap to jaante hai na ki unhone apna kaam thik se nahi kiya. Agar hume extension nahi milti to aap sab NDC ke baahar hote . Aur NDC ke saath ye risk to le hi nahi sakte. Aur vaise bhi, apne professional life ke saath aap agar college ko bhi prority denge to better hoga. Jab tak main GS hun, aapko NDC ko bhi importance dena hoga, aur aap...😒

Swayam (In an angry tone): Enough Taani!! You have crossed your limits... Tumhara ye attitude koi aur tolerate kare ya na kare, main aur tolerate nahi karunga.😡Agar Sharon ke saath tumne phir badtameezi ki, to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. 😡

Actually galti meri hai. Maine Sharon se kaha tha ki vo tumhe benefit of doubt dene ke liye, but I guess tumhe uski zarurat nahi hai. Tum abse mere liye sirf college ki GS ho, aur kuch bhi nahi. Aaj ke baad humara relationship professional hi rahega. Agar tum kisi bhi problem mein hogi, ye bilkul bhi expect mat karna ki main as a brother vahan rahunga.😡

Saying so, he stormed out and went to his room, banging the door loudly. Taani on hearing such things fell on her knees and started crying.😭

Taani: Ab aap ke liye baahar vale itne important ho gaye hai ki apno ko hi bhul gaye. Aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain? Aapko Sharon ki problem meri problem se bhi badi lagi. Kyonki maine Sharon ki galtiyan point out ki, to main buri ban gayi.😭

She then wiped her tears and then spoke to herself in a determined manner.

Taani: Thike bhai. Aaj se, balki abhi se, main aapke saath professional hi behave karungi. I will make sure ki aap NDC mein part lo aur St. Louis ko trophy jitwao. Agar mujhe iske liye duniya se ladna pade, to main ladungi aur jeet ke dikhaungi.😳😳


So guys... Kaisa laga?? Plz comment and do tell me if I should continue with it or not...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Swayam was so rude to Taani, awesome update plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bahut accha first chapter hai but please make Taani rude especially to SwaRon ... They need to understand her but overall a nice chapter ... U have to continue this and thanks a lot of the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the pm.
Feeling bad for taani.
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update! Update soon and pm me too! Eagerly waiting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
swayam being so rude ws sooo sad
i luvd the determination of taani
update soon n thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update soon. Really don't know what to say. Just one thing, please make Swayam regret everything in this ff of yours. He seriously needs it.

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