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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys.. i no ki aap logo ko wait hai next prt ka but... meri exam chal rahi hai to me update nahi kr pa rahi hu...
but here is some thing...
precap...

Then he bent down on his knees in front of taani and just said that…. I love u… and all were stunned coz only swayam and sharon knows about it but they also never aspect that he will say this like this… taani was also shocked by listening this.. but she was soo hapieee….

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

hey guys m back with a new part and yess m so hapie too ki aap log mujhe itna support kar rahe ho thankss to all of u... mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri story kaam karegi.. but it works so... thankss too all of uh...

so here is next part 2:::

Taani: hay bhabi…

Sharon: hey taani.. tum to bade jaldi aa gai hum to bas tumhe lene hi aa rahe the…

Taani: ha vo bas aagayi…. Bhai kaha hai…

Swayam: aree taani tum…. Kaisi ho…

Taani: me thik hu… aap log kaise hai..

Sharom: hum sab thik hai… aao..

Taani: ha mera saman….

Rey: vo mene ander tumhare room me rakh diya hai…

(said that and just mismerised in her beauy. his angel is in fornt of him…)

Just a small llhh moment then

Taani: ok thanks..

Sharon: ok taani chalo me tumhara room dikha dei hu tum freash ho jao tab tak me dinner ready kr dungi…

Taani: ok bhabi…

After some time taani came and aal get dinner…then all go to their rooms and sleep.. but our hero use kaise nind aati uski angel jo mumbai me hai uske sath.. so he went to see her in her room by window…

As always wo window se ander gaya and see his angel sleeping to vo uske pass jake baith gaya… and went to his dreamland with his angel…

Mext day when taani get up from her beauty sleep.. she saw her hero in front of her and just lost in him…. After some time she recognise that what he is doing here…

When she saw him he was saing in his dream I love u angel… love u… muaahhh..She was stunned listing this…

After that sharon came and saw them…. But as taani supposed to say some thing….

Sharon: ohooo kya baat hai aaj dono raat bhar sath me… (as she was knowing about boths feeling…)

Taani: bhabi aap bhi na…. but ye intni subah yaha aaye kaise…

(as any body say something Rey inturrupted)

Rey: me subah nhi kal hi aa gaya tha pr pata nahi kab nind lag gayi…

Sharon: rey… luk hum jante hai ki tum pyaar karte ho butt eseee…

Rey: sharon….. tum bhi na kuch bhi bol deti ho…

(And leave the room and taani was blushing..)

Sharon: taani tum ready ho jao…

Taani: ha bhabi..(and sharon go..)

Taani thinking: ye bhabi kya bol rahi thi rey.. pyaar… kahi rey kisi or se to nahi… nahiii.. ye nahi ho sakta… parrr

Sharon: taanii agar tumhara ho gaya ho to bahar aa jao…

Taani: haa aayi…

Out side rey was lookin for taani as today is Sunday so all gang are at taayam house for fun…

All are having fun and doing masti… while rey goes to taani's room as he was sleeping there so his phone was left there…

When he went there he saw a dairy which was taani's personal diary.. in which she writes her feeling about everyone…

He saw this and takes dairy with him and went out…

Afersome time all go to their homes..

And rey also go to his home and started reading her diary… in which only about him was written….

It was that ki he is like that, he likes this, he like that, this etc… lost of stufff after some pages it was only one thing that was written…. And that is I love u rey. I love u rey. I love u rey… in the whole diary it was only and only written that I love u rey…..

When rey read this he was just shocked…. That she also loves himm…. And that also from a long time…

And then he decides to tell her about his feeling.. as soon as possible…

Then in evening all decided to meet at rey's house… so all went there..

In rey's house….

All decided to play a game coz all are getting bore…

So they decided to play truth and dare… then all sits opposite to their parters.. and start to play..

The first twirl of bottle.. stopped on… swayam.. and he like to dare so its time of sharon to ask what ever she wants from him… so she ask to bent down on knees and propose her coz he never propose her…

Then he did that..

Noww…. Second twirl and bottle stopped on rey…. He choose to say truth And as he is sitting in front of taani so its turn of taani to ask any thing so she asked u have to tell that thing that u hide from every one over here a secreat orrr….

So with out missing a second he stared pushups and all that he has to tell every one about his love..

Then he bent down on his knees in front of taani and just said that…. I love u… and all were stunned coz only swayam and sharon knows about it but they also never aspect that he will say this like this… taani was also shocked by listening this.. but she was soo hapieee….

She looked at swayam then sharon then rey then again swayam when he noded his head in yess…. Her eyes were filled with tears….

But she said…

Taani: rey but me apko ese ha nahi bol sakti kyuki mujhe usse pehle aapko jaan na hai uske baad hi me…her eyes were teary…

And all were also having there wet eyes…

Rey: taani u can take as much as time to know me…

Taani: thankyou rey for understanding me..

And then all leave for there houses…

Next day:

Rey, swayam and sharon went to academy..

Rey: (in sharon's cabin) sharon…

Sharon: ha… bolo rey..

Rey: a..a... vo ta..ta..taani… taani ne… kuch kaha kya… kya boli vo…

Sharon: Rey… meri abhi taani se is bare me koi baat nahi hui…

Rey: per….

Sharon: Rey u just relax… kuch nahi hoga vo ha hi kahege u don't worry…

yr

Rey: yrr pr vo…( and Rey's phone rang…)

anddd... bas ab aage ka baadme mujhe padhne jana hai so byeee...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome.
just loved it
do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice one di

i m sorry for late comment
becoz my net con was not wrkng😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Aww Rey confessing his love for Taani in front of everyone was amazing plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

so here is part 3::: and thankx for all ur support...

Sharon: ha' bolo rey..

Rey: a..a... vo ta..ta..taani' taani ne' kuch kaha kya' kya boli vo'

Sharon: Rey' meri abhi taani se is bare me koi baat nahi hui'

Rey: per'.

Sharon: Rey u just relax' kuch nahi hoga vo ha hi kahege u don't worry'

Rey: yrr pr vo'( and Rey's phone rang')

Rey: yr its taani' kya karu uthau uska call..

Sharon: ha... dekho kya bol rahi hai'

Rey: ha ok...

Rey: hello...

Taani: hi rey'its taani...

Rey: (after a pause) ha bolo'

Taani: aap mujhe abhi mil sakte ho kya'

Rey: abhi..?? ummm' ok... kaha'

Taani: umm... Ghar pr'. Coffee'??

Rey: umm ok... me aata hu..

Taani: ok... see u...

Rey: yeah... bye... (and cut the phone..)

Sharon: kya bol rahi thi taani'

Rey: umm vo' she wanna meet me now'

Sharon: what now' but kaha kab kaise kyu'.

Rey: pata nahi' usne ghar bulaya hai'.

Sharon: wht' ghar' but swayam..

Rey: oo shit tum plz swayam ko engage rakhna tab tak me usse baat kar lunga'

Sharon: ok.. tum jao'

Rey: hmm.. by..

At taayam's home'

Door bell rings and one of the servent open the door'

Rey: taani kaha hai'

Servent: vo unke room me hai'

Rey: ok

Then servent goes and rey goes to taani's room

Rey: hey taani'!!

Taani: hi.. aap'.

Rey: umm' ha bolo kya kaaam tha tumhe mujhse'

Taani: (stands in fornt of her bad) umm vo kal jo vo me'

Rey: umm taani me uske liye tumhe koi force nahi karunga'

Taani: (taani turned and facing her bad) a nahi rey.. aap esa mat boliye' vo me bhi actully.. vo me...

Rey: taani'

Taani: rey I'I'I love u...

Rey: (rey comes and stands taani facing her back) really taani' tum..tum mujhse sachme..

Taani: (she turn toward rey facing him)I love u rey' I love u..

Rey just hug her tightly.. both's eyes were teary..

Rey: (broke the hug and) taani ek bar fir bolo na that u..u love me..plz taani

Taani: ya rey I love u..love u a lot..

On hearing this he kissed hers forehead than cheek'

Rey: I love u too taani'. (and hug her tightly')

After some time..they both sit near taani's bad on the flor' hand in hand just like the confession day

Rey: taani'

Taani: ha rey..

Rey: vo' a tumne mujhe yaha coffie pine bulaya tha but abhi tak' khairr.. tum vo' m so hapie today'

Taani: ha rey m also hapie today.. today is the best day of my life' or apki coffie.. vo me abhi le ke aati hu' aap rukiye..

Rey: aree' taani ruko yahi betho' coffie me baad me piunga'.

Taani: ohkk'

Just then rey's cell phone rings

Rey: a ek min taani'(he put his phone on loud speaker as taani also has to know whatthey are talking) hey sharon..

Sharon: hey kaha ho kitni der ho gayi' tum abhi kaha ho.. taani se baat hui kya boli vo'

Rey: sharon sharon sharon' ek min ruko' suno.. me abhi taani ke sath hi hu or hum sath me hai..ok

Sharon: kya' matlab tum abhi ghr par ho.. kaha..

Rey: ha taani ke room me'.

Sharon: what.. tum waha..

Rey: sharon'. Vo taani or me' v are together'

Sharon: what' sachme matlab vo maan gayi'

Rey: ha'

Sharon: wow rey awesome news.. m so hapiee.. taani ko phone do na'

Rey: sharon tum loud speaker per ho.. bolo'

Sharon: hey taani' m so hapie for u' tumhara dream pura ho gaya.. m so hapie..

Taani: ha sharon mera dream my pc'

Rey: what is pc'

Sharon: taani tumne bataya nahi kya rey ko.. that who is pc.. :p

Taani: nahi bhabi abhi time hi nahi mila'

Rey: aree'.. Koi mujhe to batao..

Sharon: wo pc matlab'.

Taani: prince charming..

Sharon: ha..

Rey: what.. or ye dream ka kya chakkar hai..

Sharon: vo tum taani se pucho mujhe kaam hai to I have to go'by..

Taarey: ok.. by'J

Rey: (cut the call) hmm to ye dream ka kya chakkar hai'

so guyss aaj itna hi yeh dreamm ka kya chakkar hai vo baad me batati hu byee...

Edited by praja010196 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Swaron married...Taarey r alrdy in lv!! God its so intrstng dr.1st chptr ws so nice...Do update sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
guyss me pm nahi kr pa rahi hu coz of some problem...😔
but i'll make sure ki jaise hi hota hai i'll pm u all...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
loved it dear.
do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

nice one di

i m sorry for late comment
becoz my net con was not wrkng😛


its ok dear no problem... and thanks...

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