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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

thanks a lot guys! love u all

yeah nothing much happened in that one night but yes some equations changed or are on the path to a change!

But in such a fast paced action thriller story, every moment is important...I cant say 2 days later stuff here...because somewhere someone is behind the girl and the cop...and someone is behind the clues...so have to go in this pace...

yes the college will bring in past memories but whether a love story will start full fledged at this point is a bit doubtful!

Some more secrets to come out...Sakshi's mission to get successful...may be after that

till then, there will be cute sweet scenes...a little of sparks here and there...hope it will be enjoyable and interesting for u the same way i do when i write it!

thanks again!

@Priya, i love the colored comment...loved it thanks!

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Awesome Update dida...

Wow!! Aisha ko bhi attack karne pe nikla tha... Thank god Rathod went with her...

Shriza part was also awesome!!!

And kya chupane ki jagah hai ... The college itself!!!

Nice!!

Please continue soon!!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Hey Vidzi, sorry for the late comment, but I was out all day.

Anyway this was a very well written chapter.

You have described each relationship so perfectly it wasn't hard to picture and understand each of their inner turmoils.

So we have Ayesha and Sameer, who may not say much but manage to communicate very well. They are perfect partners I think.

Shree and Liza, yep they may fight all the time but when it comes to team work or worry over another team member everything else takes back seat, what you wrote was perfect.

And Arjun and Sakshi...well there is not much to say there they too seem to have this connection with each other that has reached a comfortable level. Liked how he instantly understood her and how to handle her changing moods.

So now they may go back to the past as they go after the files. Looking forward to where you take us next.

Thanks for the PM.

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@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

hey di,

firstly thanks for replying to my post, appreciate the gesture❤️

and secondly, thanks for updating wrong number.. am bahut khush now(this is the only way i can write hindi😆)

anyways.. love the update.. really like how all the couples completely understand each other's silences..it's very admirable

hmmm.. presley college.. a trip into the past??? uhh, i wonder how that will goo down with sakshi and arjun... guess i'll just hve to wait and read!!

conti soon😊 and thnx for pm

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

just read it
it was awesome
sameer's concern for Aisha..
liza and shree's unique friendship
arjun and shakshi understanding..
it was all beautiully explained..
loved it..

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sunshine94

@sunshine94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

oops read yesterday commenting today,.,.,.

this was mindblowing...i mean it sent chills down my spine,,.,.,.

pehli baar tere ff se dar lag raha hai...,.,.

the way u xplnd with regarding ayesha rathore n that flat thing,,,, imean it was very sacry

waise arjun n sakshi still on the run,,,,

dis ff is very veryinteresting keep up the good work

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Superb update... so Sakshi is in real trouble...

So its back to past nw... hmmm continue soon

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

sorry vidya dii...commenting late

this ws a fully blended update

each nd every ETFian had a role in this one...

sam's silent concern is wat i loved th most in this update for our lady dabbang aisha...

our tom n jerry's (shree-liza) love hate relationship always draws my attention...

arjun and skshi scenes were also beautifully written...

overall i loved this updte

continue soon