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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late rply
the update was nice
thanks
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Vidya Di,
First,accept my sincere apologies,for commenting so lately.

It was really a beautiful update.
Loved Arjun's concern for Sakshi.
So,Sakshi is staying with Ayesha.
Hope,Ayesha doesnt fall in trouble.
Loved the song that u used,Di.
My favorite.
Thanks for such a beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally gone through the updates.Enjoyed it to the fullest.kehte hai na sher ko sawa sher mil jata hai,waise hi arjun ko jawab dene aa gai saakshi,Miss wrong no.Usne to shree ko bhi fail kar diya.bechara usko track hi nai kar paa raha hai.Smart move saakshi dear😉.Rathod-Aisha's jwellery shop scene was too gud.Shree-Liza's nokjhok too gud😆.Aisha helping saakski,dats intresting.Lastly arjun missing Miss wrong no.&it seems saakski arjun ko bahot closely janti hai.Waiting for the next move of Miss wrong no.vidya😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update di

arjun ko sakhi ki fiqr ho rahi he nice

and sameer ko ayesha ki ki vo bata kar nahi gaye wow di love story ko ek sath hi start kiya hai

pls pls pls update soon and tnx for pm di
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Posted: 12 years ago
Commenting on last two parts

Oh it was superb!
Arjun caught hold of her but still chehre ka didaar nhi hua...
Aur ye kya!😲 Arjun got shot saving her
Aur aapne pheka ek aur twist...Sakshi is being helped by none other than Aisha. This is interesting.
Ooh! Mazaa aane wala hai...😛

Update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Arakshians...back with a part... pls read and reply...

errors ho toh maaf kardena...

Thanks for liking and commenting on it! ur comments is my driving force...thanks a ton!

Part 8A:

She speaks up, "sorry Arjun, main aapse baat karna chahthi hoom par I cant call you now...I hope that you are fine..."

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He didn't know why he was so concerned for a stranger girl, someone whom he hadn't even seen yet but even then, her being safe wherever she was, became his only concern now...she bothered him big time so far and now he was desperate to see her once, talk to her once...

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ETF office...

Aisha and Shree are working on something...

Shree slowly voices, "Aisha, Rathod sir ne kya kaha?"

Aisha: kya kaha matlab??

Shree: Liza ne kaha ke woh kuch naaraaz teh...matlab tum late aayi na??

Aisha: [raising her eyebrows] accha...par mujhse kuch nahi kaha...He wanted that case details soon...usi ke baarein mein pooch rahe teh...aur kuch bhi nahi kaha...

Shree quietly went back to his work after nodding to it...

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After a few moments...Shree called out to her excitedly...

"Aisha, woh ladki jaisi bhi ho lagthi toh bohat acchi hai...[dreamily] she is damn beautiful!

Aisha mindlessly voiced out not even looking up from her work "haan patha hai..."

Shree rolled his eyes suspiciously, "kaise??"

Aisha soon snapped out and did her bit of damage control..."tumne woh photo dikhaaya tha na?"

Shree voices out in a confused tone, "maine?? Dikhaaya tha kya? Haan shaayad...par mujhe yaad nahi hai..."

Aisha switches topic instantly and enquires, "tumne woh photo Arjun sir ko dikhaaya??"

Shree: nahi...unnone iss baare mein kuch poocha hi nahi...aur waise bhi photo toh by chance aaj subah mili thi...uss college ke alumini records mein thi...dekha toh dekthe hi reh gaya yaar!

Aisha grins and taunts him before he could get back to the topic of how she saw Sakshi's photo, "accha...tumhe itni pasand aayi woh?"

Another sharp voice spoke up from behind them before she could reply..."Specky Sen ko kaun pasand aagayi Aisha?"

Shree and Aisha looked around and Shree muttered "aagayi meri life ki chudail..."

Aisha saw Shree's mixed expressions and decided to play along, "Shree tumhe miss kar raha tha Liza...tum dho din keliye kya gayi, Shree bohat low aur lonely hogaya!...tumaare photo se hi baatein karne laga..."

Liza grinned and raised her eye brows, " really?? Wow so cute Specky!!...waise meri photo se kya baatein kar rahe teh?"

Aisha didn't give him a chance to respond, "baatein kya?? Woh toh ghaana gaa raha tha...woh kya ghaana tha Shree...haan SRK ke...zara tasveer se tu nikhal ke saamne aaa meri mehbooba...haan wahi song!"

Liza dramatically replies winking naughtily, "tumne bulaaya aur lo main aagayi..."

Shree glares at Aisha for that mess up and then looks at Liza...again her bridal form appears in front of his eyes and he could visualize her running towards him in slow motion singing that song..."

"Tadap Kar Aayegi Woh
Tujhe Mil Jaayegi Woh
Teri Mehbooba"

He snaps out and replies, "ab bas ki karo Aisha...aur mattha pakaao...[turning to Liza and voices sarcastically]...haan Liza, main tumaare hi baatein kar raha tha...Aisha ko 'Ek thi Dhayan' ki kahaani batha raha tha...[grins] matlab tumaari kahani..."

Liza frowns at that playfully and picks up a paper weight from the nearby table and tosses towards him...Luckily, he catches it perfectly saving his face, his specs and also his laptop!

Shree yells out..."Liza...yeh kya kar rahi ho?...dekha, you are proving the evil within you time and again!"

Liza: [flaring up equally] aur tum??? Tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho specky...agar main dhayan hoom toh tum bhi vampire ho vampire...

Aisha concluded their conversation grinning..."and you both make the most perfect couple...ek forensic dhayan aur ek techie vampire...[alternating her looks between the duo]...picture perfect pairing hai!" [winks at Shree]

Shree glares at Aisha with a meaning "you aren't helping me one bit Aisha!"

Aisha grins at both of them while Liza poses an angry face at Shree and storms into the lab!

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Later that night...Aisha's apartment...

Sakshi was waiting for Aisha to come back to get the charger and also to ask her about Arjun...As expected, Aisha returned quite late but she waited...Aisha updated her on Arjun's health and both didn't ponder much into the why's and what's of that...

Aisha could see Sakshi's concern for Arjun but she didn't want to directly question her about the reason for that...Aisha knew that some things were good to be kept under wraps...and to be let out only if really required! Aisha was herself a closed book and always preferred to keep the personal matters to oneself! So she respected the other person's privacy and always gave them their space!

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Aisha had met Sakshi a while back, in the middle of an undercover mission...Indirectly,Sakshi had helped Aisha at that time in flushing out certain details about a drug mafia group...but their relationship were strictly professional and there wasn't any personal interaction then...not even friendship...a very platonic yet casual relationship happened...but both women had respect for each other and admired one another for the dedicated work they were into and the daring self that they possessed!

When Sakshi had started calling Arjun and also helped ETF under the name of wrong number, Aisha had no clue that it was that same old Sakshi behind that facade...but then when Arjun blow off her cover and her name came out in the light, Aisha confirmed that it was the same Sakshi Anand!

Both the times, Sakshi had only immensely helped Aisha and ETF...So Aisha couldn't ignore Sakshi's request for a favour...and also her plead to keep it a secret for some more time...Though Aisha felt that she was fooling her team, she knew that they would understand her point of view when the truth comes out eventually...Moreover, if Aisha didn't help her, she might get lost from their hands again and it might prove to her life as well...So Aisha decided to keep her under her own wings!

Sakshi's real motive behind all this nor her plans wasn't clear to Aisha but one thing she was sure of...Sakshi's intentions could never be bad...She was a noble soul and good at heart!

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Sakshi tossed in her bed that night...her hands itched to make a call to him...She had got her mobile charged as well but she switched it off and put it under her bed...Calling him from Aisha's place could land Aisha in trouble...

She decided that she would go and check on him next morning...

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Early next morning...Arjun felt someone near him...he had been in deep sleep due to the medicines...His eye lids felt heavy but he managed to open them slightly and there was none near him...

But he saw a blurred image of someone in white right near the door...He enquired "kaun hai?"

A female voice replied as she opened the door to walk out, "Duty doctor Mr Arjun...!"

Was it a familiarity in that voice? But he couldn't comprehend anything much...She left by then...

Sakshi had worn white on purpose to escape just in case he woke up and also tried to change her voice a bit when she replied to him...She was near him for sometime while he was in deep sleep...She had put the fresh flowers she brought along in the empty vase that adorned the side table...and placed a "Get well soon" card on it...

She had checked with the nurse about his status before coming to his room and also got a hint from her that he was on sedation and would be in deep sleep...The young lady nurse was eager to let out details to the patient's GF...Coincidently, the nurse was in love too and she was impressed with the fairy tale love story of the ACP and a bubbly girl that Sakshi had managed to cook up instantly for her! Taking the nurse into her hands was like a child's play for her!!

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A little later, the nurse came in to give him his medicines...

"aap ne breakfast kar li na?"

She looks around and sees the plate and the tea glass empty... and understood that he had it, "accha...kar li...toh yeh lijiye medicines..."

A little before just as he had got up, Arjun was actually confused to see the breakfast served and his favourite cutting chai ready on the table...he thought someone from the team had come early even before he woke up and left without disturbing him...

He enquired to the nurse "mere team se koyi baahar hai kya?"

Nurse: nahi toh...woh sab kal raat chale gaye...ab tak koyi nahi aaya...

Arjun: [pointing to the plate and glass] phir yeh sab kaun...

Nurse: [snapping him short, rolling her eyes] shaayad aapki GF lekar aayi hogi...aur yeh flowers bhi...aapne unne dekha nahi??

Arjun: nahi...

Nurse: oh...woh subah subah aayi...aur shaayad aapke uttne se pehle chali gayi!

The nurse left soon after he took his medicines...

Arjun was a bit disappointed that she left again without meeting him...He leaned sideways and picked the card from the flowers..."Get well soon" he told to himself shaking his head in disbelief of how a girl could play around with him so much and drive him to such an extreme!

Now he was sure that it was Sakshi who had posed as the duty doctor and that was the reason for the familiarity he had felt while talking to her...

Despite of all this, he didn't show that he missed her call and had an urge to meet her and talk to her...he hid all those urges behind a false pretence of "I don't care a damn" and "Whatever" arrogant attitude!

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A day passes by...Shree, Chotu, Aisha and Rathod took turns and visited Arjun during the day...He wasn't anyways resting...he was helping them in the new case that landed that very morning...

Case details: A man died after falling from the city fly over...it looked like a suicide with the details in the first information report but Arjun was sure that there was more to it...the man's wife and his teenage daughter were left orphaned by the sudden death of the head of the family...it was a heart shattering case!

But ETF was determined to punish whoever was behind it...

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Arjun was supposed to get discharged that evening but the doctor suggested that he stays there for a day more as his wound was still sore...and negligence could lead to complications and infections...Arjun realized that the doctor was right and took his advice...Anyways, the lodge or the hospital made no difference to him! And he could work from here as well...So he didn't mind staying there for a day!

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Next morning...Arjun woke up quite early hoping that he would catch her this time but she proved smarter...She didn't come but something else surprised him...

Aisha landed early with his breakfast...She told him that the team had decided to take turns and that day's breakfast time was her turn!

He had no reasons not to believe that as there was no clue to even think that Sakshi could have sent Aisha there...Arjun didn't have the slightest hint that the two women could be connected!

Aisha left soon after wishing him a good day and asking him to take care...

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Arjun laid back on the bed, twirling his pen trying to find clues about the case...of course Miss wrong number lingered somewhere at the back of his mind...

He had to confirm something regarding the case...he had asked Aisha to call him with that details but she hadn't called yet...So he tried calling her but she didn't pick the call...

He calls ETF office and Shree tells him that Aisha hadn't come in yet...

Arjun wonders where the hell she was and then tries her landline...Ring went on for quite some time and then was picked up...

"Hello..." came the soft female reply from the other end...

Arjun cut the call at the same instant without replying back...it wasn't Aisha...and his 6th sense and intuitions told him something else...only one other name flashed in his mind...of course how could he forget her voice...it was her...Miss wrong number...

But he was confused...Sakshi, Aisha ke ghar mein?? Was he sure of her voice?? Yes of course...it was indeed her...but how???

He had to know...there was no way he could rest without getting to the roots of it...he had to...he just had to...he didn't think twice...he called for the nurse and asked her to get him discharged...Though the doctor tried hard to brainwash him, he didn't relent...

In half an hour, he was zooming towards Aisha's apartment...

[To be continued]

so how was it??? pls do reply...yeah its a roller coaster ride but i guess this it the way it will find its way...tension nahi...we will surely get them to meet soon! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Me first

Now who is in more trouble - Ayesha or Sakshi ??😉
How can anything miss our Dear Arjun ji..
Brilliant di ...completely ..the way u r taking the story ..mast hai
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome again... This Sakhshi is damn clever ... Har baar ACP Rawtey ko chakma de jaati hai... And Arjun Aisha ke ghar pahunch giya hai Kya woh Iss baar Sakhshi ko pakdne mein kamyab ho payega... Haye Vidya g jaldi update karna plzzz... I can't wait ... Orr yeh Kya sweety no precap :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!

Beautifully written, yet again..

The backstory to Aisha-Sakshi was indeed well conceived.. I'm sure they'll understand Aisha's reasons for doing it..

Arjun Ji.. Maan bhi lo that 'You care!' 😳
Aha.. So abhi se cutting chai ke doses huh? Trying to impress him.. Interesting.. 😛
And the best bit is Arjun wasn't one bit uncomfortable when the nurse referred to her as his GF.. 😆😉

My my!! Shree-Liza-Aisha was darn hilarious.. I could actually imagine her running towards him in slow motion.. 🤣

Vidzi, why do I feel that Sakshi and Arjun go way back in time.. Probably same college, is it? Well I'll wait for you to reveal more.. 😉😆

Tch tch.. Sakshi.. Call kyun receive kiya??! But good, finally, 'Jab we met-2'

Aur mat tarsao behna, mila do ab inhe.. 😉😳😃

Thanks for the PM!.
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor Aisha
now caught red handed
bhagwanji hi bachae ab use acp arjun rawte se

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