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osina

@gal.angel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

juz beautiful n emotional update

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Like i said i love this story frm the time i read the 1st part

am so in the story...cnt stop myself reading it again and again

love every character...the way you describe them...

Sweetness of swayam cuteness of rivaan...its so so so amazing..

And then the friendship love relation of rey and kria...its just awesomeee

the way they talk...behave with each other...i mean everything..

And not to forgot...the dialogues you wrote were just bang on

beautifully written..amazing usage of words

loved it to the core...i know the update was really a big one...bt still being a greedy reader i am...
Ahh it ended so soon

and Damn this cliffhangers of yours...the only thing i hate...

Plz update soon...
Pretty plz na...

Thanx for the pm

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

awesome...finally kriya told rey that she loves him...pls update soon... i know u love cliffhangers...

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

AWESOME

AMAZING

LOVED IT

REY HIMSELF WENT TO PICK HER UP

KRIYAANSH BONDING

KRIYAANSH FEELINGS TOWARDS EACH OTHER

EVERYTHING WAS FLAWLESS

KRIA'S CONFESSION

UPDATE SOON :)

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Am totally in love with this part!

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Superb update, enjoyed it.

Do continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

AAA... Manuu... 🤗 ... I want this FF like anything... Uts jst 2 chapters old..and even these 2 chapters has created havoc inside me.. I jst lovee this story like anything..
Cmng to ur update...it was just amazinggg...i mean..really it ws...

Kria is finally in mumbai..finally Kriyaansh together...its so sweet tht even aftr 6 years they understand each othr jst like before.. 😳

Rey's emotions.. The way he ws litrelly pleading her to be with him always... Kria understanding him like always.. Still being helpless...

The way u've described all the emotions na...its jst... Amazinggg

Finally... Kria confessed... I womder wat wil happen of Rey will get to knw abt Rivaan... Anyways eagerlyyy waiting for d next chappy...

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Superb :-) everything was described so beautifully

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star94

@star94

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Its just superb. Can't get enough of it. Update sooner please.

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Do i really have to say that i am in love with this story... its just 2 parts... but the way u had described even the small things so beautifully ... Amazing

kriya feeling guilty... i really wonder what will happen when rey will know about rivaan... he would be angry or will understand the situation...

and the line where he said that he want somebody to carry his baby.. something like that... my heart skip a beat... one sec i thought that he knew everything...

so kriya confessed her love for him... now i desperately what to know rey's reaction ...

eagerly waiting for next part... update soon as possible..

thnx for pm