~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ New thread link posted - Page 10

hayee!! maniaa look what u've done to us only through 2 chapters 😆
loveedd itt!! love all ur works but this one sounds like it's surely going to be a hitt, not that ur other works aren't but just like d2trol i will be attatched to this one aswel 😊
Already loving this and the way its going..
the name is just like woww!! 'return to paradise' they surely are in paradise when they are together!
And the banner is toh like superbb!! lovee it! kisney banaya?
Wow mania yeh toh sirf 2 chapters hai patta nai mere kya haal hogaa on the next chapters 😆
Keep up the greaatt work!! update soonn!! and do pm 😊

Both the updates were Fab
cont soon

superb update

Hey ...
The part was fantastic ...
Loved every bit of it ...
Amazing work ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Wow! This was a beautiful, emotional scene. Seriously, gorgeous! :D

You've worked on it ravishingly Mania, and believe me, you nailed it. It was so soothing and just like it would be in real, and it touched my heart. It's too good to be true, but then you know, you create wonders in here.

Beautiful one, and you know, this is my favorite work written by you, but adamantly after The Match Makers, which you need to update, by the way 😆

All your works are wonders mate, and are always, always a treat to read, and soothe you from within. But the worst part, are these cliffhangers. I want to know, how will Rey react to this, and how soon does he get to know about Rivaan, really, please!

So, my dear mate, please continue sooner, and get me off this cliff.

Love.

Thank You so much Nivi 🤗 Can u call u this na?? I know I can 😆
I m so whelmed to get such a positive response

You complained about the cliffhangers
sowie sweety that's simply me 😉
But dun worry your queries will be entertained timely 😃

Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha

hayee!! maniaa look what u've done to us only through 2 chapters 😆
loveedd itt!! love all ur works but this one sounds like it's surely going to be a hitt, not that ur other works aren't but just like d2trol i will be attatched to this one aswel 😊
Already loving this and the way its going..
the name is just like woww!! 'return to paradise' they surely are in paradise when they are together!
And the banner is toh like superbb!! lovee it! kisney banaya?
Wow mania yeh toh sirf 2 chapters hai patta nai mere kya haal hogaa on the next chapters 😆
Keep up the greaatt work!! update soonn!! and do pm 😊

Thank you so much Shelly 🤗
Ye banner Aditi a.k.a Nxt_rockstar ne banaya hai
look below the banner 😃

res

Loved the update, a lot.

ye kya tha?? update toh mast tha seriously I loved it!!!

shivam!!! I hate this creature ... and precap mei kya tha??? uss idiot ko kyun rey ko kyun nahi ...mummmaa!!!


mannu I swear me gussa on u !!😆